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Spandana

@sptrno

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Posted: 8 years ago

#661

Awww so heart-touching beautiful amazing as always dear so love it...please write as many chapters possible...please don't stop yaar...Reading & Re-reading your stories gives so much peace happiness & positivity so please keep writing dear...Thank you so much

Take care dear

Lots of love hugs,

Spandana

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phoenix_edkv

@phoenix_edkv

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#662

You want to wrap up the story. Like seriously, do you even know how much I like this. I have been waiting for your update like anything. So just load this into your mind Sanjh di that you are not going to discontinue this. Please... please.. Please.

Coming to the update, Shraman's relationship is so tangled.

Awe I'm so sad for Shravan. I'm gonna kill those salesgirls and Alisha, how dare she to talk like that.😡. inke relationship mein kitne problems hai yaar. And Sumo kanaan gayi??? Shravan has to go and find her now and he has to apologise too. Sumo ki to koi galti nahi hai. And what is that one thing he didn't share with her.

Please is baar jaldi update karo. Thanks for the pm.

Love

Madhu

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Naamika

@Naamika

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#663

HEY SAANJH! Thank you so so much for continuing the story. God plz saanjh ko writing ka kida zorse kaate.

Poor shravan! God why this alisha have to poke her nose everytime. I'm sure if sumo had heard whatever alisha said usne toh pakka alisha ki naak tod deni thi but unfortunately use kuch nahi pata here she is again heartbroken. But I know you'll make everything alright.😃

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adityasingh.246

@adityasingh.246

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#664

An amazing update ..The way you bring both of their thoughts out is lovely.. His predicament,sumo's fear even in sleep that shravan would leave her,his inner turmoil,she laying down her head on his shoulder and not leaving him .. such beautiful moments..👍🏼Shravan's outburst really gave goosebumps,he did cross the line .. 👏

Shravan's insecurity is very well understood but he needs to be strong enough ..shravan shouldn't hide things from her and talk out to her about his fears and not destroy such a beautiful relationship in doubts .. Sumo being a girl faced her family and society and put love above physical aspects , time and again she reassured that she won't let him down and she loves him and wanna see him recover completely ..But man Shravan is insane , he is breaking her again and again,hurting her when she already told him that he is her life,love and means everything as she is an orphan .. how can he not see her love and doubt it at words of malice by a person who left him at 1st chance .. How can he question her love for him in jealousy with aditya by insulting her character and her true love .. this is really hurting , for true love and such girls are rare to find .. I hope he doesn't push her away forever and lose her coz there's a limit to which even elasticity remains and then breaks .. I wish he finds her before its too late ..😭

Sorry for such a long comment .. couldn't hold back ..and I'm in love with this story ❤️ and ya don't end it so soon plzzz..

Edited by adityasingh.246 - 8 years ago

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sibghat

@sibghat

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#665

Like all ways awsome and amazing😊 . I cannot wait for the next update😉😉. Please update soon😛

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#666

Originally posted by: Namiksfan
Bunny🤗(sorry i am already obsessed with your nickname) tune finally update kar diya *happy dance* but ye kya tha omg!!!😡 *shocked and angry* but you are not finishing it *sighs happily thanking god* dekh tu Teri vajah se kitne confusions face karne padte h...happy fir sad fir happy ugh!!! But koi ni...tujhe pata h i have full faith in u ...i know u'll make everything good and dare u talk about finishing it...janti h na gundi hu me😎 ok isse zyada drama jhel nahi paegi. ..haina?🤣 i know...
Love yaa. ..update soon...also me first yayaaa
Gundi 😊

Hey Dolly... You can call me Bunny... Most of my friends do! Don't be dissapointed, as they say... Jo bhi hota hai achche ke liye hota hai... And tu isse zyada drama karti hai...😆 Woh mujhe pata hai haan.. And you know na how much I love your dramas! Will try to update soon. Love ya my gundi. 🤗

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#667

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb
You can't think of ending this seriously,it's at its high point right now and I would love to see how you make both of them understand each other's point of view, so many things to explore yet ! Can't wait for the next update !
Take care !

Was thinking to end it... But suddenly all the new ideas attacked my brain... So this is not gonna end any sooner. They will eventually get along.. And how.. That will be the tough one. But trying hard not to disappoint you all!

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#668

Originally posted by: komal2002
Di your writing skills are amazing... You know what mujhe lagta hai apki na tuition classes open Karen chahiye jisme sap bacho ko story writing Sikha sakti ho.. This part was so amazing but at last fir se ShraMan ke beech jaghda hogaya air vu bhi ush Aditya ke vajah se...and at last Suman kahin MIL Nahi Rahi... Very eagerly waiting to know what will happen further... Waiting for the next part.. Update soon... And yeah thanks for mentioning me love you ...but my name is Riya not komal it's my username...

Hey riya... Ab yeh kuch zyada nahi ho gaya... Ek aur drama queen! Dolly you have serious competition here okay..better beware! Whatever, thank you my utawli panchi... I am very happy that you like this ff so much. Oh yes, I am sorry that I thought your name is Komal! But however, I have corrected my mistake.

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#669

Originally posted by: minho
Wow nice update 👏 pls continue soon

Kriti

Thank you Kriti, it means a lot, trust me.

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#670

Originally posted by: deltadawn
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Ladki tumhara dimaag itna complicated kyu hain Shraman ke relationship ko lekar... but yeah I have to agree this is absolutely correct what would have gone through Shravan's mind..

I have no idea... But my dimag becomes simpler while writing OSs...

He cannot accept himself the way he is... so no matter how much he wants her in his life..he will keep pushing her away because he will keep comparing their physical aspects... I am thinking the thing he was thinking in the disc was also a "physical" aspect... in a way.

That you will know soon..

You have the guy's brain dissected on a table somewhere around your room?

No in my brain I guess...

Where is Sumo? Please don't say that she will get married as she had dhamkaoed him !!

She can with the way you have built that girls character... uff ye suspense..

I hope not... But might be... Who knows!

Pleaase update soon...I am sick no pretty please..😳 I am using this on everyone around me for 2 days you are my latest victim😆

Hope you are well now.. So hope to update by 2-3 days...

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