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Namiksfan thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Bunny🤗(sorry i am already obsessed with your nickname) tune finally update kar diya *happy dance* but ye kya tha omg!!!😡 *shocked and angry* but you are not finishing it *sighs happily thanking god* dekh tu Teri vajah se kitne confusions face karne padte h...happy fir sad fir happy ugh!!! But koi ni...tujhe pata h i have full faith in u ...i know u'll make everything good and dare u talk about finishing it...janti h na gundi hu me😎 ok isse zyada drama jhel nahi paegi. ..haina?🤣 i know...
Love yaa. ..update soon...also me first yayaaa
Gundi 😊
Edited by Namiksfan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
You can't think of ending this seriously,it's at its high point right now and I would love to see how you make both of them understand each other's point of view, so many things to explore yet ! Can't wait for the next update !
Take care !
Edited by KitkitMkb - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Di your writing skills are amazing... You know what mujhe lagta hai apki na tuition classes open Karen chahiye jisme sap bacho ko story writing Sikha sakti ho.. This part was so amazing but at last fir se ShraMan ke beech jaghda hogaya air vu bhi ush Aditya ke vajah se...and at last Suman kahin MIL Nahi Rahi... Very eagerly waiting to know what will happen further... Waiting for the next part.. Update soon... And yeah thanks for mentioning me love you ...but my name is Riya not komal it's my username...
Edited by komal2002 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow nice update 👏 pls continue soon



Kriti
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ladki tumhara dimaag itna complicated kyu hain Shraman ke relationship ko lekar... but yeah I have to agree this is absolutely correct what would have gone through Shravan's mind..

He cannot accept himself the way he is... so no matter how much he wants her in his life..he will keep pushing her away because he will keep comparing their physical aspects... I am thinking the thing he was thinking in the disc was also a "physical" aspect... in a way.

You have the guy's brain dissected on a table somewhere around your room?

Where is Sumo? Please don't say that she will get married as she had dhamkaoed him !!

She can with the way you have built that girls character... uff ye suspense..

Pleaase update soon...I am sick no pretty please..😳 I am using this on everyone around me for 2 days you are my latest victim😆
Edited by deltadawn - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh God !! am feeling very sad for shravan😭. he is going through so much. I mean, he is not well, physically not fit, at this time he will definitely have more mood swings and depression. above all those comments of public or aditya or alisha is not helping him but reminding him of his disability. But what's wrong with suman. She should be his rock support. when she is interested in disc and dance with aditya for one long hour without thinking about shravan, why should she bring him in the first place😡. How did she forget that he does not deserve to feel lonely😡. She can better hang around with aditya all day. After all he is behind her always as if there is no else existing in the world😡
I cant believe just because shravan let her enjoy at the disc, she will take him for granted and forget him.

and this alisha, she is getting on nerves every time. if she cant be guilty for shravan, why cant she leave him be at peace. But again, if our sumo madam, was not enjoying with Aditya rather be with shravan, then that evil girl would not have got a chance.

I now feel, its better that shravan pushed her away. Let her be with Aditya itself. and here without aditya's interference, without witnessing public's teasing, without fighting inner turmoil about sumo, shravan can get cured. Hope he is not far from recovery.

See, how your writing made me blabber forgetting that this is again a fiction. thanks to you😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update... Very well written
I was feeling so bad for shravan because of those sales girls Nd Alisha but after shravan's stupidity I feel like slapping him..
Poor Sumo... Hope shravan finds her soon Nd corrects his mistakes...
Waiting for next update
Please continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Haaye. ..thappad maar diya😕..

I did notice that it was Shravan who asked her to go and dance. .I still feel that all this might be his plan. .let's see.
By the way. ..I wonder why was it so important for Sumo to go to a disc. ..when she knew that he wouldn't be able to dance. ..

Sometimes in a bid to be normal with someone with physical disabilities. ..we tend to cross the line and be insensitive to their diability. ..this was actually told to me by a colleague who was on a wheelchair. .happened to remember her in this context.

Fabulous update as usual. ..please don't keep us hanging for long!

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Posted: 8 years ago
This man is gone crazy with his in capabilities & insecurities.. Always something he will find her to hurt... Otherwise who will use such words to his fiancee... Top of that Alisha gaav pe namak chidakne ke liye usse bhi wohi ana tha... He actually needed one tight slap.. Now where this Sumo disappeared early in the morning... I hope she won't take some extreme step for that Shravan has to repent his whole life...
Thanks for PM & Nice update. .

Vinu
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Posted: 8 years ago
i can understand shravans insecurities being physically unstable but he went beyond limits...sumo ne thappad mara grt👏
and that chip alisha...and again u created suspense dear...what he is hiding from sumo?😲...really curious...aur sumo kaha gayasb ho gayi 😕
amazing update...eagerly waiting for next chap plz update soon

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