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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#671

Originally posted by: dhanyata
Oh God !! am feeling very sad for shravan😭. he is going through so much. I mean, he is not well, physically not fit, at this time he will definitely have more mood swings and depression. above all those comments of public or aditya or alisha is not helping him but reminding him of his disability. But what's wrong with suman. She should be his rock support. when she is interested in disc and dance with aditya for one long hour without thinking about shravan, why should she bring him in the first place😡. How did she forget that he does not deserve to feel lonely😡. She can better hang around with aditya all day. After all he is behind her always as if there is no else existing in the world😡
I cant believe just because shravan let her enjoy at the disc, she will take him for granted and forget him.

and this alisha, she is getting on nerves every time. if she cant be guilty for shravan, why cant she leave him be at peace. But again, if our sumo madam, was not enjoying with Aditya rather be with shravan, then that evil girl would not have got a chance.

I now feel, its better that shravan pushed her away. Let her be with Aditya itself. and here without aditya's interference, without witnessing public's teasing, without fighting inner turmoil about sumo, shravan can get cured. Hope he is not far from recovery.

See, how your writing made me blabber forgetting that this is again a fiction. thanks to you😃

Hey Dhanyata, first of all thank you for commenting. Yes, circumstances and people are not in Shravan's favor! So he is reacting that way! And yes Sumo, she is a normal girl, girls of her age do enjoy! And you know, sometimes we do take pepole who we love for granted. Same is here, but you know what they say, if you are going to have something bad, destiny just prepare the path! So she didn't even think, that Shravan would react like this! And yes, she loves him.. But that doesn't mean, she couldn't have her own life right! So the thing is, both are right from their own perspective! But they have to work out on the aspect of being right together. Shravan will be on his feet soon like real soon

And please always feel free to make comments as longer as you want! It just gives me immense happiness and satisfaction of being a writer.

Edited by Itssanjh - 8 years ago

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#672

Originally posted by: Jerry2308
Amazing update... Very well written
I was feeling so bad for shravan because of those sales girls Nd Alisha but after shravan's stupidity I feel like slapping him..
Poor Sumo... Hope shravan finds her soon Nd corrects his mistakes...
Waiting for next update
Please continue soon

Thank you so much... Will update soon...

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Sunain

@Sunain

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Posted: 8 years ago

#673

JUJU!!!🤗

Shorry for being this late😕

Read last three chaps in one go...so unressing thm😳

CHAPTER 14

Juju...😲

That was hell emotional😭

The part when he asked her to leave him...a sharp pain erupted in my heart and i literally cudnt stop my tears.

He did tht just bcoz he thinks hez not apt for her and wont be able to give her Happiness and love she desrves but in actual he really dosent knw how much she wants him and leaving him wud be like killing herself and her life with him wud be joyless all she wud become is a zombie.

The porch Kiss held so much fervency.It clearly showed how much he wants her and loves her.

Tht part was Beautifully Penned!❤️

He himself dosent want to leave her but his physical state dosent allow him to be selfish..thts wht he thinks.

But i believe Sumo itni asani say peecha chornay wali nhi as she Knws her Shravan insideout!😛

This one was a heart aching one🥺

But u penned it Brilliantly!👏

CHAPTER 15

M so speechless...😭

Love can be ur strength and can also be ur weakness if ur Love becomes ur weakness then know u'll lose every battle of ur life.And if it becomes ur strength thn nothing can make u budge from doing whts rite and helps fight every demon heading you.

Shravan just cant stop thinking about is incapibilities and thus decided to lose her..how foolish of him as he himself cant even breath a single sec.

Suman's outburst bout getting married and loving someone else was 👏 Shravan needed a lil taste of his own medicine.

Thn the "Fark nhi parta" part...⭐️

Sumo close to nervous breakdown...not even surprised i mean wht else can u expect from her the girl who only lost her loved ones in her life was now going to lose her reason of esistance her love.Again...first her parents now her soul partner.so debastating for her.

Suman just cant affford to get hurt like tht once again or else she'll broke down into gaziilion unmendable pieces.

Thank God he realised on time tht he cudnt survive without her and won her back.

The kiss was engaging😳

Loved it!

U did a Tremendous Job!...no dout!😉

CHAPTER 16

Now this part made me hell curious😃

Shravan has something to tell sumo😲...i hope he didnt got too intimate with Alisha😕i hope u got wht i meant🤢

Shravan just needs ro knw n umderstand tht love or mairrage is not just being physical its lot more thn tht and there nothimg like hez never gonna be fine he will be and by Sumo's presence and his willpower.All he has to do is have faith in himself and his love.

Alisha...tht Bit**😡...did it all intentionally just to make him more concious...and sadly won

When he said her

"I am sure main jo kuch bhi nhi kar paon ga...Adi hoga tumhare liye..."

I felt so digusted n the slap was well deserved😳mein kheti hon ek meri taraf say bhi laga deni chahiyay thi😡

Sumo missing...ohh thts intuging😃

Cant wait to knw wht happens ahead how he'll face her and finds her. n wht hez hiding from her...so curious to knw😳😆

Plz update soonish😉

Tadaa!!🥳

Woah...Juju..tht was comendble...hell Stupendously Penned!

The way u narrated Shravan's dellima and Sumo's agony...it was Mindblowing!

U killed it indeed!👏

Or ya kya mein sun rahi hoon...u were planning to wrap up the story😲...like srsly...have you gone insane...humaray baray mein tu soocho humara kya hoga...how u even dare to bring such a thought in ur dumb head😡(which is actually not tht dumb as itni Fantablous updates jo deti ho😳)mein phelay hi keh rahi hon mjhy kun se kum das pendra aur chaps tu chahiyay hi chahiyay...Is tht clear...if not thn make it!

Wel the truth is m so into ur story tht i was having the fear of it getting end from a very long time and i really dont want such an amzing story to end so soon so plz kuch time kay leay apnay dimag say wrapup a plan demolish kardo tabtak i'll mentlly prepare myself.

I knw i sound insane n m so sorry for tht.

Plz do update soon and once again for being this late!

Love ya🤗

Take Care!

Lalchi❤️

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#674

Originally posted by: reshmanair356
Haaye. ..thappad maar diya😕..

I did notice that it was Shravan who asked her to go and dance. .I still feel that all this might be his plan. .let's see.
By the way. ..I wonder why was it so important for Sumo to go to a disc. ..when she knew that he wouldn't be able to dance. ..

Sometimes in a bid to be normal with someone with physical disabilities. ..we tend to cross the line and be insensitive to their diability. ..this was actually told to me by a colleague who was on a wheelchair. .happened to remember her in this context.

Fabulous update as usual. ..please don't keep us hanging for long!

Hey Reshma...

No..it was not a plan. he was really trying to cope with the situation. but because of Alisha and the other girls he just reacted. And yes, Sumo...woh kehete hai na jab kuch buda hona hota hai tab people just react without thinking. Here is same too. And yes your colleague told you the right thing. Sumo didn't think...that it cold offend Shravan.

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#675

Originally posted by: vimikrao
This man is gone crazy with his in capabilities & insecurities.. Always something he will find her to hurt... Otherwise who will use such words to his fiancee... Top of that Alisha gaav pe namak chidakne ke liye usse bhi wohi ana tha... He actually needed one tight slap.. Now where this Sumo disappeared early in the morning... I hope she won't take some extreme step for that Shravan has to repent his whole life...
Thanks for PM & Nice update. .

Vinu

Alisha ka to kam hi hai...jale pe namak chidakna...let's see aage kya hota hai...thank you so much for commenting.

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#676

Originally posted by: pritiyerne
i can understand shravans insecurities being physically unstable but he went beyond limits...sumo ne thappad mara grt👏
and that chip alisha...and again u created suspense dear...what he is hiding from sumo?😲...really curious...aur sumo kaha gayasb ho gayi 😕
amazing update...eagerly waiting for next chap plz update soon

Hey Priti,

you will get to know eventually..really glad that you liked it...will update soon.

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#677

Originally posted by: LubSha
Hey Sanjh,
Wow this was amazing. I know it was not what we want but my heart was beating faster when I was reading this. This was how much I was into your story. 👏 I thought Sumo would agree to extent the wedding after what happened last time, but I guess this was in your mind for them. They definitely need a break, specially Shravan. Alisha added fuel to the fire he was suppressing. He need to fight his insecurities, what he said to Sumo, he definitely crossed the line. I guess now Sumo will back out of the wedding. One thing is commendable that you described everything really well. BAS ab Dr. Sanjh banke Shravan Ko poori tarah se theekh kar do. Can't wait to see what's in your mind to move this story forward. Don't you decide to end.😛

Lubna.

Hey Lubna,

thank you so much for commenting. Yes shravan had gone out of limit. but whatever happens happen for good, and yes shravan will be on his feet soon.

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#678

Originally posted by: pinky.padda
awesome update
absolutely loved it
continue soon
superb

Thank you so much...

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#679

Originally posted by: humairayousaf78
Hi Sanjh,
once again it's amazing update
i think shravan is gone crazy.i know he is not phsically fit but he will have to care her emotions.He knows suman loves him. Is that not enough for him? what he need more?😕
osy apni insecurities se fight kerni chahiye na ke her bar jab os ko jab bhi apni disabilities ka ahsas ho to vo suman ko chor de😡

And miss suman usy bhi puri city mein ek hi jagah mili thi 😡 and aditya bhaisahab os ki to mein her wakat suman k ass pass😡 and opar se alisha bhi
but HATS OFF to sumo 👏 she slapped him . aik do or marti taky shravan ka dimagh thikany to atta
chalo mein ne apna gussa utar liya. i hope os pagal ko sumo mil jaye or aik bar phir os ko apni ghalati ka ehsas ho jaye 😊
update soon!😊

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Hey Humaira,

Shravan ko uski Sumo jaldi milegi...and thank you so much for commenting. it means a lot trust me.