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Uroojj

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Posted: 8 years ago

#201

Oh my my u are such unpredictable i tell you..

Didnt expected it at all..

Will she remember it the next day?

Iimagened her in his lap onwheel chair when i was reading the last chapter but never thought that it will happen lol...

Poor sharma jii, she is going to regret it surly..

Keep updating soon.

❤️

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Reeba shukla

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Posted: 8 years ago

#202

Oh my god sumo kissed Shrawan.. God next day kya hoga?? Plz yaar itna excite na Ker... What an update yaar made my day..plz update the next part soon

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crazyparrot

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Posted: 8 years ago

#203

Awesome update! Waiting for shravan to get out of that wheelchair!

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reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#204

Awesome update . ..Lol . ..I was laughing at Sharmaji's predicament😛😛...it was too funny...seriously yaar . .just let us know that Shravan is on his feet in the next update . ..he is too irresistible to be on a wheelchair all the time..waiting for the next update.

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pisces17

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Posted: 8 years ago

#205

Incredible...

This is not done yaar...how can you leave us like that ...Sumo kissing Shravan 😃

Updata karo na, please.,...

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Castile2

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Posted: 8 years ago

#206

Sanjh 🤗

Sumo should always be drunk! 🤣
This was amazing! 👏
I always love to read Shravan's POV...

But poor Sharmaji! 😆

And defo this should not end here!! 😉
I wanna see how Suman is going to react once she regains her senses! 😛

Update soon!

Cas

P.S. Alisha won't take revenge from Suman in future right? 🥱

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Sunain

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Posted: 8 years ago

#207

Hiii...!

👏 👏 🥳
literally jumping for joy 😃
Firstly Thank uuu shoo much for dedecating this fantablous chappy to me..really it meant alot 😳
n My Lalchi.....i love tht...par ab tu bari karbar ho gae..tumhari is lalchi ki lalch tu super duper increase ho gae hai..ab kya..plz plz jaldi jaldi updates karo..literally ur upiiz r driving me craaZzzy 🤪
all ur fault..mjh bechari masoom ko lalchi bana dea..aur inteha ya hai k meri lalch bharti hi ja rahi hai 😳 😛

Literally wht an updte yar...phenomenal ⭐️
loved it to core..❤️...beautifully penned!
Haay..this drunk Sumo is so so so much fun..is nay tu dhamal hi kar dea..Phlay Alisha ki band bajae aur phir..bechary Shravan ko shellShock cum awestruk kar dea. 😆..Miss Boldie Sumo 😳 😆
poor Sharma ji..he must be hell embarsed 😛
How lovely yar..Alisha did so bad with him..betrayed him.n he still doznt want her to suffer..doznt want her or anybody else to be sad..just coz he experienced unhappiness n knows how disheartning it is...how geniune of him❤️
Shravan kept on cursing his wheelchair n so much regreted it..n seeing him in soo much agony i felt really bad 😔...plz yar is wheelchair ko ab jaldi say dustbin mein pheko plz yar..cant see him in pain anymore.
Woah..Miss Boldie sat on his lap..woww tht ws lovely..enjoyed tht part! alot 😳 Thn tht Kiss..woah man..was just the icing on the cake 😉..she said tht she can vanish his sorrows n unhappiness..n he made poor Sharma ji leave😆
Thnk God..he asked him to leave on time😳...aweeii tht kiss was outstanding..Shravan wanted it for dso long n seems like Suman also wanted tht..bs was trying to restrain..but She was drunk..madam ko aglay di kuch yaad bhi rahay ga...i hope she doznt regret kissing him..but she'll surely be embarsed of her wedding deed😆
Cant wait to knw how things will get heaten up in tht car..so much excited 😳
plz update soon..u r my love..
love u alot❤️
trillionz of🤗 for u my dear.
U nailed it..for sure 😉

Take Care!

Sunain..opps Lalchi🤪

Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago