Shraman ff- Destined - thread 1

Amisha.r

@Amisha.r

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Posted: 8 years ago

To be honest bechare sharma ji ko dekh kr bahadur kaka ki yaad aa gae
Or bechara shravan he only blamed his wheelchair
Or yeh kiya ho gaya 😲 sumo ne kiss kr diya
Anyways good one
Keep updating
And thanks for pm 👏

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Safire

@Safire

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Posted: 8 years ago

#212

Drunken Sumo is just like a bombshell!!!!I am excited to know what will be her reactions when she comes to her senses!!!! Amazing write-up!!!! And thanks for the PM...

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#213

Hi...

It was so nice to read Shravan's POV...

really the way he was started to feeling for Sumo... So possessive that it made me think that he has left behind our show's Shravan... He was also so possessive towards his Sumo... He didn't like anyone coming near to his Sumo... I liked this possessive Shravan...😃

U have portrayed very well Shravan's feelings for sumo... Bechari Sumo she doesn't know what she is doing... Because she is not in her senses... 😉

OMG Sumo kissed Shravan... He also reciprocated.!...

I dont know she will remember this once she come to her senses... If didn't remember than ok... Otherwise definetly she won't be able to meet Shravan's eyes... It will be so embarrassing for her... She might think what I have done what Shravan may think all that... But she wouldn't know Shravan felt so good to kissing her... Ok let it be why I m ranting so much about this kissing scene... 😆

Most of the time once u came out from the hangover u won't be remember anything... Let's see kya hota hai Sumo ke 😉saat... Will she remember or forget... 😛

Continue soon...

I m so excited to know how Sumo will feel if she has remember this...

Thanks for the PM dear...

Aaj to dil kush kar diya... 👏

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#214

You know what?... you are really good at shravan's pov. ...ever time u write it...it makes me go waaaooo...😆 this was awesome...update soon...thanks for pm

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Meera

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Posted: 8 years ago

#215

Amazing... jealous shravan Nd poor Sharma ji... excited for next update... continue soon

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CarpeDiem_365

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Posted: 8 years ago

#216

Expect the unexpected kind a update..!

Pleasantly surprised ! 😃

Zaalim wheelchair ... bechare sharma Ji...

Not just Shravan,,Sumo made all of us happy...😉

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Faith28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#217

Lovely update...waiting for more😊

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priety.priti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#218

lovely update...sumo definitely gonna regret next day 😆...plz update soon cant wait for next part🤗

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#219

wow

they kissed

superb

loved it

continue soon

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Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#220

Just awesome dear..
Damn fabulous..
Each and every thing superb..
Sumo and drunk just love it and shra angry on his wheelchair..so he will recover quickly now.. 😉
Poor driver..lol..
Love it man..
Continue soon..
Thnx for pm buddy..

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