Shraman ff- Destined - thread 1 - Page 19

Originally posted by: Safire

Dear sanjh, totally mesmerizing chapter!!!! Looking forward to shravan and sumo union!!!

Originally posted by: pisces17

Wow Wow Wow!! Am out of words to describe.. You are building up the story so beautifully.

Update soonish...

Originally posted by: ReebaS

Oh my god Shraman rocks Alisha shocked.. Brilliant update...

Originally posted by: dhanyata

Yayyy...shravan fallen for his sumo. He trusts her, thats why asking her company to attend the wedding which would be more difficult for him otherwise. He started missing her, the frowl when he knows she is not coming sunday.😛

You portrayed his emotion well, he feels he is not affected by alisha's marriage now but simply he wanted to be with sumo. This way he accepted the change to himself.

Exactly!

Pushkar is on a mission ... huh ?! how he noticed shravan's mood and took sumo to him. Poor shravan, feeling jealous if this bro.

More to come on this jealousy track! 😛

Good development seen on Shravan side...in aspect of his love life😉 So lost in her thoughts huh !! and this would definitely make him improve health wise. the glimpses are already seen...

He will be on his feet soon.

Rmanath thought process is necessary in this point. he has already seen his son suffer with his love. Good that you brought it as well.

Thank you..

Suman is also caring for shravan...

"Someday this girl will give me a heart attack" ...ha ha ha ... how pity shravan😆

Haha 😆

I just loved what sumo talked on stage. Nice give back to Alisha...but am afraid coz alisha thinks its all a plan and what if she started with a revenge (*thinking soo much, i know*)

Let's see

Also, shravan disappointed that he couldnt proudly introduce sumo to his friends... Its okay, drunk sumo would be fun...we will wait to see what else she does now...

Thanks for the pm... please update soonish...

Originally posted by: Amisha.r

Yehhh Sumo Rocksss
Of course love is not to leave your patner in bad situation
But definitely love is to support and accompany your patner even in worst situation 👏

Originally posted by: Harshi_ta

👏👏

Originally posted by: shaggy8

Amazing dr... eagerly waiting for next update

Originally posted by: Wiccamaya

wow ... awsome... update soonish please

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Maza aa gaya...

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

Sry dea...bohot he late ho gaya...
coming to the update...It was too good man..👏Aur thoda lamba likh deti toh bhi chalta yaar...
"This man has gone mad..now its confirmed."n I was like yea sumo...hez falling for u bae..😆
Sumo drank Strawberry margerita...bhai waah...aacha hua pila diya...Saach toh boli aur alisha ko apni aukat toh dikhaye...#talli.hone.ke.faide..😡🤣
All in all...amazing update...continue soon
Love,
ANU😊