Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144 - Page 63

Wow... amazing update as usual...

Originally posted by: Crazypiya

Thank uu saanjh
Tu to ab mumma se pitegi..
Hey u r 18+ rite???
U have no idea writing a mature content with subtleties is such a tough job
Sumo to hain hii naive bechara shravan kyaa kare..
Hot irresistable biwi but bewakoof

loved it soo much...you write so beautifully. ..loved the caring shravan...he was soo concerned and soo sorry to hurt her...and sumo omg!! Esi baatein mummy ko kon batata h...i started blushing here...shit man...can't help out this girl ...but shravan was soo cute and our bold vandy is awesome...and bichara pushki...kaha jaye vo bichara couples k beech me fas gaya...keep writing...update soonish...excited to know age kya hota h😛😉😆

Originally posted by: Crazypiya

Thank u vimika
I know even m also married n a mother too..
So we both can relate things..
How the married couple behave..
Actually shravan got a bit carried away
But suman made it clear my her reaction that she ddint mind at all.. She just got scared

Now let's see what will kamini and nirmala do...

Hi Piya...I m also mother of 2 children... ya u r right (Shravan) he just carried away because this is for him also 1st time he is never been in any relationship earlier with anyone... he just lost control over him... because u r Shravan is too romantic compared to our shows Shravan... shows Shravan was hesitating to touch Sumo when She hugged him many times...Sumo she is really a cute bacha ek pal me dar jayegi tode der ke baad she will be fine... here also after came out from Nirmala 'a room she was just fine...but one thing kaun yeh sab mamma ko batata hai... Not only batana she removed her dress & showed it OMG...I was blushing when I was reading this... Really yeh ladki kya hai... Aisa hi chala toh wedding night mein toh bechari dar ke maare faint na hojaye abhi tak Shravan ne zyada kuch nehin kiya... I m really pity for Shravan kahi sanyas lena na pade is ladki wajah se... Bechara she really naive... But

Neatly and asthetically written. But is Sumo really so naive. Show her to be a little more bold. Laddaku types with Shravan. Would love to see some cute little nok jhoks between Shraman at this juncture of the story.

This is the first time Im commenting on anything on IF after a very long time. I read your whole FF in one go. It is beautifully penned and well thought out. I love the way you have built the story. I've written a couple OSs myself and I find writing emotional scenes and intimate scenes the hardest for a writer, but you have written them here with such grace.

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

loved it soo much...you write so beautifully. ..loved the caring shravan...he was soo concerned and soo sorry to hurt her...and sumo omg!! Esi baatein mummy ko kon batata h...i started blushing here...shit man...can't help out this girl ...but shravan was soo cute and our bold vandy is awesome...and bichara pushki...kaha jaye vo bichara couples k beech me fas gaya...keep writing...update soonish...excited to know age kya hota h😛😉😆

Thank uu dear..
Actually shravan was a bit carried away
And as he loved her .. He cared for her
And what to say about sumo .. Actually she doesn't have amy close female friend
So everything she used to share with kamini.. Who ihas always considered her as own daughter

Hmmm ab pushkar ka kuchh karna padhega

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

Hi piya sorry 4 the late comments

I am not in colombo these days so internet connection is weak

Oh my god sumanne subkuch bataya nirmala and kaminiko

And i feel sorry 4 sumo he is hurting her

May be Suhaagraat ke baat sumo ko hospital be janapadegi

Thank you 4 the pm

This update is sooo beautiful👍🏼

Hats off 4 u

Please give us next update sooon

Hey dear it's absolutely fine...
Haha ab shravan itna desperate hso to sumo bhi kya kare.. The prob is she is too shy when it comes to shravan ans especially while getting physically close...
Lets see what will she do after her suhagraat

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Hi Piya...I m also mother of 2 children... ya u r right (Shravan) he just carried away because this is for him also 1st time he is never been in any relationship earlier with anyone... he just lost control over him... because u r Shravan is too romantic compared to our shows Shravan... shows Shravan was hesitating to touch Sumo when She hugged him many times...Sumo she is really a cute bacha ek pal me dar jayegi tode der ke baad she will be fine... here also after came out from Nirmala 'a room she was just fine...but one thing kaun yeh sab mamma ko batata hai... Not only batana she removed her dress & showed it OMG...I was blushing when I was reading this... Really yeh ladki kya hai... Aisa hi chala toh wedding night mein toh bechari dar ke maare faint na hojaye abhi tak Shravan ne zyada kuch nehin kiya... I m really pity for Shravan kahi sanyas lena na pade is ladki wajah se... Bechara she really naive... But

she was blushing when Shravan asked about what happened inside the room...She is just scared...hope u will write again18+ about their wedding night...

Thank u

Hahaha thank uu dear for ur lovely comments
Actually u r absolutely right..
Shravan got carried away
Or sumo .. Bandi pagal hai..
Actually she didn't have any close female friends to share everything
Coz she was always with Pushkar everytime
So she used to share everything with kamini who is more like her mother

Ab sumo agar itna naive hogi to shravan has to be bold..
Now the pount is she has a love guru .. Our vandy .. Who is totally opposite of the show
She is witty and clever
Lets see how she will help sumo to come over from her shyness

Originally posted by: srividyasubbu1

Neatly and asthetically written. But is Sumo really so naive. Show her to be a little more bold. Laddaku types with Shravan. Would love to see some cute little nok jhoks between Shraman at this juncture of the story.

- Sri

Thank uu dear as u know its very hard to write mature stuff with subtlety
Actually sumo is ladaku with everyone but when it comes to shravan .. Her heart makes her behave differently
Everything garbar ho jata hai.. Especially when shravan comes close...
As she was never been exposed with any guy other than Pushkar

But now she will have a love guru vandyyy

Lets see how will she help sumo