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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -LiveLaughLove-

This is the first time Im commenting on anything on IF after a very long time. I read your whole FF in one go. It is beautifully penned and well thought out. I love the way you have built the story. I've written a couple OSs myself and I find writing emotional scenes and intimate scenes the hardest for a writer, but you have written them here with such grace.

Your shravan and suman are the same but opposite. They love each other deeply but one is more open about it where the other is more shy. I loved your last chapter, thank you for showing something different and realistic. It must have been difficult to write. Shravan was so sweet with her after the incident, and I love that Suman still trusts him. Hopefully with time Suman will gain more confidence in these things and loosen up around Shravan. As a girl who didnt have many female friends or exposure to these things, it must be hard for her, but she has Shravan who is really understanding.
Im very excitedd to see how you take this story forward.
Wonderful, spectacular job Piya!!!

Best,
Avni



Ohhh avni thanks for not being a silent reader of hum tum
A biiig hug for uu
U ar absolutely right..
Its very easy to read mature stuff but writing it is sooo difficult yaar
U have analysed suman and shravan so nicely and perfectly that i dont need to explain it to u...
Thank got finally i got someone who really understands my hum and tum
Both are so different from each other still are made for ek duje ke vaaste
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow
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totally loved it
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Originally posted by: pinky.padda

wow
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totally loved it
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Thank uu dearrr
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Just came across this story. It is reallly good. Whole time reading this story i was smiling and blushing. Please continue soon. Waiting for next chapter!
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Just came across this story. It is reallly good. Whole time reading this story i was smiling and blushing. Please continue soon. Waiting for next chapter!



Thank uu dear gor loving it..
Its all my pleasure
It feels so good to see new memebers comments
Try not to be a silent reader... Ur comments matters a lot
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Crazypiya



Thank uu dear gor loving it..
Its all my pleasure
It feels so good to see new memebers comments
Try not to be a silent reader... Ur comments matters a lot


Dear Piya,

Going crazy to get an update !! when can we expect our shraman dose from this ff !!

Sorry, but can't help being desperate :(
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 18

Shrravan bend and touched her lips...
"Chhoti maa"... suman gasped
Shravan jumped aside..
He turned around and found no one..
"Yeh kya thaaa???? "Shravan narrowed his eyes

"Woh chhoti maa ne kHan tha parlour jana hai..."
Suman said
"Baad mein .. Now can i have my good morning kiss... "Shravan said
Shravan stepped forward...
"Mujhe mujhe ready hona hai..."suman said

"Ok let me help uuu..."Shravan smile
"Nooo... Bilkul nahin..., aap bahaar jao..". She said pointed towards the door..
"Ek morning kiss to main leke hii rahunga.. "
He grabbed her by waist...

"Shrravan neeche itnq kuchh ho gaya.. Aaap ko andaza bhi hai.. ??? Maa chhoti maa "she complained..."Kyaaa karte ho aaap...
Aap ko to koi sharam Nahin ... Par meri baat to samjho.." She pouted...
"Ok baba meri sharmili bewakoof.."
He kissed her cheek..

"Achha ek baat Promise me .. Nxt time tum maa aur chhoti maa ko kuchh nahi bataogi... "He looked at her
She blushed...
"Yaa phir suhagraat ke baad ka story bhi batane ka irDa hai..." Shravan said naughtily

"Shhhravaaan "she gasped..

Her cheeks become red...
Suddenly he got a call..
He took out his mobile ... And checked..
"Achha suno kuchh zaroori discussion hai.. Bhaiya ke engagement ke baad ok?? ..."Before taking the call he said
And he left the room...

Ab kya karnewala hai yeh...,
Bhagwanjiii aapne isko sharam haya kuchh nahin diya kya????
Idhar meri haalat kharab ho raha ke main neeche ksise jaayun aur yeh itna chilled out...
Sachhi bhagwan ji .. Mujhpe kuchh to daya karo...


"Jeete raho Ramnath.. "Tiwari ji said as Ramnath touched his feet...
"Kakaji ... "Nirmala touched his feet
"Jeeti reh meri bachhi ... Tujhe dekhta huun to tujhme hi apne priya ko dhoond ne ki koshis karta huun.."...Tiwari ji touched her chin

Everybody welcomed them

Kamalji served the tea n snacks...

"Mujhe to yakeeen ee nahi ho raha hai shravan itna lamba ho gaya.. Said said sameer
Sach papa kitna chhota tha... Na ??? Tiwari ji said..
"Dii kahan hai???? "Asked preeti..
"Woh suman thodi parlour gayi hai.. Abhii ati hogi..." Said nirmala

"Can't beleive di iss getting married.." Preeti jumped wid happiness
"Sachi jab babuni ne bola ke aap log chahte hai ke suman aur shravan hume to yakeen nahin huya..." Sameer said

"Finally suman ko apna khud ka parivar mil gaya...
Aur baat kya hai jante beta .. Inki shaadi to humne bahut pehli hi tay kar dii thi lekin bataya kisiko nahin tha ... Kyun Ramnath..."said mr tiwari..
"Jii bikul.." Ramnatha agreed...

"Auntie can i go n freshen up.. "Said preeti...

"Sure beta puskraar neeche wale guest room mein sabka bags rakhdo..."Kamini ordered

"Aaap mere jija ji ho?? "A cute little golumolu boy came to shravan..
Shravan picked him up .. And kissed...
"Yup dude...".
"Aur main aapka kaun huu.."dabboo asked
Everyone..laughed "aap mere hero hooo.. Samjhe champ."...
"I like u .. "Dabboo circled his arm around his neck...
"I like uu too ... " shravan kissed his cheek...

"Nanuuu "Suman screamed in happiness... And ran towards nanaji
..
"Ohhh meri bachhhiii "nanu hugged her..

"Aap aag gaye..?? "Suman was in tears
"Kaise ho aap?"????she hugged him...
"Main bhala thik kaisa na huun..mere laadli ki shaadi jo hone wali hai.. "Nanu kissed her..

"Ho gayi hai "said nirmala looking at shravan...
"Haa shravan se aur raha nahin jaa raha tha.. Said kamini looking at suman..
Shravan scrached the back of his head

He cleared his throat ...
"Are woh bhi koi shaadi hai?? Woh to sirf formality hai said sameer...
"Bhaisab aaj kal ke bachhe to ise hi shaadi samajhte hai.."
Suman started biting her lips...

... "Ohhh diii diii "preeti came running towards her...
Suman got up and preeti hugged her tightly...
"Wowww diii aap to last time se bhi zayada khoobsurat ho gaye ho... Jiju ka asar hai ka..???"Preeti winked..

Suman blushed looking at shravan..
"Suman didi ...aap ne to mujhe dekha hi nahi "dabbo said ...

"Dabbo kitna bada ho gaya tha.. Last time jab usa gayi thi.. Thik se bol bhi nahi pata tha.. "Suman tried to take him from shravan but he refused to leave shravan ..
Everyone laughed
"Mami mausi aur bhaiya nahi aye???"asked suman..

"Sorry di woh aap ko patah to hai na ke ankita bhabi ki delivery isi month pe hai.. To woh log nahi aa sake.."preeti said...
"Haaa re bhabi kaisi hai??? Ekdam golu bangayi hai na.???? "
"Hai hai bhabi ki saari dieting paani mein gayi.." Suman laughed...

"Oye jhalli has le has le jab tuu maa bannewali hogi tab tuu bhi football hii ban jayegi.." Savitri acted like a ball.

Suman stopped laughing and blushed...
She looked at shravan and saw him smirked

"Diii mujhe shopping pe jana hai... Wedding ke liye dresses bhi to leni hai..".said preeti

Shravan signaled something with his eyes

"Yeh ladkiya naa jabbhi dekho sirf shopping ke bahane dhoond te hai.."Pushkar said while coming from the guest room..
Sumo was trying to figure it out..

"Oye shopping ke barein mein kuchh mat bolna.. "Preeti glared..."Waise bhi bandar kya jaane adrak ka swad... "
Shravan gave her a flying kiss and asked the same one from her..

"Bilkul thik bola puttar dekh na bandar hi to hai.. Shaadi wale ghar mein bhi chaddi mein ghum raha hai... "Kamini pointed btowards pushkar's bermuda...

Suman nodded no..
Shravan pleaded with his eyes

"Dekho aunti bhi bol raha hain ke tum bandar. Ho..." Preeti laughed
"Diii.. Diii.. Kahan kho gaye .. "Preeti shook her

"Huuuhhh ????kahin nahin.. Main to yehi huun ."...
Suman fumbled.
"Inka kuchh nahin ho sakta..."Kamini sighed..

Nirmala blushed

"Beta kahin jaane ki zaroorat nahin hai.. Thodi der mein jyethalal ji kapde leke ayenge ..." Said nirmala

"Ohhh wooowww. so cool "...preeti clapped..
"Tab to main khuub shopping karungi " preet added
"Huh kar ke kya fayda.. Lagna to tumhe same hi hai.. Kya khandan hain didi pagal to behen chudail.. "Pushkar laughed...

Shravan pat his head...

"Hai main to bhool hi gaya kisiko apni biwi ki burai bbilkul pasand nahi..." Pushar massged his own head

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Suman was serving lunch along wid nirmala..
.
"Tiwari jii humari bahu ke haath ka biriyani khake to dekhiye..."said lalaji...
Suman blushed..
Shravan signaled her to sit with him.. She blushed..

She served gajar ka halwa to pushkar

"Dekh sumo my darling my best friend maine bahut socha.. Aur soch soch ke yeh tai kiya ke main tere dushman ki team se hat Kar doston wala team mein aa gaya.. Ab tu sach sach bol isne kuchh milaya to nahi?? Like jamal gota type.." Pushkar narrowed her eyes...

"Kya bol raha hai "shravan said..
"Bhai aap ki to nayi biwi hain ... Par mere to purana frnd hai.. Rag rag se wakif huun.. Jab tak yeh mujhse cockroach wale incident ka badla nahin leti .. Yeh chain se bsithegi nahi..." Pushkar smiled dramatically...

"Sumo agar nahin bhi dala to daal de.." Said varun
"Hai... Yeh bedard duniya mein kya koi ek insaan nahin hain.. Jo mera saath dega????" Pushkar acted funnily

"Hey pushkar dont say like tht.. M wid u.." Said preeti...

"Summmooo ek kaam kar jsmal gote ke badle mein zeher daaal de... "Pushar said shockingly..

Everyone laughed
Preeti fumes
Suman came towards shravan..
She put two spoons of moong daal halwa I n his plate..
He looked at her surprisingly... "But tumhe kaise... "
"Nanimumma ne bataya tha.. "She whispered before leaving his side...

"Beta tu bhi baith ja.. "Said nanu
"Jeee .. "She was about to sit beside him
"Idhar baith mere paaas.. "Kamini said ..
Shravan looked at kamini ..
As their eyes met... He looked away

Suman sat beside kamini.. And smiled embarrassingly...

"Mujhe thoda kaam hai office jana padhega.. "Rqmnath said cheacking his phone??
"Aaj??? Par ghar mein shaadi hai... "Nirmala said
"It's important...kakaji "excuse me plzz ..

"Papa is everything alright??" Asked shravan.
"Ya ya have some important case.. Shravan can u join me at office after finishing ur lunch..." Said ramnath
"Sure papa "shravan said
Ramanath suddenly left the room leaving everyone shocked

"Dekho ghar mein do do shaadi hai phir bhi case"
Complained nirmala..
"Beta lawyers ka to life ee hi aisa hai.." Nanu smiled
Puskar placed a hand on shravan's shoulder..
"Bhai bade papa..."
"I dont know pushkar may be its really important " said shravan still in his thoughts

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"Ha wo wala dikhaiye... Wo greeen wala "asked nirmala ..
Jyethalal has come with some beautiful traditional dresses
Kamini nirmala along with suman preeti and Savitri are selecting sarees
"Diii this one will suit u "she put a light ping net saree on suman's shoulder..
"Ha yeh le suman "kamini supported preeti...
Preeeti choose 7 dresses for herself...

"Dad aur dadu kahan hai "asked preeti..
"Beta sameer aur kakaji tere kuchh rishedaar se milne gaye hai... "Said nirmala

"Waise dii jiju ka favourite colour kon sa hai??? "Asked preeti searching sarees for suman..
"Red hai yeh to patah hii hai .. Baki patah nahin... "Said suman
"Whttty???? U don't know about ur husbands fav colour????" Preeti screamed

"Actually shravan to yahan rehta nahin tha tooo.. "Suman blushed..
"Abbhi call kar ke poocho... "Preeti pointed towards the phone...
Sumo picked the phone and called him..
Shravan ddnt picked it up...
"Preeti woh shayad busy honge chhod na..".said sumo wid a sad smile
"Ha beta shravan aur uske papa shayad busy honge..."said nirmala
"But dii has to buy some sarees of jijus choice rite aunty.. "Said preeti
"Humari sumo pe sab achha lagta hai "said kamini..
Suman took her phone ..

And type..
Aap ka fav colour??
She pressed the send button and waited for reply

Suman cheacked the mobile and found he has seen the msg
But ddnt replied

Actually sarees leni hai
Aap agar fav colour bol dete to

She typed and send

She waited but shravan didn't replied

Busy ho??
She typed and send

Still no reply...
She was tensed
What happen...
She losts all the inerest in buying sarees...
Stilll she chose some sarees for her and helped nirmala and kamini to chose for vandy..

"Badi maaa i mean maaa aap ne papa ko lunch ke baad dawai di hai???" Asked suman

"Hey bhagwan yeh sarees ke chakkar mein mera dimag hi kaam nahi kar raha hai.. "Nirmala suddenly got up..
"Maa aap ruko main deke aati huun... "Suman said

"Di can i come wid u .. Just want to see jiju's office... "Preeti smiled

"Mmm preeti kal dekh lena... Coz aj lagta hai woh log busy honge .. "Suman tried to avoud preeti.
"As u said di... Is mauke pe thoda romance bhi karnlena.. "She whispered

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"R u sure shravan ??? "Ramnath asked
"Yes papa m sure..."shravan said firmly
"But i dont thnk gharwale will allow you.."...Ramnath said

"Bade papa main chel jata huun na "said pushkar...
"Nahi pushkar tum agar chaho to u can assist shravan in this case but .." Ramnath said
"But bhai ki to 3 din mein shaadi hai.."pushakr tried to speak

"Pushkar tune dekhi hai us ladki ki halath..??? She tried to commit sucide because of those bast**d... "Shravan clenched his fists in anger

"But bhai aap ki shaadi... "Pushkar said

"Shaadi 3 din baad hain i will be back day after tomorrow...bas tu gharwalo ko samhal lena" ... Said shravan

"Dad i want to fight this case as my first case in india... "Shravan said

"But beta tum jaan te hona ke woh kiska beta hai???? "Ramnath said
"I know papa woh kaun hai ... But he doesn't know who i am... "He smirked with full confident...
"Beta woh hume phone pe already case chhod ne ke liye dhamki de chuke hai..."ramnath tried to explain
"Because they know that if malhotras take the case they will be behind the bars..I have to go papal.. "Shravan said

"I m proud of u my son ...get ready ... Shaam ko flight hai.. We will miss you in varun's engagement..." Said ramnath
Aur gharwalo ki tension tum
Mat lo.. I will tell.. "Ramnath couldn't complete..

"Sumooo... Tuuu yahaaan?????? "Pushakr said
Shravan snapped his head as he found a shocked sumo was standing on the door

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"Hello suman beta "rakesh ji said

"Hello rakesh uncle main thik huun aap ?? "Suman greeted rakesh ji as she met him entering malhotra associates

"Everyone comes to congratulate her for her alliance wid shravan .."
"Bade papa ko medicine deni thi..."suman said
"But sir to abhi busy hai meeting mein... "Rakesh ji said

"Shravan hai?? To main unhe deke jaati hun ".. Said suman
"Actually shravan sir bhi bahut busy hai.. Teeno conference room mein hai.."...rakesh ji said

"Ok then i will wai"... siad sum
"Nahi nahin beta aap ko wait karwaya yeh baat agar ramnath sir ko patah chalega to woh bahut gussa honge.. Aap jao beta "rakesh said

Suman walked towards the conference room ..
She slightly pushed the door when he heard shravan was saying
"I have to go to mumbai papa.."
She froze
Pushkar's voice broke her trance
"Beta tu???" Asked Ramnath
"Woh main ... Main woh... Aap ko medicine..."
She said confusingly
"Ohhh hooo .. Aja de de.. "Ramnath called her
She came towards Ramnath but her eyes was locked with shravan...

Shravan lowered his eyes..
Beta shravan aj mumbai jaa raha hai.. " Ramnath said
"But papa kal to mehendi aur sangeet.. "She murmured
"She looked at shravan whoo is looking at the files..
She found shravan is looking everywhere and avoiding her eyes

"Haa maine use bola.."...Ramnath said

"I will be back tomow maine bola na .. "He told Ramnath but seeking a glance of suman...

She found his phone is there on his side ..

"Sir yahan pe aap ki signature chaiye tha.." Rakesh ji entered widh some files..
"You come to my cabin Ramnath said and get up.. Pushkar u come with me.. "Ramnath was about to leave the room suddenly he stopped "shravan tum Packing kar lo main tumhare room mein ake tumhe case ki briefing deta huun."... And leftthe room leaving both of them alone...
Suman was standing at the other corner...

"Kiyne baje ki flight hai.. Suman asked with a choked voice..
"6:30 ki .. "Shravan said looking at tge papers

"Kab tak wapas ayoge?? "...She asked
"Kal first hearing hai.. Agar ho sake to kal nahin to parso.. Late bhi ho sakta hai.. "
Shravan was trying hard to supress his feelings

"Kal ... Kal meri mehendi hai...aur parso sangeeet ...".she murmured

"Hmmm.."... Shravan said ..
"Aap mujhse naraz ho??? ";She asked...
Shravan couldn't reply

"Aap mujhe chhod ke jaa rahe ho??" She added

Thats it Shravan couldn't control anymore .. He gotup from the chair and rushed to her ..

Without uttering a single word He just picked her petite body up in a bone crushing hug...

Sumo burried herself on his neck... And snaked her arm around his shoulder...
She can feel his restles of breathing...he was holding her firmly as if he loosen his grip his world will slip away from his hand...

"Bhai.. Woh...". Pushkar entered the room and stopped at the door as he found them hugging each other so intensely... He stepped back amd closed the door..
"Sir under bahut busy hai.. 15 mins kisiko bhi ander nahi jane dena .. Kisi ko means kisko..." He smiled looking at the closed door

"Main tumhe chhod ke kahin nahin jaayunga.. "He whispered...
"Bas mujhe do din de do... Yeh case bahut important hai sumo... "
"Sirf do din.."he whispered..
He looked at her ..
"Do gi na??" He asked nlooking at her
She nodded
He sighed in relief
He put her down...

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"Tum logo ko kuchh bolna matlab bhais ke aage bin bajana .". Savitri was sitting in the couch..

"Do din baad shaadi hai.. Kal bachhi ka mehendi hai.. Kya zarurat hai sharavn ko mumbai bhej ne ka.. "Savitri was shouting

"Maa main kya bolun aap ko to patah hii hai ... Mere is ghar mein oi baat sunnewala hai?? "Nirmala said sitting helplessly on the sofa...

"Are bhai shravan will be back...wo parso aajeya... "Ramnath said

"Nahin nahin bhaisaab yeh case bahut tera hai.. Aapko ise shravan ko dena nahin chaiye tha.. "Said lalaji..

"But yeh case mera lena bahut zaruri tha... Iss case ko agar koi jeet sakta hai to woh shravan malhotra.."...shravan said entering the living room wid sumo...
"Shehzade aap ko koi andaza hai?? Do din baad aapki shaadi hai..?? "Said savitri..

"Nanima .. Shadi pe yeh dulha apni dulhan ke paas zarur pauchega..." Shravan smiled
I
"Nahin nahin shravan mujhe tera jaana thik
Nahin lag raha hai..." Said lalaji
"Mujhe bhi.. "Said kamini
...
"Aap log jaante nahin yeh case jitna kitna important hai... Aur mujhe teh jitna hii hai.. "Shravan said firmly
"Suman ab tu hi samjha na usko.." Nirmala came towards her
"Iski taraf to dekh... Kal shaadi ki hai tune isse .. Kal uske haathon mein tere naam ka mehendi chadhnewala hai... "Nirmala said touching her cheek.."tu hi bol suman.."
"Par maaa you guys have no idea about this case .. I have to.. "Shravan was trying to explain..

"Koi zarurat nahin hai mujhe jaan ne ki... Tu kahin nahin jaa raha hai.."...said nirmala shaking her head

"Maaa plzz aap shravan ko mat rokiye.. Inke liye yeh case bahut important hain maaa.. Aur agar mere liye yeh nahin jaa paye.. To mujhe bhi achha nahin lage ga .. "Suman pressed nirmala's hand...
"Sumaaan" .. Nirmala said
"Plzzz maaa ... Mujhse shravan pe pura bharosa hai..." She looked at shravan
Shravan was shocked

"I think shravan tumhe packing kar leni chahiye said ramnath looking at his watch... Main thodi der mein aata hun " Ramnath said

"Ji papa ... Excuse me... "Shravan was going upstairs... Leaving Suman downstair.. When he heard kamini.. " puttar tu jaake shravan ke packing mein help kar de... "

Both shravan and suman turned at kamini
Kamini sighed and smiled at suman...

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"3 shirt kafi hoga right?? "Suman put the shirts on the suitcase...

Shravan was standing on his closest crossing his arms over his chest..
Till the time suman entered the room .. She didn't talked to him from the time he hugged her..
"Sumooo... "Shravan called her..
She ddint answerd

She was trying to reach the top shelves of his wardrobe to get his night clothes...
She tiptoed to get those but failed
She turned around and looked at him helplessly
...
He came closer and caged the body between the open wardrobe and his tall frame.. And took out the night suits..
She took it from him and was about to go.. He hold her arm..
"Baat nahin karogi mujhse...??"he asked
"Maine aisa thodi bola??? "She replied lowered her eyes
"To phir itni chup kyun ho??? Shravan asked her
"Woh to aap aise jaa rahe to.. To mujhe thodi ghabrahat ho hai.. She said
He hold her waist

"Sumo meri taraf dekho.. Yeh case sach mein bahut important hain sumo ... Papa is health mein travel nahin kar sakte .. Isi liye mujhe jana padh raha hai.."he cuppy her face...
"Aap se ek baat poochu?? "Suman asked
Hmmm .. Bolo.. Shravan said..
"Yeh case hai kya?? Jo aap ko ise jitna hi hai??? " Suman asked

Shravan loosen his grip...
"Kuchh nahi.. "Shravan lowered his eyes...

"Aap nahin batana chahte ho tum main nahin..". Sumo couldn't finish

"Its a rape case sumo... Un darindo ne ek 14 saal ki bachhi ke saath... "Shravan couldnt finish .. As he heard aloud gasp from her mouth...
He found her covering her mouth in shock...
"Shravaaannn "she said
"Haaan sumo mujhe us bachhi ko insaaf dilana hi hai..." He clenched his fists
Suman hugged him ...
"Main aapke saath huun shravan..
Shravan pulled back her and kissed her forhead..
"Mujhe malum tha..."


Tumse judaa hokar mujhe door jaana hai
Palbhar ki judaai phir laut aana hai

Suman looked into his eyes..
They shared an eyelock
.. He found sadness in her eyes..
She was blinking her eyes
He can easily under stand she is doing so that she can stop tears brimming out of her eyes
Suman closed her eyes..
Shravan kissed her eyelashes
Kissed her eyes... He paused there for some sometimes

He touched the corner of her eyes
touched the smuged kohl line with his thumbs

Aankhon se ab teri kaajal churaana hai
Palbhar ki judaai phir laut aana hai

Shravan sighed

"Ab packing finish kar le?? "Suman opened her eyes and said...
"Do din ke liye jaa raha huu... Thoda yo energy le lene do.. "He pouted..
Suman blushed.. "Baad mein.. "She whispered...
"Baad nein Kab???thodi der mein hi to nikal jayunga... "Shravan pointed towards hus watch..
Shravan suddenly felt sumans eyes becoming soft...

"Uhhhuuu bikul nahi... "He cupped her face... "Main tumhe akele chhod ke kahin nahin jaa raha hunn .. Tumhara pyaar leke jaa raha huun na apne saath.. Yehi to banega mera honsla"

Saathiya, sang rahega tera pyar
Saathiya, rang layega intezaar



Suman dig her face in his chest and whispered "main bhii.."

"Shravannn ... "Ramnath called and entered
Suman pulled herself from the hug but found her hair strangled with one of his button...

Shravan was struggling to take it out.. But failed
"Aaahhh..."Suman winced
"Tumhe laga??? "Shravan says

"Kahan ho... ???"Ramnath almost entered the room..
"Ayaaa papa... "Shravan said ..

Suman was bitting her lips in nervous ness
Shravan pulled off the button.. And place it to suman's hand..
He placed a kiss on her lips and whispered .." I told u those r mine "and rushed towards Ramnath
Suman was standing like a staue...
"Wo papa sumo packing kar rahi hai... To main use saman de raha tha.." Shravan said looking at suman.. Who is still standing like a staue...

"Ohh ho gaya packing ????"Ramnath asked suman...
"Jii thodi baki hai..." Suman replied..
"Bas do din ki hi to baat hai.. "Shravan said looking at her

Ramnath came and sit on the sofa .. He was explaining the case to shravan...
Suman was roaming around the room and putting all his necessary stuff in his bag..

Shravan was trying to concentrate oh the case but the sound of her payel is distracting him..
Suman was folding all her clothes and putting them in the suitcase..
His eyes followed her..
She put his unwashed clothes in the laundry baskets...

"Shravan baba????? "Kamal ji knocked...
Shravan was about to get up but when he saw suman headed towards the door he sat down..
She opened the door

"Bitiya baba ke iron kiye huye kapde..". Kamal ji said..
"Kaka aap mujhe dijiye... "She took them and came back and enter the walk in robe...

Shravan was amazed by watching her .. And the way she was fullfilling her duty.. When he needed her support...


Mere tasavvur mein tum roz aati ho
Chupke se tum aakar mera ghar sajaati ho



He imagined her roaming around his room and doing household stuff wearing a green traditional saree as his wife...
Sajni bada pyara yeh roop hai tera
Gajre ki khushboo se mehka hai ghar mera -


His lips curved and formed a smile..


"Shravan u got that??? "Ramnath's voice broke his trance...

"Jee papa .. U give me the files main flight mein dekh lunga..."
"Ok then u get ready.. Airport kiske saath jaa rahe ho???"ramnath asked

"Woh actually pushkar ko kuchh kaaam hai woh side pe.. Aur suman ko preeta ko pickup karna tha .. Varun bhaiya ke engagement ke liye .. To suman aur pushkar mujhe jaate waqt drop kardega.. "Shravan said looking at suman...
"Par main to .. "Suman tried to speak
"Ha mujhe drop Karte huye chale jana.."shravan didn't let her speak
Ramnath got up and left the room...

"Aap ne aisa kyun bola ke mujhe bahar jaana hai...???"suman asked closing the chain of his suitcase
"Kyn ke mujhe pata hain ke tum mujhe see off karne ke liye jana chahte ho.. "Shravan got up and came towards her...
Suman stepped back...
"Aap ready ho jao .. Main bhi ready ho jaati huun..sagai mein jana hai na.. "She said

"Shravan touched the her hair near her left ear.."
And caresed her face..

"Tab chot laga?? "He asked her intensely...
"Nahin to .. "She tucked her hair on the back of her ear...
"Nahin mujhe patah hai.. Meri taraf dekh ke bolo...?? "He bend down to match her eyes
She looked nat him .. "Tho da sa..."
He grabbed her waist and pulled her little closer..
She was blushed
Shravan bend down leaned towards her ear and planted a kissed on the back of her ear and kiss her hair...
"Sorrry ..."
Suman closed her eyes and clutched his arm..
"Waise mujhe jitna yaad hai tumhe kisi aur jagah pe bhi chot laga hai rite.. Then mujhe waha bhi kiss karna chaiye rite.." He whispered..

Her eyes shot open and she pulled herself back..
Shravan saw her embarrassed eyes..
"Nahhin mujhe kahin ch chhot nahi aayi "she stammered..
"Achha mera do din ka dose de do jo main miss karnewala juun".he said naughtily

"Woh to aap ne le li.. "Suman said angrily
"Achha woh... .. Woh to tumhara punishment tha.. Meri chhez pe tum apna haq kyun jata rahi thi??? " shravan said
Suman blushed...
"Bhaiii... "Pushkar called
"Agaya kabab mein haddi "Shravan sighed and parted away..

Suman tried to control nher laugh but suddenly burst out laughing
"Kya huya tu kyun daant faar rahi hai.. " puskar asked
"Kuchh nahi tu bol... "Saud shravan.
"Achha haaa aapne bade papa ko kya story sunayi.. Ke mujeh aur sumo ko kahin jana hai??? "Pushakar asked

"Haaa tu mujhe airport drop karega" shravan said putting his hands on his hips

"Par kyun??? Ek to preeti ne dimag khaake rakhi hai use matching shoes lena hai upar se is moti ko bhi ghumana padega??
Pura khandan ka ek hi motto hain kya meri life ka band bajana .. "Pushkar acted funnily..

"By the way varun bhaiya gussa hai ke aap unke sagai chhod ke jaa rahe hoo.." Pushkar added

"Oye meri behen ke barein mein kuchh mat bol.. "Suman pointed fingers towards pushkar...

"Ekdam ...teri behen jo cheez hain kuchh bolne ke liye mujhe zinda chhodegi tab na bolu?? Bhai aap ki life to khatam.. Chudain biwi to dayan saali... "Pushkar laughed
"Tum dono jhagra bandh karo .. I have to catch the flight..." Shravan said to both of them

"Ok bhai main 5 mins mein ready hoke aata huun...Moti chal mere liye dress select kar de.. "Pushkar pulled suman out of his room...

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""Jaldi wapas ana "nirmala said to shravan and waved her hand..

"Pushkar entered on the driver seat while shravan was sitting beside him.. "Suman was sitting behind...
"Bhai aap ne case ko saari details le li na... ?" Pushkar said..
"Haan chhote."...said shravan
"Case bahut pechida hai .. Bhai defense ke paas proof hai ke us time pe rajiv goa mein tha."...pushkar said...
"Hmmm.. "Shravan said
"Victim abhi bhi hospital mein haina bhai?? Kitne haivan hai 5 admi milke ek bachhi ko."...

"Pushkar said..Aap ne dalil ready kar lii naa...??"
Hmmm shravan said as de doesn't want to discuss infront of suman .. As he knows that she will be scared if she will come to know about the case details...

"Side mein thodi le.. "Shravan said..
"Kyun bhai kya huya??" He stopped..
Shravan came out of his car..
"Shrravvan .. "Suman said
"Bhai kuchh bhool gaye kya?? "Pushkar peeped from the window
"Utar.. ?? "Shravan came to the driving seat
"Huuuhhh???? "Pushar ssaid...

"Come out ... Jaldi kaar meri flight miss ho jayega".. Shravan said ..
"Ok "pushkar was hell confused...
"Tum bahar aao.."..he get in to the deiver seat and said looking at the back seat..
"Par kyun?????" Suman said
"Hurry up sumooo.." He frowned..
Sumo stepped out.. But she was struggling with her poweder blue lehenga.. As she is going to varun's engagement party from the airport..
"Pushkarrr" she called...
"Ruk ruk main ata huun ... Khud utar ne ki koshish mat kar hir jayegi..."pushkar rushed towards her and helped her to come out with her lehenga..
Shravan opened the front door..
"Come" he asked..
Sumo got inside.. Pushakr made her sit properly... Then vlosed the door..
As he was about to open the back door he found it locked...
"Bhai ... Lock to kholo main kaha baithu...??? "Pushakr asked wid a smile

"Ek kaam kar 10 mins baad ek auto lee aur airport ke domestic departure mein pounch.. " Shravan smiled at pushkar

"Matlaaabbb!!!!!!!!!!! "...Pushkar screamed
"Tujhe kya laga main tere saath airport jaa ra huun??? "...Shravan smirked
Sumans jaw dropped
"Nahin bhaiii... Plzzz app phirse apni lovestory ka hanumaan nahin bana sakte.." Pushkar pleaded...
"Byeee chhote...". Shravan started the engine
"Shrravan aaap yeh kyu?? "Suman said looking at pushkar from the back windscreen...
"Chup chap baithi raho mrs malhotra...". Shravan said
He saw pushkar was punching hin hand in the air.. From the rear view mirror... And smiled...

Shravan sighed and smiled...

"Finally tumhare saath akele time bitane ka mauka mila.. "He. Took her right hand and kissed
"Aap na sachmuchh ke badmash ho "suman blushed...

"Icecream khaogi???" Shravan asked looking at her

"Abhiii??? Par aap ki flight??? "Suman asked

"Maine sabko 1 ghante pehle ka time bola ..!taki thoda time hume bhi mile... "He winked
Sumo gasped shrrravannn
He laughed

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"Sumo tum icecream khate huye bahut zyada cute lag rahi ho... "Shravan said ..
Suman took the last bite of her corneto...
..
"Shravvan i think hume chalna chahiye..." She said
"Hmmm .. "They sat inside the car...
"Shrravannn... Yeh seatbelt atak gaya.."...Suman was not able to pull the seatbelt..
Shravan took off his belt and hoover on her and oull the the belt and locked it.. In this process his hand brushed her bare waist..
Suman tensed up...
Shravan sense it
Sumo ice cream laga huya hai ... "He pointed towards her face..
"Kahan.. "She tries to find it through the mirror.
"Waha.. "He pointed and suddenly he hoovered on her and touched her lips...
He pressed his lips tightly on her

She clenched her eyes becoz of his sudden move..
As Suman has fastened with the seatbelt she couldn't moved...
He touched her naval with his finger
She gasped loudly...
He took her lowerlip and nibble it..

He pulled himself off and found her sitting statue closing her eyes.

He smiled and fasten his seatbelt.. And started the engine..
Suman opened her eyes .. As her breathing became normal she moved her head towards him and glared at him...

"Dont look at me like that mrs malhotra ... Meri koi galti nahin hain...main subhe se maang raha tha... Tumne bahahe banye.. Ab to yeh banta tha..."Shravan smiled slyly...
"Aiseee...????? Har waqt aap mere saath aisa karke mujhe darate ho...Aaap na mujhse baat maar karna... "Suman said angrily...
"Ok as u wish ... Baad mein mat bolna ke maine tumhe kyun nahi bataya... "Shravan said while driving..
"Kyaaa.. "Suman said looking at him
Shravan smiled but ddnt replied..

"Batao naaa.. "She asked

"Tumhara dupatta sarak gaya ...aur bahut achha view dee raha hai... Biwi...Shravan pointed towards her choli...
Suman noticed and immediately covered her self properly...
.
Besharaaam .. She murmured...in anger

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"Chalo bhai... Yeh lo aap ka boarding pass .."puskar shaked his hand

Shravan took it from pushkar..

He looked at sumo..
"Are jhalli bhai sirf do din ke liye jaa rahe hai.. Tu rondu shakal mat bana.."pushkar said

They heard the security announcement..
"Bhai main thoda udhar hoke aata huun... "Pushkar said. And walked out

Shravan took her both hands ..
"Hey... Look at me..."
She looked at him...
He found two big fat tears in her eyes .. He wiped it..
"Give me a smile chalo.. "He cupped her face...
She smiled sadly..
" Miss me ok..."He kissed her forehead
... He was going to leave her hand.. When sumo suddenly hold his palm.. "Main aap ka intezaar karungi... "
Shravan felt a pain in his heart

Shravan waved his hand and stepped inside..
Suddenly two hands just covered his eyes from behind..
Suman was shocked..
Shravan took them off. And turned around...

"Urvashi tum?????? "He said..

The door closed ... Leaving suman outside the airport...


To be continued

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Hello my lovely readers
Here as i promised i updated it ...
Plzz let me know how do u feel about it through ur comments...
Nxt update will be served as ur wknd breakfast
Plz feel free to criticise

Luv piya


Edited by Crazypiya - 8 years ago
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Ressi res... Me first 😃
****
UNRESS
Amazing update Piya... 👏
ShraMan moments were cute...
Shravan kyun jaa raha hai Mumbai... Meko ghabrahat ho rahi hai yaar Piya... Plz usse sahi salamat vapas laana...
Last mei Toh bomb phoda tune... Urvashi... Like Srsly... Pehle se hi case ka tension Aur upar se Urvashi...
Bhagwan... Plz shravan ke raksha karna...
Juz Loved the update... Plz Update soon... Meri curiosity bohot high Ho gayi hai...
Love,
ANU 😊
Edited by anukulgr8 - 8 years ago
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Wow...as usual wonderful update dear..,,
Oh.. shravan leaving before 2 days... having some bad feeling...
WTH?? Urvashi?? Please plz no negative twist...
This is my most fav FF...becoz no negative things in this..
I want happy wala one only... want happy ShraMan...can't see sumo or shravan broken or crying..
Can't wait for next..
Thx for pm...
Waiting...
Luv.,.,.
LavSriya
Edited by amlavs - 8 years ago
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As usual lovely update👏... Everything was perfect.😳...really loved that part jab.. Sheavu left our pushkie and said auto leke aa jana! 🤣. But but but. Shravan ko kuch hona nahin chahiye... Agar use kuch hua to dekh lena! Hmmpphhh! 😡😡😡 Bo twists and turns plsss! And yeh urvashi kahan se aa gayi... 😕 Hope yeh bhi positive character ho! Update soon. Like real soon... Waiting already

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