Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144 - Page 65

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Posted: 9 years ago
Piyaaa!!!!!!!.. . Yeh kya kiya????...Shravan ko kuch nahi hona chahiye. ..bas!!!!
Baby. ..the beauty of your story is its positivity...please let it stay a happy and romantic story...koi sadness mat dena!
I was so looking forward to lots of romance and ched chad in mehendi and sangeet...
Jo bhi ho...please keep Shravan safe..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Piya,
A cliffhanger. Hmmm. Shravan going to Mumbai for an important case. The story taking an interesting turn and Urvashis entry. Its nice to see Sumans supporting Shravan. The outcome obviously will be a very +ve one. I know. You are going to show both Shravans and Sumans characters more stronger. This short term parting will make their relationship more stronger. Just loving the way the story is taking turn. It would have been so good to see this story on screen. Indian tv needs writers like you. Do update fast.
- Sri
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wooow awesome update. Loved it. Cutest shraman moments. PREEKAR scenes were nice too. Car wali romance was cool I mean hot. Shravan is going to Mumbai like now just before marriage. Yeh kahan ka case hai bhai!!!! Upar se Urvashi. Ek problem kaafi nahi tha Jo tsunami lekar aayi. Please Piya ab shraman ki life mein jyaada problems mat Lao pleeease. Get them married soon. update soon and thanks for the pm.
Love
Madhu
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice as always...
bt most importantly..new twist is perhaps coming up...& seems shravan is going to b in some prblm...feeling terribl...dnt knw why bt i cant resist my curious mind...hoping urvashi as a positve carectr like all...
lets see wht u invent...update soon piya...love 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg piya... it was awesome... loved it..
Ur choice of songs is bang on dr...
Pushman fights r so cute...
Cliffhanger 😭 ... can't wait to know why urvashi has cm? Plz update soon 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
I just realized this chapter has got almost every character's involvement in it. All malhotras, tiwaris, including kamalji, rakeshji and it has become a perfect blend of family drama, family's love,care and concern, couple romance, bromance, sisters wala pyar, devar bhabi fun, responsibility on social issues and jealousy. Mind blowing is a word less to describe.👏👏👏
there is beauty in every twist of events. Am in LOVE with this shravan sumo pyar and their naughtiness.😳

Yes , shravan is bold and naughty compensating things on behalf of sumo as well. 😳 Right from morning kiss to flying kiss and Making sumo accompanying him to airport to kidnapping her before going to airport...was <3 mazaaa ayaaa😉

Now there are more interesting twists coming up😃 I hope the case is not going to be just another case for shravan,since there are some big shots involved. They may add more red chilli wala spice to this drama ... right ?? (I liked when sumo supported shravan at this moment)

Also looks like urvashi is in play so we will get to see jealous sumo😆😆😆 Her innocence combined with newly found jealousy is going to be fun to watch yaar. Can't wait for the track. (*u won't believe am getting happy tears out of excitement now, am really VERY HIGH WITH HANGOVER DISEASE dear that am so desperate on shraman*)

I will stop here, because My comment is going towards the length of your chapter (*every writing need appreciation though*)

Now waiting is again going to be difficult. but still doing it

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Edited by Sithara.Soman - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res😊. Finally main jaldi as gayi.
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Need not to say this was a stupendously Wonderful update Di.
Shravan is going to visit Mumbai for a new case that too a threatening one. Shaadi ke do din pehle. Pls di choti behen samajh kar baat maanlo pls. Shravan ko theek thak vapas bhejna 😭
BTW Yeh chudail Urvashi kahan se aajata hai. But aapne bola tha ki no negative character in the story. So still clinging onto a hope. *Fingers Crossed*😲
Edited by ArpitaSingh1806 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
I literally loved how he kissed her everytime! But please its a request *with tears* that please m sensing very very bad things! please piya dont let it happen! its a Request! pleaaseee!! This story is literally my everything rn! M in love with this story!!! I hope everything will be good! and that Urvashi!!! Gah wo kia kr rhi hai! ab sumo kia kre gi! m tensed *_*
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great part. Can't wait to see shravan and suman together.
Waiting for next part

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