Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144 - Page 62

Originally posted by: ReebaS

Oh my god.. It was amazing..this is my first time when I am commenting on any 18+ post... Its really niceNext chapter update soon dear

Originally posted by: Sithara.Soman

Piya Piya piya

Kya Boloon muje sharam aa rahi hai😳

Sumo ko sab kuch Kamini &Nirmala

ko bathana pada😲

Shravan ne sumo ko anjaney mem bahuth hurt kiya

I feel so bad for Suman

Unko kuch control kara chahiye tha

I think next time he will control himself.

Sach mem update bahuth hot tha😳

Update soon dear

Originally posted by: krutish22

Amazing update

First time I comments on mature content

Beautifully penned everything specially pushkar parts.

laal laaal kaan and "Main ram sita ke life ka laxman banna chahta tha.. Hanumaan nahi.

He is really cute

6'4" ka kida🤣

I loved each part

Thanks for lovely update

Update next part soon

Originally posted by: LubSha

HI Piya,

Amazing update. You always surprise me, in a good way of course. I somewhere read in this forum about "Shravan's kumbhkaran testosterone", and you proved it right today. Lol.😆Ye kumbhkaran ko apni pasand mil gayi, he got carried away and hurt her. The more she seems shy, the bolder he gets. But let me tell you very beautifully written. Just like many, you made me comment on 18+ update, but l'm happy to do so. The way you unfolded the story after that was amazing, Your Sumo is naive, now everyone knows what happened and I think they might get them married in Varun's sagaai.😉to give him complete right on her, I don't think Shravan will be able to wait that long. As now she is officially his wife.

Keep surprising us, we love it. Update real soon.

Lubna.

Originally posted by: dhanyata

Oh My God, this is so much to handle, I mean we did have lots of love, naughtiness, care, concerns but equally many many many embarrassing moments😛😛😛

I never expected that kamini and nirmala will get to know EVERYTHING !😲😲

First, the infection thing itself got me like, what the hell, why are they investigating?? !! but then inside the room (closing my EYES TIGHTLY smiley)🤔😳😵

how will they face shravan and how will he do😆

Also, now they will be very careful that they won't allow both to be together at all, and will watch over them like eagle(*difficult times*)

ok Fun apart !! the chapter was so adorable. I very much liked the shravan's concern part and sumo's trust on him

Pushkar is funny as always. Vandy is cute, she tried her best to save shraman, but this jallli sumo spoiled it herself.

You cannot even dream of the joy and happiness that I felt after getting a PM from you !! was flying in the air...😃

Please continue soonish.

Originally posted by: arshuaar

beautifully penned...
loved it...
thanx for PM...😊

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Really Piya. ... What an amazing piece... I have read so many in this forum 18+ so for me this is not embaressing to read... Ya but while writing it may be difficult... Reading is different & writing is different... But well done it was really good written...

Kya karein Sumo hai hi itne irresistible ke Shravan ko resist nehin huwa... Uska haq banta hai Sumo pe akhir they are legally married... But Sumo... Pushkar was right iske pet mein kuch nehin pachta... But Sumo has done one thing clear that she is after all Shravan's wife legally... He was not fault also... I appriciate that... Sab kehdiya ab Sharavan ka toh class lenge dono mamma's...

Continue soon... & thanx for the PM ... I m above 18 year old... I m married... So no problem I don't mind reading 18 + ... Thanx for the concern...

Originally posted by: shaggy8

Beautifully penned...
Waiting for next part...