Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144 - Page 60

I enjoy remaining part (bcz some part I escape)

Soon Shravan will be singing O meri Sharmili ...😳 anyhow her hesitation seems so real!

The contrast is amazing...bold n determined and shy n sensitive !

You managed well... it was nowhere distasteful !

Kya Boloon muje sharam aa rahi hai😳

Sumo ko sab kuch Kamini &Nirmala

ko bathana pada😲

Shravan ne sumo ko anjaney mem bahuth hurt kiya

I feel so bad for Suman

Unko kuch control kara chahiye tha

I think next time he will control himself.

Sach mem update bahuth hot tha😳

Update soon dear

Amazing update

Beautifully penned everything specially pushkar parts.

laal laaal kaan and "Main ram sita ke life ka laxman banna chahta tha.. Hanumaan nahi.

He is really cute

6'4" ka kida🤣

I loved each part

Thanks for lovely update

Update next part soon

I never expected that kamini and nirmala will get to know EVERYTHING ! 😲😲

First, the infection thing itself got me like, what the hell, why are they investigating?? !! but then inside the room (closing my EYES TIGHTLY smiley) 🤔😳😵

how will they face shravan and how will he do 😆

Also, now they will be very careful that they won't allow both to be together at all, and will watch over them like eagle (*difficult times*)

ok Fun apart !! the chapter was so adorable. I very much liked the shravan's concern part and sumo's trust on him

Pushkar is funny as always. Vandy is cute, she tried her best to save shraman, but this jallli sumo spoiled it herself.

You cannot even dream of the joy and happiness that I felt after getting a PM from you !! was flying in the air...😃

Please continue soonish.

Amazing update. You always surprise me, in a good way of course. I somewhere read in this forum about "Shravan's kumbhkaran testosterone", and you proved it right today. Lol. 😆 Ye kumbhkaran ko apni pasand mil gayi, he got carried away and hurt her. The more she seems shy, the bolder he gets. But let me tell you very beautifully written. Just like many, you made me comment on 18+ update, but l'm happy to do so. The way you unfolded the story after that was amazing, Your Sumo is naive, now everyone knows what happened and I think they might get them married in Varun's sagaai. 😉 to give him complete right on her, I don't think Shravan will be able to wait that long. As now she is officially his wife.

Keep surprising us, we love it. Update real soon.

Lubna.