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mogu_togu

@mogu_togu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Your writing is superb... it is full on feelings. Dialogues are so real and so is pain and happiness... i egarly wait for new chapters from you...

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jazz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Amazing amazing
Totally loved it
Loved the ending can't wait to read next part sharavan is in trouble

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Rawish

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Congrats fot the new thread.

The chapter was good but I just wanted something mazedaar.

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Joyness

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Congratulations for the new thread...loved it...i think pre nuptials is khursnas ploy...beechara shravan...and sumo will not confront so another mu...kamini party something gonna happen...hope shravan protect sumo...waiting for the update . ..loved the update

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shrinidhi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

so many mu's, bechaara shravan.. khurana s gonna b back.. some serious actions on d way I guess.. kamini's party m excited.. wen shravan said 'u look real' I was like aww.. in single sentence u gave us his insight.. waiting fr d nxt chapter..

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manisha771

@manisha771

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Thanks for the PM lara...again a very very interesting chapter,
waiting eagerly for the next chapter, update soonish...

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1095142

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

That was nice lara.

Now suman should use her brains and understand shravan's change of behaviour is because of her addressing them as just friends. And poor meethi, suman needs to confront shravan and i bet shravan's reply wont come easily. Waiting eagerly for te next update. Make it soon.

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Thanks!

I guess I replied you twice!😆

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: memories_im
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The update was beautiful Lara! Sumo accepting her feelings to finally realizing the delicate state of their relationship. The fact that she got deviated from her mission to repay the debt hit her hard. I suppose this is the point where Sumo will again build walls around herself. The tough journey begins for both of them. I think Shravan won't have an idea about the papers being sent home. He is going to have a tough time deciphering Sumo's actions from now on. I can't wait to read what happens next. Please update soon Lara! Amazing work as always :)

Thanks!

Tough times are ahead, yes, but let's see to what extent really. 😉

Will updt asap.

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: dhanyata
Thanks for the diwali gift in the first place😃 it's getting interesting chapter by chapter. I'm surprised u involved meethi into the story for a reason and connecting her past with kurana. Interesting plot. Sumo is mad at shravan for hiding many things but what about she hid her meeting with sakshi earlier. stupid girl. It is so cute to know abt shravan bragging to ram abt sumo and her work😳.
Wrong timing she got the court papers😭 how would shravan find out and clear that mess. Will he try to sneak into her room. She already locked it 😕

She loves him but calls him only friend and he is getting mad at her for she gave him only this relationship.

P.S their scene getting up together and shravn thinking it to be a dream was adorable. Thanks for the pm.😊

Oh yes, happy diwali!!!!

And thanks a lot. 😳

Let's see what Shravan does, a lots been brewing up and making it more difficult by the second. 😕