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Posted: 9 years ago

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This is the first chapter on Thread 3 !!🥳 Woah! Thanks all you lovely people for making it happen. Love you all.🤗 *Tight hugs 🤗

Dedicating this chapter to all the readers ❤️❤️❤️ who've been dedicatedly commenting, for which we've now reached another new thread.

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It feels like Khurana's 🐷 coming nearer and with newer revelations of his disgustingness.

The pre-nuptial papers are surely setback for ShraMan, that means more trouble for Shravan. Remember the "bleeding road"? 😭

Suman is going to Kamini's halloween tea party. How many of you are looking forward to it?

Don't forget to press the like button if you've enjoyed this chapter, comment so that I know what you're thinking. Tell me which part, scene or dialogue you liked the most.

Thanks to all who've liked and commented, your support and feedback encourage me to no end, so keep it up everyone. 🤗🥳

Lots of love and hugs,❤️

Lara.

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PrincessAshVik

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hey Lara😃

Congratulations on having another thread!!😃

This chapter was interesting. New revelations and old MUs creating bigger MUs. I think that is how I will define it...

Tbh, I for one am not looking forward to that halloween tea party😆 Kamini surely has something up her sleeve.

My favourite scene would be Shravan waking up and going, "you look real" It was really sweet and spoke a lot about his feelings for her!😳😃

Let's just ignore Khurana for now, although I knew wahi hoga gadha!

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orion23

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Res!!

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Lara 🤗

I'm so sorry to be so late!

Aj kal I'm always late

Anyhow coming to the chapter...

You love playing with my fragile heart right😆

I'll go in order of it taking place...

The first part was absolute bliss!!

Suman admiring him, caressing his face with feather light touches❤️

Shravan waking up to you're so real

Maar de.. Bas maar hi de tu! He's been dreaming about her each morning... ☺️

His eyes popping out of sockets!!

They are lost in each other🤪

Sudden bathroom visit? Loo is always between them eh? Although Shravan does seem zoned out and I can't wait to see where his thoughts lie...

Breakfast encounter me like!

Furious Sumo me like..

The day she knows the reason is her acknowledging him as friend, well I'll love it I'm sure!

It's killing him isn't it!

Throughout most of this series you have maintained Shravan's character as that of a closed person, we don't get a lot of his thoughts, that keeps me on the edge of my seat always! 👏

PCT is doing great! Awesomeness...

I like this Ramnath! He's a darling!

Bahu ke haath ka khana😳

He's all set to retire!! Too cool!

Puskhu baby and Preeti are in to be caught 🥳

Khurana!!! The name gives me massive creeps!

He's way closer than I imagined!

Shravan is on his case, awesome!

The next part! A glimpse of bleeding all the way..

Now I'm not so sure if I'm game! Cause it hurt..

Who sent those papers? Please tell me its not Shravan...

WHY NOW!!!?

And then you leave us at that...

Jaldi jaldi update Lara...

I can't wait!!!

Amazing piece!

Intrigued throughout!

Love ❤️

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PrincessAshVik

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Unreserved and thank you for the PM!! Just received it😃

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Lara / Clara

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik
Hey Lara😃 Hey! First to comment... 🥳

Congratulations on having another thread!!😃 Thanks a lot!

This chapter was interesting. New revelations and old MUs creating bigger MUs. I think that is how I will define it... You defined it nicely. Yes.

Tbh, I for one am not looking forward to that halloween tea party😆 Kamini surely has something up her sleeve. Trick or treat... let's see what is that exactly come out of her wicked sleeves. 😉

My favourite scene would be Shravan waking up and going, "you look real" It was really sweet and spoke a lot about his feelings for her!😳😃 The besotted hubby dearest

Let's just ignore Khurana for now, although I knew wahi hoga gadha! Gadha and many more things, Suman will be seen inventive in the future giving him middle names 🤬🐷 😆

Take care. Will see yaa... hopefully soon again... tada! 🤗

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Safire

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Dear, i just read the chapter. under Thread 3! The story flow was awesome!!but as I am new here, i want to read all the other chapters to have a first hand knowledge of the story.i want to comment once I am done reading!! please bura math manna!

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Lara / Clara

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Originally posted by: Safire
Dear, i just read the chapter. under Thread 3! The story flow was awesome!!but as I am new here, i want to read all the other chapters to have a first hand knowledge of the story.i want to comment once I am done reading!! please bura math manna!

I appreciate that you want to gather the entire story first before commenting, makes sense really. So, no, I won't mind, but will wait for when you're finally done reading and ready to comment. 🤗

Take care and happy reading!❤️

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Lara / Clara

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Crazypiya
Awesome update

Thanks! 😳

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Izza

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Posted: 9 years ago

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The update was beautiful Lara! Sumo accepting her feelings to finally realizing the delicate state of their relationship. The fact that she got deviated from her mission to repay the debt hit her hard. I suppose this is the point where Sumo will again build walls around herself. The tough journey begins for both of them. I think Shravan won't have an idea about the papers being sent home. He is going to have a tough time deciphering Sumo's actions from now on. I can't wait to read what happens next. Please update soon Lara! Amazing work as always :)

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Sunain

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Laraaa...🤗

firstly soorriii for being a latei pie...again😳

waz damn buzy with mu studiez n my flu doznt want to leaf me as if hez in love with me...jitni taizzii say jaata hai utnni hi taazzi sy aata hai...m fedup of this fluuuie game yar..

nevermind...cuming to the chappy😃

Haaa...where to start from..quite speechless...or i shud say m in state of consternation..

starting from the beginning..

Sumo admiring him..caressing him ❤️

finally she realised she loves him..n was debating on telling him..

n shravan on the otherhand thought he was having a blissful dream...like seriously..his life was in his embrace sleeping with him..n he just cudnt believe it...hmm it happenss hanaa but wht he did after waking up was nonsense..😕

their breakfast argument was 🥺

BUFFOON...BIPOLAR BUFFOON..."no one had ever called me a buffoon before" no i feel like hez insane..😆..like as if tht was the only thing she spoke in 2 MIN of babbling

n now they were arguing on her cellphone..(sigh)

Glad to knw her PCT is doing good...n simmiy was ❤️.."by the way,has tht tall husband of yours forget to kiss you good-morning today"😆

poor simmey..sumo ny ussy bhi nhi choora😆

Ramnath visited her...i sense sumthing fishy..😕

n moreover "Kamini Chachi" is being soo sugary..paaka daal mein tu buhat kuch kala hai🤓

Now ths part gave me goose bumps...Khurana ka mere mension aur meri tu halat kharab..

Khurana is such a creep bus**** jack a*** if it were in my hands thn i wud hav rip his head off..in mere seconds..Owlloo ka ***😡😡(sorry...yar my anger is at cloud nine)

n khurana games hav been started aur us ny apni pahli chaal bhi chal dii...bad timing yar😭😭

She for the very first time was tempted to bloch his entry...ahhaaa these fu****** MUz..🥺

Pre- NUPTUAL PAPERS..😡

Wht the hell will happen nxt...damn damn worried n scared...

Lara was an incrediable upii...full of amusement

plz plz update soon yar..cant wait😕

loved it🤗

Edited by Sunain - 9 years ago