Lara,I am so sorry for not having unressed earlier.I was really caught up with stuff and as I was going to unress today,you update this chapter so if you don't mind I am going to comment here.
First of all,Congratulations on a new thread,that too 3rd one! Woah!! So happy to see this going,hoping for some more.
Coming to the story now.Sumo is in love and they way Shravan reacted with her calling a 'friend' shows how effed up he is by being friendzoned by his own very wife!
Also I love this new so in love with her husband Sumo,that admiring Shravan face and the way the intamacy grew between them in the morning was so beautifully written by that actually I could not help but smile and go red together.Kudos.
Then came Sumo grabbing Shravan's elbow and calling him a 'Bipolar Buffon' LOLOLOL,you rock man! Poor man needed that.
And who sticks a tabs on a broken screen of a mobile? Only our Sumo does.
The 'Definitely no morning kiss' was again a hit by you.Made me laugh really hard.Where do you get such amazing ideas from?
Why do I smell something fishy between Ramnath being so sweet and sugary,like he is up to something? Has he sent that paper to Sumo?
Also I loved that sweet conversation between Meethi and Sumo,your characterization of Suman is wonderfully done.I am loving her.
Looks like Sumo is going to meet Khurana soon,maybe have something related to him during the tea party? Excited for it.
Why do you have to be so evil and have such distances and lack of communication between Shravan and Sumo? Why? Readers maaf nahi karege!
You are one heck of a writer and I really love looking forward and reading your stories.You are blessed!
Update Soon :)
-Mitali
