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evaviego

@evaviego

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#151

Beautiful Update Nith.. 👍🏼

Great concept and a super duper ending.. ❤️

Absolutely loved the rubix cube idea and the bold sumo... 😉

Fab Writing 👏

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Sunain

@Sunain

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: nith125

Sunain 🤗
Thank you so much 😳! I am glad you liked it this much. The 10 year gap is a long one and I felt that in the show they never got an opportunity to address it at all, so I wanted to write something which would show how much Shravan had missed Sumo and looks like I got the point across 😊
Again I am so so so glad that you loved it. Thank you for such a beautiful comment.

I will definitely PM you when I next write.
Love you too 🤗

U definately got the point across..😉

Moreover wht i badly missed in the show was Sumo's confession..😔

but u pulled it really nicely😃

so love u for tht🤗

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#153

Nith!!!!

Damn👏

This is brilliant!!!

Shravan took her to Oxford

That was my dream you know! I always wanted him to take her to his place of dwelling for 10 years!

It was very well put by you!!

And that bit where Oxford took her chashmish❤️

Loved it!!

I loveddd the proposal!

All the hints and all of it was beyond

I always wanted to see her propose and you fulfilled that as well🤗

Maza aa gaya hon!

Thank you for this 😳

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nith125

@nith125

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: orion23
Nith!!!!
Damn👏
This is brilliant!!!

Shravan took her to Oxford
That was my dream you know! I always wanted him to take her to his place of dwelling for 10 years!
It was very well put by you!!
And that bit where Oxford took her chashmish❤️
Loved it!!

I loveddd the proposal!
All the hints and all of it was beyond
I always wanted to see her propose and you fulfilled that as well🤗

Maza aa gaya hon!
Thank you for this 😳

Zoya 🤗

Thank you so much for your comment 😊 , glad you liked it !

@bold : It did, didn't it. Sumo wouldn't admit it but I am sure she was jealous 😳

Actually initially I was of the opinion that there is no need for a proposal by both of them. They should have just kissed and made up, but since Shravan proposed, it is only fair that Sumo does too 😉

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nith125

@nith125

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: Roshni2015
Nith,
What a fab update... Oxford n Shravan being excited to show her where he has been in these 10 years, the I love you rubik cube, the emotional talk n the super Shravan plan... It was amazing, I loved it.
Wonderfully written dear...
Cheers!!

Rosh my love 🤗!

Thank you so much ! Glad you loved it 😳

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nith125

@nith125

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: Sana_Jannat
👏 lovely 👏

Thank you Sana ! Glad you liked it 😳

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nith125

@nith125

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: evaviego
Beautiful Update Nith.. 👍🏼
Great concept and a super duper ending.. ❤️
Absolutely loved the rubix cube idea and the bold sumo... 😉

Fab Writing 👏

Thanks a lot Eva 😊 Glad you lied it 😳

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TangledThoughts

@TangledThoughts

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#158

This was so BEAUTIFUL!!
We should have an epilogue tv series for Shraman and exactly these 3 episodes should be telecasted.
It was so unique.

All Shraman fantasies were fulfiled. He took her to visit Oxford and economically!! 😆
The song beautifuly resonates with them. Each step was a leap into the past. She lived his life, his loneliness.

And the best part was Shravan describing following a young Sumo. I actually imagined the teen Sumo followed by bespectacled Shravan and the older Shravan-Suman trailing behind them shushing each-other.Could have been a visual delight.

Aww!! The confession was perfect. Loved her cube.

His clues bring about his heartbreaking vulnerability. And so glad that Sumo realised it. Loved her sibsequent boldness. Shravu needs regular doses.

This was ❤️

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Meera

@Jerry2308

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#159

Amazing update. .secret Oxford trip..shravan got messed up with the hints😆..nd sumo asks want any more hints...loved it

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Akriti12

@Akriti12

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#160

Hey Nith...amazing update..👏..loved it..

Shravan & Sumo..both of them planning simultaneously & that too nearly same thing..😊

Shravan's note making is amazing...how he is gettin all confused with it but the best one is "Mere husband:)"..soo cutee..

really loved their oxford trip...and also shravan's eagerness to make sumo know about the ten long years of his life in oxford as she is the only one for him,his soulmate..❤️

but the best part here is Sumo's confession..its so sweet..the idea of tailor made rubix cube is so creative..👏..so shramanlicious...

and last but not the least, sumo's hint..so sumo like..🤣..

Best wishes for u..keep writing..😊