Hints development - A Shraman TS / Last part : Page 15 - Page 15

Originally posted by: nith125

Thank you so so much ! I am very happy that you liked it.

@bold : That song 😊 Old hindi songs just seem to be getting better with time somehow na ? I remember they used to play this a lot in "Rangoli" in the good old days of DD. I love that song, one of my all time favourites ❤️

Hope you had a good Diwali !

Thank you all for your lovely comments
Will reply individually tomorrow.
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O my God 😊 this was adorable to the power of infinity. What a surprise shrav gave sumo . he almost kidnapped her to london😳 hw sweet he wants to share about his life in london with her. He imagined her in few places. Definitely he did. Our shravan's love is so intense. How beautiful it would have been if they showed some of these things in the show.

Originally posted by: donottulip

Hey Nith ! 😊

Read all the three parts in one go !

This was absolutely brilliant :')

This story is going to be with me for a long time. I relate to it so much I had tears in my eyes while reading.

The hints part got to me. I have been doing something similar for quite some time now , and your story tugged at my heart strings.

Thank You so much for writing this . :') ❤️

I felt every single emotion you portrayed , love , jealousy , confusion , disappointment , overwhelming love and sadness , unrequited love , Oh My God I am crying.

Keep writing.

God Bless You x

Originally posted by: Sunain

Hiii Nith... 😃
Nith Nith Nith...tht was incredable... 👏
Loved the whole Oxford trip ⭐️
Shravans hints were amazing as always.. 😉
The way u potrayed their predicament was 👍🏼
Really loved his excitement to show where he lived for so long away from her n his dream place ws ❤️
The way she proposed him ws ❤️
Tht rubic cube idea ws brilliant...quite diff 😳
Thn Sumo found his hinties n its after effect or i shud say result was ❤️ 😳
Finally thy became one completely in all senses 😳
Tht was a bit emotional also..but loved it 😃
Hope to get more...soon n dont forget to pm me 😉
Love u 🤗

Originally posted by: Safire

Nith, that was the first hindi movie i saw with my bro&sis!!and i fell in love with Vaijayanthi mala instantly😉

Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho

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Nith This is AMAZING and ADORABLE 😳

Beginning with Shravan taking Sumo to Oxfard and packing her stuff,Husband and Wife goals *_*

Thank you so much 😳

Also I loved the Handbag and and Mobile fight,to adorable and your writing brought out the perfect essence of it!

Lol ! I enjoyed that bit too, and that is typical ShraMan behaviour 😆

Also I really really loved was the part where you mentioned that Oxfard has stolen her Chasmish and given a different Mr.Malhotra and DAMN that got me! Kudos fod thinking,going to that level and bringing it up.

Thank you once again ! No woman stands a chance against Sumo but Oxford does 😉

That praposal bit by Sumo and the cube part was so unique and beautiful and your words just made it shine brighter.

Shravan being the baby he is, was so adorable.

Nith,you really leave me craving for more.

Haaahaa I so loved the baby Shravan's reaction while he got to know that Sumo had read all the hints and was probably pisssed.Had me in fits.

🤣 He is not 16 anymore though his antics speak otherwise. Making a list is still ok, but he should have not got caught. Poor guy ! Sumo just played along 😉

Then came Sumo being bold AF and taking of her nightgown along with Shravn's shirt and asking if he needed any more hints!

That was EPIC!

Left to himself, Shravan would have sulked for another week, hence Sumo decided to take in her own hands 😉 😆. Sumo is "Sumo" after all 😳

It was one heck of an update and you killed it!

Keep rocking.

Looking forward to more stories by you.

Thank you so much Mittu ! My actual plan was that this will be my last FF, but looking at the response I got on this one and the fact that I crave so much for ShraMan I might write more.

Originally posted by: dhanyata

O my God 😊 this was adorable to the power of infinity. What a surprise shrav gave sumo . he almost kidnapped her to london😳 hw sweet he wants to share about his life in london with her. He imagined her in few places. Definitely he did. Our shravan's love is so intense. How beautiful it would have been if they showed some of these things in the show.

A true lover indeed.

Again it's proved tat this show has got so much potential. We can dig out so many plots from their love life and this itself can run for years together...2000 episodes wont be enough then. They won't need any new characters to drag story. How can they cut short such a beautiful show.

I don't want to again jump to the moping stage but seeing the beauties you are exploring makes me think so. Can't help.

Thanks a lot. 😊 U showed us a beautiful dream

Keep writing more.

nith yar thanks for the pm...nith yar wat a chapter it was...beautiful...it was beautiful...I really loved it completely... wow yar .. how he wanted her to visit Oxford...he made a plan n church wow ...it was so lovely... the church scene was the bestest one..how he'd imagined her there... n his hints development...God he badly needs to work on that ;) n sumo finally said she loves him...God really... n the ring oh my it must be beautiful...but didn't fit her finger ;) haha... n sumo read his hints n after that watevr happened was beautiful again...finally sumo took the charge n they made love... n the songs u chose were beautiful especially barfi movie's song... loved it literally ... pls pm me whenever u write next thing on shraman...:)

Nith,