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Safire

@Safire

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#131

Nith, one word-- marvellous!!👏 i don't know how to express myself! you have penned this so well that I could imagine shraman inside the plane and walking through the streets of Oxford!!!!and sumo coming to know about the hints + her love confession finally!!!! And that song from MADHUMATI OH! HATS OFF TO YOU!!!

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Safire

@Safire

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#132

Woh!!i forgot to tell you , it's the true Diwali GIFT indeed!!!

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nith125

@nith125

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: Malika
Aww thats so cute Nith...Finally Sumo could solve the rubix cube! 😳 I wish we cud see it in the show too...I can so imagine Shra's reaction when Sumo would have confessed...He'd have been ecstatic
Loved this part...please keep writing more wheneva u find time.

Thank you so much Mallika ! Glad you liked it 😳

How many moments we missed in the show , can't stop thinking about that even after 3 weeks on no EKDV.

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nith125

@nith125

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: pinky.padda
wow
totally amazing
absolutely loved it
superb

Thank you Pinky ! I enjoyed writing it and I am so glad you enjoyed reading it 😳

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nith125

@nith125

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: Gurveen
Amazing update

Thank you Gurveen 🤗

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nith125

@nith125

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: bhaktiii
Superb... Loved it!

Thank you Bhakti 😳

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nith125

@nith125

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: _Eternity_
Nith.. 🤗
Beautiful ending dear... 🤗
Shra plans to show her Oxford and all his fav places and then confession of ShraMan... ❤️
That ring scene was so cute.. ❤️
Sumo read his hints.. 😆
Awesome shot dear... 👏
Thnx dear...
Can I expect an epilogue... 😛

Thank you so much 🤗

I am so glad you liked it. I kind of felt I was going overboard with the Oxford trip but there was no place else that Shravan would want to show her first na ?

@bold : Thank you ! Since they were in love with their younger selves, I felt each of them would have bought the other something which fits the younger version, so Shravan bought a ring that is too big for Sumo now and Sumo bought a book about making his eyesight better 😉

I will try to write an epilogue, might take a while though. But as long as you are there to read, I will write 😳

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nith125

@nith125

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: Safire
Nith, one word-- marvellous!!👏 i don't know how to express myself! you have penned this so well that I could imagine shraman inside the plane and walking through the streets of Oxford!!!!and sumo coming to know about the hints + her love confession finally!!!! And that song from MADHUMATI OH! HATS OFF TO YOU!!!

Thank you so so much ! I am very happy that you liked it.

@bold : That song 😊 Old hindi songs just seem to be getting better with time somehow na ? I remember they used to play this a lot in "Rangoli" in the good old days of DD. I love that song, one of my all time favourites ❤️

Hope you had a good Diwali !

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donottulip

@donottulip

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#139

Hey Nith ! 😊

Read all the three parts in one go !

This was absolutely brilliant :')

This story is going to be with me for a long time. I relate to it so much I had tears in my eyes while reading.

The hints part got to me. I have been doing something similar for quite some time now , and your story tugged at my heart strings.

Thank You so much for writing this . :') ❤️

I felt every single emotion you portrayed , love , jealousy , confusion , disappointment , overwhelming love and sadness , unrequited love , Oh My God I am crying.

Keep writing.

God Bless You x

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Sunain

@Sunain

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#140

Hiii Nith... 😃
Nith Nith Nith...tht was incredable... 👏
Loved the whole Oxford trip ⭐️
Shravans hints were amazing as always.. 😉
The way u potrayed their predicament was 👍🏼
Really loved his excitement to show where he lived for so long away from her n his dream place ws ❤️
The way she proposed him ws ❤️
Tht rubic cube idea ws brilliant...quite diff 😳
Thn Sumo found his hinties n its after effect or i shud say result was ❤️ 😳
Finally thy became one completely in all senses 😳
Tht was a bit emotional also..but loved it 😃
Hope to get more...soon n dont forget to pm me 😉
Love u 🤗

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