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I visited forum after ages n what surprises i find. Yaaay... This story was so cute n adorable. Read all three at a go... D cute lil hints... So sweet. Write more

So sorry Nith I'm late and too lazy to find where I ressed 😆
First of all huge round of applause for a super long update 👏 👏
I guess this is the first time you written anything this long ...me like it 😳
Coming to the update
Shravan took sumo to an Oxford trip 😃
I so wanted him to show the place he spent a decade away from her!!
The proposal was too cute .SS Ring which won't fit Sumo 😆 and the rubic cube that read I love you.
Your ideas are so fresh and innovative 👏
Sumo getting upset to find he needed hints to know she loved him...very well written
N finally Bold Mrs Malhotra made a move 😉
Simply awesome !!!!!!
Loved it to bits !!!

This is truly Amazing...👏this is the 4th time I'm reading this update...loved each and every part of this update

Originally posted by: pearl.white

This was so BEAUTIFUL!!
We should have an epilogue tv series for Shraman and exactly these 3 episodes should be telecasted.
It was so unique.

All Shraman fantasies were fulfiled. He took her to visit Oxford and economically!! 😆
The song beautifuly resonates with them. Each step was a leap into the past. She lived his life, his loneliness.

And the best part was Shravan describing following a young Sumo. I actually imagined the teen Sumo followed by bespectacled Shravan and the older Shravan-Suman trailing behind them shushing each-other.Could have been a visual delight.

Aww!! The confession was perfect. Loved her cube.

His clues bring about his heartbreaking vulnerability. And so glad that Sumo realised it. Loved her sibsequent boldness. Shravu needs regular doses.

This was ❤️

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Amazing update. .secret Oxford trip..shravan got messed up with the hints😆..nd sumo asks want any more hints...loved it

Originally posted by: Akriti12

Hey Nith...amazing update..👏..loved it..

Shravan & Sumo..both of them planning simultaneously & that too nearly same thing..😊

Shravan's note making is amazing...how he is gettin all confused with it but the best one is "Mere husband:)"..soo cutee..

really loved their oxford trip...and also shravan's eagerness to make sumo know about the ten long years of his life in oxford as she is the only one for him,his soulmate..❤️

but the best part here is Sumo's confession..its so sweet..the idea of tailor made rubix cube is so creative..👏..so shramanlicious...

and last but not the least, sumo's hint..so sumo like..🤣..

Best wishes for u..keep writing..😊

Originally posted by: shalz_123

I visited forum after ages n what surprises i find. Yaaay... This story was so cute n adorable. Read all three at a go... D cute lil hints... So sweet. Write more

Originally posted by: sapphire3

So sorry Nith I'm late and too lazy to find where I reside 😆

First of all huge round of applause for a super long update 👏 👏
I guess this is the first time you written anything this long ...me like it 😳
Coming to the update
Shravan took sumo to an Oxford trip 😃
I so wanted him to show the place he spent a decade away from her!!
The proposal was too cute .SS Ring which won't fit Sumo 😆 and the rubic cube that read I love you.
Your ideas are so fresh and innovative 👏
Sumo getting upset to find he needed hints to know she loved him...very well written
N finally Bold Mrs Malhotra made a move 😉
Simply awesome !!!!!!
Loved it to bits !!!

Originally posted by: -siliya-

This is truly Amazing...👏this is the 4th time I'm reading this update...loved each and every part of this update

Shravan's note making is amazing...loved their Oxford trip...Sumo's confession is my favorite and rubic cube idea was amazing...

Loved it...plz write more

Originally posted by: nith125

Shalini 🤗 Thank you so much ! Glad you liked it 😳

Why aren't you here more often ? Do come and peep in 😊