Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 84

Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho

Originally posted by: -AnnieQueen-

Actually you know I also had a slight feeling about that but the truth is while writing, I too felt that some dialogues can't be written without them being cheesy. it's just the way they are. they might seem that way but that's normal I guess. I mean come on love tends to be cheesy so that is obvious😃

Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho

Hhaahaa I know I know but as I said hota hai,I just felt and I said but we all all know that Zoya killed it!

Its good, you should speak your mind😛

Kya kare,we are,at least I am a calorie conciouss lady 😆😉

Me not so much😆 Actually not at all.. Calories don't bother me😉

Kisi din fursat se batana kaunse dialogues in which updates?

Cause I can't seem to find them😆

And I would love to know!

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

I really enjoyed reading the epi, dear,

and I'm glad that it was so long.

When you call it an episode, heart goes *Woosh*

The happiness and the relief in ShraMan stood out perfectly through everything, it announced proudly their happily ever after. 🤗

Yes it did!!

Loved Shravan's tulip surprise and his gifts, and then there was Sumo's gift to Shravan. ❤️

Gifts should always be heartfelt nahi?

Shravan's gotten exhibitionist to an unbelievable level here, thank God for Malhotras just either blushing or laughing and not giving speeches over "sanskar"; "parampara", and "Mariyada" like in the other shows. 😆

They always came across as a highly cool bunch of people... Point in case the photo fiasco. Other than Kamini who tried to ruin things everyone else was pretty chill...

The best part ( the one I liked the most) was Sumo wishing mini Shravan and Sumos to the shooting star. ❤️

I'm toh imagining how their mini versions will look like...

It's something when you're star gazing and find a shooting star that always appeals to me❤️

Also Shravan "Kaleidoscopes" speech was beautiful and thoughtful. 👏

I always thought of them when Kaleidoscope popped anywhere. I relate it to people.. There is not one person on earth that hasn't been broken, and most of them are amazing individuals. Much like kaleidoscopes 😳

Oh wow! What I see in the second part of the epi - they're prego...

that too with twins!

Congratulations and celebrations!!!!! 🥳

Full fledged!!!

Once again here - Shravan's nightmare. It was like a beautiful - unreal - trouble in the paradise and I loved it. 👏👏👏

It will continue to haunt him and at times Suman's insecurities will come to fore, in Mrs. and Mr. and my future writings... Cause that's just how human psyche works haina?

Samar and Samaira!

Wonderful babies (all three😆 of them) and even more wonderful the family.

A perfect ending to the lovely story. 🤗

I'm glad to have won you over 🤗

Trust me when I say I was waiting to see your thoughts on this one...

Now am waiting for your next project, I hope you'll keep writing. Would really love to read more and more and more Shraman from you.

I positively will! Of that I have no doubt.. Cause writing them has become an addiction...

*Let's keep this forum rocking with such awesome works. ⭐️

Lets

Lots of love and hugs!

Lots of love and hugs back!

- Lara.

Originally posted by: kennashreign

Thanks a lot for this Zoya! This epilogue has encompassed all the aspects of ShraMan's life we didnt get to see. Loved it! Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: Roshni2015

Zoya,

Rosh🤗

Meri jaan... 🤗

I know I'm late in wishing for Diwali... Still Happy Diwali nonetheless.. Hope you had a blast...

Happy Diwali to you too!! I did.. Hope you did as well😳

Coming to the Maha Epilogue... It was FAB. Absolutely beautiful, amazingly penned.

Shuriyaaa

Shravan kissed in front of all.. Shravan could have been brazen in his declarations of love..

You fulfilled the desires of a ShraMan SR too... Nice n hot!!

The shayaris were superb... Girl, you are way too talented..

The doting dad Shravan... Aahh, bliss... He would have been just like you wrote.. The best'est dad to his kids.. You touched on his vulnerability too, something that's synonymous with him. Shravan showering his love on Sumo.. Can so imagine him doing that..

This part had me grinning like an idiot, smiling like a smitten kid n in splits with laughter... Zoya, baby you induced so many emotions with your piece.

I'm glad I did... And thank you so much for having loved it so! Means a lot to me

You know, this is the 2nd time I'm experiencing the ending of the show.. The last episode had got me sentimental too..but it was rushed n truth be told not what we expected.. This story fulfilled all the expectations of what I wanted the climax of EDKV to be... Whatever I wanted to see, you portrayed so beautifully through this story.. Honestly this is your masterpiece baby... I have loved all your stories but this.. This is something else..maybe more so coz so many emotions are attached to it..

Ayiooo... Itne saare feels! Thank you!!!

Shravan is one amazing character n like I say one of the very best characters written on Indian telly..

I am yet to find a character that has moved me as much as Shravan has. Very well written character indeed!

SS the eternal love story... So subtle yet so powerful..

*Blushes*

After the show ended, this story kept them alive for me.. But now.. They will forever be alive in memories...

And the works of the many amazing writers this forum is blessed with

Love you Zoya... For this story n all the others which have brought smiles to my face.

Love you too!!!

Love,

Roshni