Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 66

Zoya bro *holding ears*
Sorry for being undeniably late.
I read but was caught up to leave a reply.

But but the update was lovely.
How adorable these two are <3

Shravan descended the stairs, holding Suman's hand firmly in his.
YAS . Something I wanted to see but glad I read <3

How big is his heart <3
Maaf kardiya but asked for time.
Justified :)

"Mujhe kaha le jaa rahi ho" He sat on the bed pouting.
Yeh banda jaan leke chodega <3

"Nahi baba! Tum toh jaan ho meri.."
Awww Sumo <3
Humari bhi , hahah :D

Mamiji ne dekh liya .
Hahah , sahi hai :D

He faked his pain just to spend time.
"Nahi dikha sakta, shaadi nahi hui hai na abhi.." He fell on the bed laughing.
Hahaha , I cracked up so bad at this.
He is leaving no stone unturned in annoying and flushing her . :D

And finally the memory box made its entry <3
That was lovely.

Married with all the rituals to be one who were already each other's <3
This was an amazing writeup:)

-God bless .
Much love *hugs* ^_^

Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho

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Psycho!!!! ❤️

Ch 3- I always longed and wished to see Shravan,just like a baby burying his head in Sumo' stomach and you brought it out with perfection and I could feel those feels😳

Guilty pleasures eh!

Also the morning that followed while Sumo sat admiring Shravan and later apologized and confessed after the late night thought pondering was adorable yet depthfull at the same time!

She needed to apologise I feel... Galti sabki thi, one person taking the fall was

The way you brought out Ramnath's truth with mentioning everything in detail,even including the letter which he and Kamini read was way beyond brilliant.Also I loved how you took the stand of Shravan being angry from both Nirmala and Sumo too,after all they being right were somewhere wrong too and had hurt him.His pain,his longing and his shock way too brilliantly written by you.Kudos!

Thank you so much hon!!😳

And then came Shravan being in the hospital and ofcourse that had to happen,who the hell stays fit and fine after being hit by the hammer right on his head?

Also glad that Sumo bursted out on Nirmala,that woman deserved that bit and the slap that followed,AMAZING!

Meri dil ki umeed thi to see Chomudent getting slapped!

Sumo's feelings while Shravan ignored her were so realistically put that I could feel them as if I was going through it.

Woh show mai ekdam se theek ho gaya tha, kuch bhi😆

Finally when Shravan talked to Sumo and cleared out stuff,it got a bit cheesy but then soon Shravan was put really well by you(the thing about his heart being big)!

The proposal and Sumo looking like a bai was so cute and full of sugar!

Glad😛

Ch 4-Shravan announcing his love for Sumo to the Tiwari and Malhotra clan was amazing,koi mujhe bhi Shravan dedo!

Hum sabko mangta hai Shravan😆

Then followed Shravan accepting Ramnath and Nirmala,once again brilliantly and realistically put out by you.

Shravan and Sumo to live apart till their wedding happens and Shravan being a gol gappa and sitting,sulking while Sumo was talking to him,explaining him was sooo cute,such a baby!

Namik toh maar hi deta kasam se

Shravan's tadap to get marrired ASAP and teh pandit getting to live for a day more,hilarious!

Also the Shravan and him kissing Sumo down the neck,AHHAHAHAA Feels 😳

Then Mamiji caught them and when Mami asked who had bitten Sumo, Shravan said 'Meine Kata Tha'.GOSH! I laughed really really hard😆

Me too🤣

The back pain and the return of heart attack,way to much fun.I could read that a 50 times more and still not get bored.The swelling part,OMG you are way to naughty,not like I am complaining though.I enjoyed it😉

Naught toh hum sab hai kaafi.. Very sanskari like that😉

Shravan sneaking into Sumo's room at night seeing the memory box and keeping the letter in his pocket,too much of love and emotional stuff happening which I definitely loved.The sangeet,Sumo denying him to meet after haldi everything was really nice.

And finally the wedding happened and all the emotions and sequences that were involved were beautiful.

Shukriya!

As always you bring out the best in whatever you right.I love your works and the minute details too,not to forget the length😉

Hahaha... iss baar zyada hi ho gaya tha😆

Chalo ab cheti cheti update karo!

Ji madam!

Originally posted by: pearl100

Zoya 😃 Finally I read the 3rd chapter 😃 I loved everything about it, so well you have written dear 👏 It was beautiful chapter, the way the sumo slowly started to understand shrvn and gave him time to heal, she is there as his sangini in the right sense...The way Ramu spilled everything to Shrvn was good, was waiting for that moment, shrvn has a golden heart and he knows how to forgive everyone.

The first scene was beautiful, he felt so peaceful sleeping on her lap and she was there for him he felt it instantly...You are really good at writing such scenes yaar, Pushku was right both of them didn't deserve shrvn at all. You made all the scenes very realistic 👏 I totally enjoyed reading it...Will be back with the next one later ...Till then take care.

Originally posted by: Adeeba.Ayub

Zoya bro *holding ears*
Sorry for being undeniably late.
I read but was caught up to leave a reply.

Arey koi nahi ya! Stress nahi hai😛

But but the update was lovely.
How adorable these two are <3

Hainaa!!

Shravan descended the stairs, holding Suman's hand firmly in his.
YAS . Something I wanted to see but glad I read <3

Ethereal!

How big is his heart <3
Maaf kardiya but asked for time.
Justified :)

Yo😎 Dil ki jagah uske paas goofa hai😉

"Mujhe kaha le jaa rahi ho" He sat on the bed pouting.
Yeh banda jaan leke chodega <3

Ek din for sure 🥳

"Nahi baba! Tum toh jaan ho meri.."
Awww Sumo <3
Humari bhi , hahah :D

He's like jag ki jaan!

Mamiji ne dekh liya .
Hahah , sahi hai :D

Mari nahi bas sakht jaan!

He faked his pain just to spend time.
"Nahi dikha sakta, shaadi nahi hui hai na abhi.." He fell on the bed laughing.
Hahaha , I cracked up so bad at this.
He is leaving no stone unturned in annoying and flushing her . :D

Haina! Epic tha.. I wanted a moment but ekdam serious nahi😆 And you can trust these two to goof up big time even in intimacy...

And finally the memory box made its entry <3
That was lovely.

Much awaited!

Married with all the rituals to be one who were already each other's <3
This was an amazing writeup:)

Thank you hon!!

-God bless .
Much love *hugs* ^_^

Zoya Api
Mind blowing update
Shravan is naughty as well as besharm and Mamijis reaction 😆
Thanks a lot for lambu update
Love and Hugs 🤗

My apologies for the late reply.

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Zoya Api
Mind blowing update
Shravan is naughty as well as besharm and Mamijis reaction 😆
Thanks a lot for lambu update
Love and Hugs 🤗

Originally posted by: kennashreign

My apologies for the late reply.

This was so full of feels. Loved it! I am glad Shravan decided to let go of hate and choose love. Zoya, this update was high on the happiness quotient. Cheers!

Originally posted by: AbhilashaM

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Originally posted by: AbhilashaM

At last I read the second part .

I am speechless here Di!

Hehehe you are!

The marriage couldn't have been better.

Well only if Namik could have played Shravan

Will be waiting for an epilogue.

Afternoon tomorrow!

Love

Love back!!

PS: Please pardon me for this chotu sa comment but I don't know what to say. You always make me fell at loss of words.

Aww man! Koi nahi.. tu aayi woh hi bohot hai!