Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 57

Originally posted by: Safire

Hello orion23! What to say! Iam spellbound! you are such an amazing writer that I have no words to appreciate you👏i don't know from where to begin! It was a mixture of all emotions to be honest!!

Thank you so much hon!

During the mother _son dialogue part and the memory box part i cried. And the song from unphad was so nicely brought in an apt manner in the story!

Shukriya...

As i am very happy reading your story so am i sad that this is ending😭

Ya well it had to end someday...

i want to write more but didn't get enough words right now!!! anyways I will come commenting as and when I feel like bcoz i feel that I have missed out on something!!!!!

Aww, take your time, no issues😛

my hugs and good wishes!!!!!

Hugs back!!

Originally posted by: noexcuse

Alternative ending = dream ending. Pure ❤️
Beautiful dear.

Originally posted by: aachal20

Thanks for pm.

Originally posted by: aachal20

Wow.so long update.but love reading it.your amazing writer.finally shravan marriage. With all the family present.superb update.pl z pm epilogue.[B][/B]

Originally posted by: arshuaar

thanx for PM...😊
no words...
so beautifully written...
...Shraman...

Originally posted by: aanchalverma04

This was so nicely written, absolutely loved each part! Can't wait for for the next update!!

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

OMG OMG OMG! Zoyaaa.. This was so so surreal. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter.

Glad you did!

It was as thought you have rolled up all the emotions into this and given it to us to read.

Awww...

I loved how Shravan and Sumo's relationship grew with every passing day until the marriage. ❤️

Haina!

Eagerly waiting for the Epilogue.

Me too!!!

Please continue soon.

I will...

~ Mrina <3

Originally posted by: Sana_Jannat

🤗 in short i Loved it,
ShraMan ❤️ 😳
Pushkar 😊 Thank U Sooo Much Zoya for fulfilling Wish 🤗

Originally posted by: an_chau

RES...

Of course I had to be the first... You're one of the writers who give me a reason to stalk the forum every day...

😛

Aww dude! I love you!

UNRES...

Besharam Shravan: check

ShraMan emerging as each other's strength rather than weakness: check

ShraMan discovering each other as spouses: check

Shravan discovering memory box: check

ShraMan intense scenes: check

Pushky-Shravan banter: check

ShraMan PDA: check

ShraMan ki real-wali shaadi: check

I like how you've made a checklist!!

Aur sabse badi baat mere liye: Shravan Malhotra ko finally mil hi gayee some peace and happiness!

I just needed to see him happy so bad I can't even tell you!!

Ab khushi se marr jaoon main!!! Par uss-se pehle epilogue de de yaara!!!

Don't die please!! Please don't die😆

Big wala jhappi... LOVED THE UPDATE!

Jhappis right back!

PS: Woh picture of jhumka with the hickey... Ummdah... 👍🏼

Shukriya!