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Ch 3- I always longed and wished to see Shravan,just like a baby burying his head in Sumo' stomach and you brought it out with perfection and I could feel those feels😳 Also the morning that followed while Sumo sat admiring Shravan and later apologized and confessed after the late night thought pondering was adorable yet depthfull at the same time!
The way you brought out Ramnath's truth with mentioning everything in detail,even including the letter which he and Kamini read was way beyond brilliant.Also I loved how you took the stand of Shravan being angry from both Nirmala and Sumo too,after all they being right were somewhere wrong too and had hurt him.His pain,his longing and his shock way too brilliantly written by you.Kudos!
And then came Shravan being in the hospital and ofcourse that had to happen,who the hell stays fit and fine after being hit by the hammer right on his head?
Also glad that Sumo bursted out on Nirmala,that woman deserved that bit and the slap that followed,AMAZING!
Sumo's feelings while Shravan ignored her were so realistically put that I could feel them as if I was going through it.
Finally when Shravan talked to Sumo and cleared out stuff,it got a bit cheesy but then soon Shravan was put really well by you(the thing about his heart being big)!
The proposal and Sumo looking like a bai was so cute and full of sugar!
Ch 4-Shravan announcing his love for Sumo to the Tiwari and Malhotra clan was amazing,koi mujhe bhi Shravan dedo!Then followed Shravan accepting Ramnath and Nirmala,once again brilliantly and realistically put out by you.
Shravan and Sumo to live apart till their wedding happens and Shravan being a gol gappa and sitting,sulking while Sumo was talking to him,explaining him was sooo cute,such a baby!
Shravan's tadap to get marrired ASAP and teh pandit getting to live for a day more,hilarious!
Also the Shravan and him kissing Sumo down the neck,AHHAHAHAA Feels 😳
Then Mamiji caught them and when Mami asked who had bitten Sumo, Shravan said 'Meine Kata Tha'.GOSH! I laughed really really hard😆
The back pain and the return of heart attack,way to much fun.I could read that a 50 times more and still not get bored.The swelling part,OMG you are way to naughty,not like I am complaining though.I enjoyed it😉
Shravan sneaking into Sumo's room at night seeing the memory box and keeping the letter in his pocket,too much of love and emotional stuff happening which I definitely loved.The sangeet,Sumo denying him to meet after haldi everything was really nice.
And finally the wedding happened and all the emotions and sequences that were involved were beautiful.
As always you bring out the best in whatever you right.I love your works and the minute details too,not to forget the length😉
Chalo ab cheti cheti update karo!
Edited by SleepyPsycho - 8 years ago
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