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Res 😊 as usual 😉
--------------UnresZoya, your writing is love ❤️ seriously !Thank you Nith❤️There were so many feels to this one, my expressions kept changing throughout.I would love to see a video of changing expressions some day😆 It would be fun!My Sumo is back and how 😃If I were to list out things that I loved, the first would be the fact that Shravan said he needed time to forgive his parents... Thank you for that, plus the fact that Nirmala does't have to live in Delhi (It is such a relief to me, I could never accept the show one), it is not like she materialised out of thin air. That is just one of the highlights.It didn't settle well with me either, I understand they had time issues but a sentence or two wouldn't have hurt. Added clarity would be better. Alas...I loved the "Back is in the back" and all of Shravan's cute antics. They both have to make up for lost time 😊They have a lot to make up for haina!Memory box got to see light finally 😉 Beautifully done ! It was seen by the person who was meant to see it. It might sound weird, but I think Shravan needs to see something physical to reiterate the fact that Sumo loved him and waited for him all these years. It is not about "proof" or anything, there is more to it, I don't know how exactly to put it though but in a lot of ways it will change the way he looks at his life in general. See, I think that Shravan irrespective of being a successful lawyer never considered him a success, because inside he felt Sumo had rejected him. I felt that he cried and it was needed, those emotions needed an outlet.@Bold brilliantly put! I felt always that Suman's love, its depth would only in all senses be accepted by Shravan when he sees the physical manifestation of it. It's not about proof as you said, it's more about belief. He had trust issues, he had complexes which could only be satiated by the fact that he was loved the way he was, the way he is deep down, not this hot shot rich and badass lawyer swag he carries around but the sweet loving guy that he is. And that would lift him up. I hope I could explain..I am going overboard here and am going to quote "The Poison Tree" (William Blake) , but I am sparing you the whole poem@Blue bold by all means!@Red bold sparring me! That poem is love! That poem is my favourite! That poem I know by heart!"I was angry with my friend;I told my wrath, my wrath did end.I was angry with my foe:I told it not, my wrath did grow.And I waterd it in fears,Night & morning with my tears:And I sunned it with smiles,And with soft deceitful wiles. "
You just had to quote William Blake and it just had to be Poison Tree! Just had to! I feel like my heart can't take the bliss! I love you for this Nith!The issue was that Shravan was so hurt that he started considering his "friend" a"foe" and he couldn't do it, in the end it was he who ate the poison apple, the fruit of his own tree. He kept feeding it with so many lies. The seed has to be removed and years of pain do not vanish. Healing is not magic and the letter and those cards will go a long way. Looks like I made the point 😉 which I set out to make 😆. No more analysis I promise.You have steered the poem in such an amazing direction that I see it with new light now! You are a master in analysis! And by all means please do analyse everything I write! I love reading it!In short, this is a masterpiece 👏 . I consider myself very lucky to have read it. Not many can do justice to the ending and you are doing it exceptionally well.@Bold Dil jeet liya yaar!Thank you! Thank you so much!P.S 1 : Something about the word limit was 🤣Ya it just hit me with your post exceeds the maximum number of words allowed for any post on IF😆 I felt like yes, thank you. I would like to thank my parents, my friends and this forum for achieving a new high as far as the length of a chapter is concerned 🤣P.S 2: Thank you for putting me back on my cloud again , my writing had (ironically) caused me to fall out of it 😉Oh come on! You're being really modest now!Your writing is love!
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Such a brilliant comment, all inclusive of my favourite poem, your analysis, and praise!
I'm on the cloud right next to you 🤗
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