Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 52

Originally posted by: sapphire3

RES
----------
UNRESS
Prii🤗
So sorry I kept you waiting ...you know na I'm a slow reader 😆

Haanji bilkul pata hai...
You dedicated this chapter to us (Baki mitragan bhi hain na 😆 )
Thank you so much 🤗
Anytime my love! 🤗

I lub you more Baitu!!
Shravan Malhotra has the biggest heart in this world .
How easily he forgave them 😛 ...though I still don't like Nimmo but Maa to maa hi hoti hai na 😳

Wohi toh ❤️
Loved how sumo stopped him from admitting his faults ...his izzat was now hers 😳 .
That was his image in her eyes.. much needed na!
Nanu our very own aloknath 😆 decided to separate the love birds till wedding 😆
Uff!! Ye zaalim zamana 😆
I just love the idea of chup chup ke pyaar karna😆 Hence Nanu became Alok Nath😉
Aww vakeel babu is all sulking now that his sumo is in TK 😆
He is too cute 😳
Downright adorable!
Massacre in bhaiya's Raaj 🤣
Oh Shravan is highly capable😆
Shraman almost gave a mini heart attack to mamiji 😆 our lalita pawar 😆
I decided to let her live even after😃
"Kya kata tha jo tum aaise dekh rahe the, aaise"
🤣 🤣 inhe bahut janne ki chull machi thi 😆
Chod do bechare bacho akela lekin kyun puri movie ki story jo janni hai inhe.
Mamiji ko nahi mila na Shravu jaise garam khoon wala pati. But kam toh Mamaji bhi nahi hai.. Anuj and Dabboo mai difference dekho! Arey Dekho! 🤣
Shravan is so besharam 😆 he admitted that he gave her a hickey 😆

Once a besharam always a besharam!
Poor sumo 😆 ..sati savitri image ki to lag gyi 😆
Ekdam!
Shravu faked a back pain and Sumo fell for it 😆
Kasam se dhakkan hai ye ladki 😆
Dimag toh tha hi nahi na, we had established that early on😆
Heart attack 🤣 ...sumo tu sach me dilayegi ek ladke ko 😆
Someday for sure!!
Swelling ...ahem ahem 😉

Ehem Ehem ☺️
Sumo is not tubelight she is fused bulb 😆 ...preeti ki sangati ka asar hai 😆
Satyavachan!
He apologised for bachelor's night fiasco and sumo forgave him❤️
I couldn't just let go without him making amends...
Apki nazaron ne samjha is a very beautiful song, loved how you used it here
Shukriya!
Finally he get see the memory box, the letter, cards movie tickets 😊
I always sumo to show him all these stuffs to him herself. Not that he found it accidently .
I got my wish 😛
I got mine too😳

Woh pyaar tha tumhara, yeh pyaar hai mera. Tumne hazron wajhe di hai mujhe tumse pyaar karneki, par ek bhi wajhe nahi di ke mai tumse pyaar na karoon. Aur ab doobara kabhi bhi yeh kaha ke tum kaabil nahi mere toh mujhe mere pyaar par shaq hone lagega."
Again seetiyan taaliyan for dialgoues!!
I've said it earlier again I'm saying you are the best dialogue writer ever
Aww man! Thank you so much! Namik as Shravan set the bar too high!
The sangeet mehendi haldi ceremony was ❤️

Haina!
Shraman playing photo shoto was too cute especially their captions 😳

I just find those moments super cute!
Finally the most awaited wedding happens .

Yo!
Was it good enough?
Sawal hi galat hai malik...good wood chodiye its beyond awesome 👏 👏
Super duper hit hai ji ye toh!

Thank you so much Prii!!!
Love you loads ❤️
Loads of love back!
P.s.- Its the longest comment I've ever written 😆
I think longer than the previous one 😳

Agreed! And I made it longer by replying😆

P.p.s- @afsana tum finally malik ko mil hi gayi janu 😳

I was waiting for you to point that out!!!

Originally posted by: pearl.white

What a delightful update!! 👏
I had a grin plastered on my face throughout!! 😃
I'm so glad!
Dude, you fulfilled so many of my Shraman dreams. 😳
Aww yey!
I adored the way he made peace with everyone but couldn't help rolling my eyes at Ramu-Niru's PDA for Baby.
And Sumo supported him so beautifully.
Akhir hai toh Maa Baap hi na... And Sumo is a darling here!
Awwiee!! This man is so cute. His complaints, his pouts... Sumo will permanantly remain with a melted heart...Such is his magic. And 'Jaan ho tum meri' - Coming from her, he must have reached heaven.
He pretty much did!
"Dekho mujhe sar se kadam tak, sirf pyaar hu mai"
Aww man 😳
**********************

You weave the tale with such perfection, that I felt I was walking alongside them, savouring the journey.
Thank you so much ya!
Shravan's fake backpain and real heart ache 😳 So dreamy.
Chalo atleast you worked with his non-existent hormones.
Make do with what you have haina!
He actually made allusions! 😲 *faints with shock*
Hahaha!
Sumo is such a jhalli. Isse seriously usse heart attack dena hai 😆
Kasam se na!
That scene with Maami... Had me speechless!! What a kickass romance! Ab lawyerbabu cannot control.
Never again ever!

******************

Aww! He sneaks into her room! ❤️
And he attains his salvation. The memory box and Afsana ❤️ Finally Afsana found her way into her owner's hand.

Yes she does!
One request, can 'Mehboob ke naam' make an appearance on SR?? Please, pretty please.
Mind reading are you? It is bloody well making a comeback on SR😎 That's the first thing I had in mind.
His hesitation, his tears at finding the ocean of love... That somehow always evaded his parched heart. It was so fulfiling, so beautiful.Such a delicate and fragile heart he has!!
That he does!
And he apologises for 'Sab kuch' crap and so glad she forgave him.
Ab usse naraz reh bhi kaun sakta hai😉
Okay, I am being too demanding, but can we have a tini-mini apology for 'zehrili aurat' and 'bedroom mei khushi ' crap. Just that it has been a pet peeve of mine, and real Shravan could never utter such profanities..
Dude like literally? Are you spying on me😆 It's happening! *Spoiler alert*
Back to business; she understands him so well. Immediately she understands his lack of sleep. The stars must be smiling down at them.
Finally na!
*********************

Finally, its time for wedding.
The sangeet... Had me in tears of joy. Specially their dance on Kaho na Pyaar hai, it was dreamy!!
Yey
And their private haldi.😳 Sumo's tareeke are obviousluly way better, I have pegged all my hopes of an SR on her; Shravan babu ka bas chale, toh Preekar ke grandkids ki wedding tak kuch progress hoga!!
Haw! Who gave a hickey? Who had swelling? Who sneaked into the room each night? A little bharosa on our man please!
And the long, long wait comes to an end.
Yay, they got married. Loved their texts.
Me too!
P.S. Amazing song selection.

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Wiccamaya

Grinning ... laughing ... this is heaven... You nailed it Girl... this is jalebi, chocolate cup cake ... lemon tart ... and banana split ... all in one ... Chak de fatte ... Kudi ke jag jeet lia ... 👏

Originally posted by: Flibbertigibbet

UnRes

--------------

Toh zoya ji,

Baat kuch aisi hai...

Haanji kaisi hai...

KI AAP NE HUMEIN KUCH KEHNE KE LAAYAQ HI NAHI CHORHAAA!

Hahaha! As expected 😎

* a million squishy hugs from thia best friend*

A million squishy hugs back from this best friend!

FEELS WALI COMPLETE DEATH HAI YE!

Bas yehi toh chhiye tha humko. *Sadistic me is happy*😉

You can not imagine my facial expressions as i read it. I couldnt understand them myself. Let's just say we would have needed saucers to hold my eyes which were ready to fall out their sockets.

Oh my God! Your eyes a pretty big anyway and out of sockets 🤣 Don't get me wrong, you have beautiful eyes but when they are in their rightful location 😆

I WILL MARRY SHRAVAN IN BAGGY PJs. I will marry shravan wearing coconuts and banana leaves if he wants XD

Makes two bro!

Honestly, your posts are like the stock market. I keep investing and my investment keeps growing with every word!

*dreaamyy eyeddd*

Aww man! I just love how you give compliments! Hatke!

I GOT SO DAMN FLUSTERRRED OH LORD HELP MY SOUL SHRAVAN MALHOTRA SHIRTLESS EVEN IN TEXT DOES THINGS THAT SHOULD NOT HAPPEN.

#myheartisswelling #withlove #nothingelse #yougutterdimaagh

Hahaha! Of course it's just love☺️

I am serious! I would feel less shy if i actually walked in on a couple like that XD

Dude man! Thanks!

Mamiji gets to see more action than we do?!?! XD

Yeh #Phooti kismat!

Damnnn shravaannn you so naughtyyy #halkathunk #chichoracharmer #

Your hashtags are life! Bas!!!

I actually blushed XD

Me too!

"Aapki nazron ne samjha"

Khatam. Barqaas biryani. Ghar jao. Hoagya tamasha. BAJGAYA BAND FLIBB KE FEELS KA.

THAT SONG IS ULTIMATE <3 It's one of my favourites. Why you murder me so? *ugly cries*

Cause it's my favourite too. And I love your feels wali death!

Preeti is so goldfish. Can we distract her and push her off a cliff so i can marry pushkar? Because shravan is kinda taken. :/

#eknahidujasahi

Hahaha! Be my guest! Let's!

I love this sumo. This sumo is life.

Haina!

I love their emotional scene. Beautifully written. Dil pe haath rakhkke padhi mai. Naito melt hojata tha.

Hahaha! Melodrama!

Damnnn they getting proper marrieddd.

Absoluetly!

I AM DANCING IN THAT BARAAT. Add "chubby girl doing marfa beside ghodhi" in the update XD that's me XD

Bloody hell🤣 Deal!

In true dakhani words, kya maut chapter tha!! Ababbabababaaah!!! Jaan ibraheem level ki dhoom macha diye!

Thank you!

ASTOUNDINGLY BEAUTIFUL WORK ZOYA! I dont have enough words left in my vocabulary to find nea and new words to say to you.

Dude stop it you!

Only worda left are: cheeq maar angaar update! Aisich barsate raho qayamat! XD

Ji madam Zaroor!

Originally posted by: sptrno

Awww zoya hun first of all lots of hugs to u for this Our Ek Duje Ke Vaaste which we always dreamt of seeing all these beautiful magical heart-touching moments...

Spandana!! Hugs back love 🤗

I was smiling smiling through tears throughout...trust me I was so damn sleepy but when I saw your update I couldn't stop myself so here I finished reading it feeling it & even commenting...plz forgive me if I write something crazy type bcuz I'm typing all this in supersleepy mode but u know I love u lots & your updates too!

Aww man! Thank you so much! I love you too!

I have always loved all your stories on Our Beloved Beautiful Adorable Tode Paagal Tode Tede ShraMan par jo bhi ho tede ha ShraMan par hamare hai!!

So true! Agreed!

This is not just for this update but all your previous updates & also other oss tss sss fff on Our Baby Ek Duje Ke Vaaste...Amazingly awesome fantabulous beautiful emotional heart-touching dreamy magical wonderful sooo love it...left me always spellbound & speechless...many times I re-read your stories bcuz I so love them yaar...thank u so much yaar...lots of love...hugs

Arey yaar! I'm grinning like a fool now! You actually re-read it! Thank you so much!!

Spandana

Originally posted by: Wiccamaya

Grinning ... laughing ... this is heaven... You nailed it Girl... this is jalebi, chocolate cup cake ... lemon tart ... and banana split ... all in one ... Chak de fatte ... Kudi ke jag jeet lia ... 👏

Originally posted by: muskiii

Awww considering this story as sweet and adorable wouldn't be enough. The moments and the songs you selected made me lost in them. I couldn't define how much happy and pleasant I feel after reading it. There were many things that touched my heart and one of them is this
"Tum na bas apni nazar se khud ko dekhte ho Shravan, iss liye sirf galatian dikhti hai tumko, tumhari keemat tum nahi jaante. Tum doosron ki zindagi mai kya ehmeyat rakhte ho, jis din yeh jaan gaye na, guroor aa jayega tumko khud par."

"Mujhe doosron ki koi parvah nahi Sumo, bas tum kya sochti ho, tum kya mehsoons karti ho, tumhari nazron mai, MAI kya hoon, yeh maeene rakhta hai mere liye. 😳

Originally posted by: tanvi23

Beautiful update... i so wanted this to happen in the show...

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

wow

absolutely brilliant

totally mind blowing

loved it

cannot wait for epilogue