Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 54

Originally posted by: muskiii

I would love to read this part like 'n' no of times and never get bored.

Arey ya, thank you so much!!

The part where you connect the song aapki nazro ne samjha was am absolute bliss

Yey!!!!

and I wanted something related to kaho na pyar hai to happen btw them and again you fullilled my wish.

It was just necessary na! 57 times aakhir😆
ps: I didn't understand anything about the swelling thing 😒

I hope you're 18+ cause if you're not, you don't need to understand it just yet.. My apologies...

Originally posted by: castile

Unressed on pg. 67!

P.S. I am so so sorry for the too long comment! I just can't control it!
And also I haven't unressed on the previous chap! But believe me I tried to! In fact I wrote a whole comment thrise! But cause of something or other I couldn't post it!! 😭 😕 🥱

Will try to do that again...not anytime soon though!!
I feel so bad since that update was in a league of its own!
OK I should stop now!
Good night 😊

Originally posted by: castile

Res
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Unress

'...mil gayi manzil mujhe' ❤️

That's on of my favorite songs 😳
It was so apt for this chapter!

Mine too
Coming to the chapter...
One big 🤗 from me!

🤗 Back at you!
Only Vakil Babu can make everyone this anxious! 😆
But it is also true that he does everything in extreme 😕
'...clearly everyone is in no mood for pleasantries' 😆
Bhai shakal dekhi hai apni?! 🤣

Bhooka sher most of the times😆
JK!! (Waise dekhi hai hum ne bhi... Shakal I mean! 🤪 I am a good girl! #NaAsanskariThoughts #BaeBegesToDiffer )
Hahaha😉
On a serious note...
Hating really does not get us anywhere 😔
Its the easy way out and also very damaging too...
Not just for that individual experiencing it but also for others, especially those who love him...

I know right, its baseless...
'I would gladly go back into the hell, cause it's familiar, it's home' 💔
My heart broke when he said that 🥺

Mine too, he did miss familiarity the most I feel...
But since this is Shravan and that too in Your alternate ending, he just had to go and say...
'But now, I have another life attached to me...' ❤️
You do some of the best balancing acts with emotions 👏 😆

Thank you so much😛
Ramu Kaka and Nimmo...bless you!
#BharatMilaap 👍🏼

Ya it felt very much like that to me😆
And now we are talking Lambu!!
Let's get shadi ready!! 🤬 🥳
#ShraMan #ShaadiSwag 😎 🤪

Yo baby🥳
Pushkar and his #PushpdentSmile 😃 🤣

He has ekdam full smile😃
Just loved the ShraMan moment there!
'My wife'
'...that's between me and my wife!' 😉
Yes! He can get married in a pair of tracks! 😆
#FirstHandExperience #WeKnowBetter

Lol😆
Naanaji and 'punishment' go a long way back...!
#SlaysterReturns 😎

Oh yeh he does!
"Ladka ladki na, hum husband aur wife hai." 😆
Could you get anymore adorable than this Mr. Malhotra?! 😳
'Yep' 😃
And here comes...
Mr. Shravan Sulking Malhotra!
Just loved the whole convo there... ❤️

Glad you did!
Pandit bacch gaya!! 😛
(Preekar ki shaadi walla Pandit? Jisko Maya har promo me maarti hai? )

Hahaha haan wohi🤣
Shravan has indeed won Nanu's beloved grandchild...he would loose any bazzis happily for that! 😳
Maamiji's eyes!! 🐷
Sumo!! Kya kaata tha? Shravan?! 🤣

Well it just seemed like the right thing to do😆
And off we go with the 'heart attack' again! 😛 😉
Haan Shravan! Yeh pagal tumhare hi hisse likhi thi! 😆
Pushpa and her M.I.A. brain! 🤣
God bless Shravan!

God bless him indeed😳
But OMFG!!
What was with the 'touching' 'checking' 'swelling'?!! 🤣
But then he says...
'Meri dhakkan'
Zoya back to balancing!! Who's complaining? None!

Aww yey!!!
Then back to 'swelling badh jaayegi' 🤪

He's gonna have a chronic case of swelling now! 😆
The Chronicles of the Memory Box!!
'...aa jao...' and '...aa gaye'

Sigh😳
The 'speed-breaker' was 🤣
Mr.Shravan Beshram Malhotra is so delicious! 😳
Pity we didn't get to see him onscreen! 😕

#Kismat
Motu and Lambu returns! 😳
This should be named the 'Returns' chapter!! 😆 So many things made a come back!

Hahaha should be na!
Jokes apart...
They are married. Finally!
Yeh finally!!
Zoya, many people have said this already but can I say too?!
You are one gem of a writer!

Aww thanks hon!
Continue and waiting for the Epilogue 😳

Sabr😆

Originally posted by: Perpetuity

Res.
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Unres.
Kya bolu yaar. This is just PERFECT. This is ❤️ Everything about this is BEAUTIFUL. I just can't express it in words of how much I loved it. It has everything that a ShraMan fan would want them to do.

Aww thank you so much Resh!!!

Thanks for balancing the tears. Here, Amt. of sad tears = Amt. of happy tears.

Yahan bhi science ghused😆
The dialogues ❤️ It's still ringing in my ears. Yes, I said that coz I could totally see Namik saying those and with that magical voice of his

Me too ya, Namik is in every fiber of Shravan, he's done such a marevellous job that imagining him is cake walk
The shayari's in blue ❤️ With every update of yours I m like she can't write better than this but everytime you prove me wrong.

Oye hoye! Itni tareef! 🥳

Like WOW! Whenever I think about the last week of EDKV I remember ur version and I m like no no this is not shown, it's written by our zoyi but this is what I m going to remember n not the crap they showed us.

Ooi ma! Bas kar ya😉

I always wanted 2 see a pillow fight between ShraMan and you fulfilled even this wish. My Ginnie 🤗

Hugs 🤗

I loved the confrontation. It left evrything crystal clear. And obviously the confession ❤️ It's just so BEAUTIFUL.

Glad you did!

Love ya ❤️

Love ya more!!

Originally posted by: sapphire3

I thought would read it again later but control hi nahi hua 😆

Abhi hi padh liya 😳

Hahaha! Shravan bann ri tu bhi! Na uss se control ho ra na tere se😆
I can't get over mamiji's reactions 🤣
Kash unki jagah hum hote 😆

Hayye sacchi! Kaash

"Arey chup kar meri maa! Yeh pagal mere hi hisse likhi thi!"

Babu moshay tumhare hisse pushpa hi likhi thi 😆

Kaash hum likhe hote 🤣

Dimag bech aayi ho kya? 🤣 🤣 kabka
Exactly! Kabka!!!

"Tum na bas apni nazar se khud ko dekhte ho Shravan, iss liye sirf galatian dikhti hai tumko, tumhari keemat tum nahi jaante. Tum doosron ki zindagi mai kya ehmeyat rakhte ho, jis din yeh jaan gaye na, guroor aa jayega tumko khud par."

Dialogue ...muahhh...

"Mujhe doosron ki koi parvah nahi Sumo, bas tum kya sochti ho, tum kya mehsoons karti ho, tumhari nazron mai, MAI kya hoon, yeh maeene rakhta hai mere liye. Maine jo sab kar diya hai, keh diya hai, mai usko badal nahi sakta, par uss wajhe se tumhari nazron mai girna bhi nahi chahta mai Sumo.

Thought of doing charan Sparsh but Na you deserve a tight hug for this one 🤗
Charan Sparsh 😆 Hugs hi de de🤗
You made them dance on so many songs ...dil ke sare armaan poore ho Gaye❤️
I needed a medley ya on their sangeet.. Sangeet chodo phere bhi naseeb nahi hue!
Thank you for this wonderful chappy Zo 🤗

Thank you so much for the beautiful comment yet again Prii!!😳
Ab iske you deserve these hotties 😉

Maar de bas tu!

Originally posted by: 0Bella0

Another shravan for u 🤣

I will unres it on 32 October pakka 🤣

Originally posted by: dhanyata

"Thank you" is the first thing coming in my mind to tell you 😊 This was amazing !!

You're welcome😃

If I had known earlier that we are going to get this kind of alternate ending in our forum, Honestly, I would not have regretted so much towards the show ending or after that.

Arey ya! Itna bada wala compliment! Thanks hon 😳

True that, Nimik will be/are miissed. But there is not even Negative % of chance that our Creatives will give something of this kind. I mean it !! *popat history*

Hahaha! Who knows!

So now am glad that without giving us more of emotional torture, they ended the show gracefully and we got chances to really really witness of what is expected/craved for.

Glad hon!

You made 100% JUSTICE. 😃

Shukriya!

All the dialogues and feels are on point. Enjoyed veryyy much !

Bliss

Waiting for the most important epilogue 😆

Hahaha! Hope I don't let you guys down😛

As you said, we also expect more of their married moments in your other thread. Keep it up.

Yes that I will keep up😳

Originally posted by: Sithara.Soman

You are just amazing.The Climax was Superb👏.You gave me just what i needed.I feel like I have attended the ShraMan wedding now.