Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 51

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Faith28

This was damn cute😳 Liked the snapchat they shared before wedding...it was adorable❤️ And yes...epilogue we want!!😊

Thank you hon!
Yes epilogue you will get!
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Posted: 8 years ago
You just took my breath away !! I was imagining Nimik through this writing and am smiling with the broadest grin ever. Thank You !! whatever the serial kept unfulfilled, you just did it !!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: san2471

You just took my breath away !! I was imagining Nimik through this writing and am smiling with the broadest grin ever. Thank You !! whatever the serial kept unfulfilled, you just did it !!

I'm so glad you felt that way..
Thank you so much hon!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
What a delightful update!! 👏
I had a grin plastered on my face throughout!! 😃

Dude, you fulfilled so many of my Shraman dreams. 😳

I adored the way he made peace with everyone but couldn't help rolling my eyes at Ramu-Niru's PDA for Baby.
And Sumo supported him so beautifully.

Awwiee!! This man is so cute. His complaints, his pouts... Sumo will permanantly remain with a melted heart...Such is his magic. And 'Jaan ho tum meri' - Coming from her, he must have reached heaven.

"Dekho mujhe sar se kadam tak, sirf pyaar hu mai"

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You weave the tale with such perfection, that I felt I was walking alongside them, savouring the journey.

Shravan's fake backpain and real heart ache 😳 So dreamy.
Chalo atleast you worked with his non-existent hormones.

He actually made allusions! 😲 *faints with shock*

Sumo is such a jhalli. Isse seriously usse heart attack dena hai 😆

That scene with Maami... Had me speechless!! What a kickass romance! Ab lawyerbabu cannot control.


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Aww! He sneaks into her room! ❤️
And he attains his salvation. The memory box and Afsana ❤️ Finally Afsana found her way into her owner's hand.

One request, can 'Mehboob ke naam' make an appearance on SR?? Please, pretty please.

His hesitation, his tears at finding the ocean of love... That somehow always evaded his parched heart. It was so fulfiling, so beautiful.Such a delicate and fragile heart he has!!

And he apologises for 'Sab kuch' crap and so glad she forgave him.

Okay, I am being too demanding, but can we have a tini-mini apology for 'zehrili aurat' and 'bedroom mei khushi ' crap. Just that it has been a pet peeve of mine, and real Shravan could never utter such profanities..

Back to business; she understands him so well. Immediately she understands his lack of sleep. The stars must be smiling down at them.

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Finally, its time for wedding.
The sangeet... Had me in tears of joy. Specially their dance on Kaho na Pyaar hai, it was dreamy!!

And their private haldi.😳 Sumo's tareeke are obviousluly way better, I have pegged all my hopes of an SR on her; Shravan babu ka bas chale, toh Preekar ke grandkids ki wedding tak kuch progress hoga!!

And the long, long wait comes to an end.
Yay, they got married. Loved their texts.

P.S. Amazing song selection.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awww zoya hun first of all lots of hugs to u for this Our Ek Duje Ke Vaaste which we always dreamt of seeing all these beautiful magical heart-touching moments...


I was smiling smiling through tears throughout...trust me I was so damn sleepy but when I saw your update I couldn't stop myself so here I finished reading it feeling it & even commenting...plz forgive me if I write something crazy type bcuz I'm typing all this in supersleepy mode but u know I love u lots & your updates too!


I have always loved all your stories on Our Beloved Beautiful Adorable Tode Paagal Tode Tede ShraMan par jo bhi ho tede ha ShraMan par hamare hai!!


This is not just for this update but all your previous updates & also other oss tss sss fff on Our Baby Ek Duje Ke Vaaste...Amazingly awesome fantabulous beautiful emotional heart-touching dreamy magical wonderful sooo love it...left me always spellbound & speechless...many times I re-read your stories bcuz I so love them yaar...thank u so much yaar...lots of love...hugs


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Posted: 8 years ago
Grinning ... laughing ... this is heaven... You nailed it Girl... this is jalebi, chocolate cup cake ... lemon tart ... and banana split ... all in one ... Chak de fatte ... Kudi ke jag jeet lia ... 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awww considering this story as sweet and adorable wouldn't be enough. The moments and the songs you selected made me lost in them. I couldn't define how much happy and pleasant I feel after reading it. There were many things that touched my heart and one of them is this
"Tum na bas apni nazar se khud ko dekhte ho Shravan, iss liye sirf galatian dikhti hai tumko, tumhari keemat tum nahi jaante. Tum doosron ki zindagi mai kya ehmeyat rakhte ho, jis din yeh jaan gaye na, guroor aa jayega tumko khud par."

"Mujhe doosron ki koi parvah nahi Sumo, bas tum kya sochti ho, tum kya mehsoons karti ho, tumhari nazron mai, MAI kya hoon, yeh maeene rakhta hai mere liye. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful update... i so wanted this to happen in the show...
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow
absolutely brilliant
totally mind blowing
loved it
cannot wait for epilogue
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Posted: 8 years ago
You are just AWESOME. Really loved all chapters.

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