Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 53

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Loved the update Zoya! The scene was adorable where Shravan was sulking on Sumo leaving for her home. The way you presented the memory box was perfection. I loved how awed Shravan was while going through the contents of the box. One thing I really wanted to watch in the show was how the memory box would reveal in front of Shravan. Namik would have nailed those scenes. You penned it beautifully. Really looking forward to the epilogue. :)

Arre meri death mei kuch zyada enjoy nai karlere? XD itte khush nakko hojao. I'm like carpenter fevicol XD bohot vaddi chipak haiii!

Originally posted by: Naamika

You are just AWESOME. Really loved all chapters.

Originally posted by: Flibbertigibbet

Arre meri death mei kuch zyada enjoy nai karlere? XD itte khush nakko hojao.

Death nahi! Feels wali death.. There is a difference 😆

I'm like carpenter fevicol XD bohot vaddi chipak haiii!

Sabke eyes sockets mei ich beautoful dikhte XD

Thank God!

Wait i shall show you me expressions sometime soon XD

Ah! Waiting bro!

Love you tooo!

*Grins like Pushkudent*

I would love to read this part like 'n' no of times and never get bored. The part where you connect the song aapki nazro ne samjha was am absolute bliss and I wanted something related to kaho na pyar hai to happen btw them and again you fullilled my wish.
ps: I didn't understand anything about the swelling thing 😒

Unressed on pg. 67!

P.S. I am so so sorry for the too long comment! I just can't control it!
And also I haven't unressed on the previous chap! But believe me I tried to! In fact I wrote a whole comment thrise! But cause of something or other I couldn't post it!! 😭 😕 🥱
Will try to do that again...not anytime soon though!!
I feel so bad since that update was in a league of its own!
OK I should stop now!
Good night 😊

Unresed on page 53 😆
P.S.-Sorry kaan pakadke for being so late 🤗

I thought would read it again later but control hi nahi hua 😆
Abhi hi padh liya 😳
I can't get over mamiji's reactions 🤣
Kash unki jagah hum hote 😆

"Arey chup kar meri maa! Yeh pagal mere hi hisse likhi thi!"

Babu moshay tumhare hisse pushpa hi likhi thi 😆

Dimag bech aayi ho kya? 🤣 🤣 kabka


"Tum na bas apni nazar se khud ko dekhte ho Shravan, iss liye sirf galatian dikhti hai tumko, tumhari keemat tum nahi jaante. Tum doosron ki zindagi mai kya ehmeyat rakhte ho, jis din yeh jaan gaye na, guroor aa jayega tumko khud par."

Dialogue ...muahhh...

"Mujhe doosron ki koi parvah nahi Sumo, bas tum kya sochti ho, tum kya mehsoons karti ho, tumhari nazron mai, MAI kya hoon, yeh maeene rakhta hai mere liye. Maine jo sab kar diya hai, keh diya hai, mai usko badal nahi sakta, par uss wajhe se tumhari nazron mai girna bhi nahi chahta mai Sumo.

Thought of doing charan Sparsh but Na you deserve a tight hug for this one 🤗

You made them dance on so many songs ...dil ke sare armaan poore ho Gaye❤️

Thank you for this wonderful chappy Zo 🤗
Ab iske you deserve these hotties 😉

Another shravan for u 🤣
I not going to unress on my earlier post koi doubt mat raha dil mein
Zoya I hate you, you are a thief u churaaoed my dil 😡
Tumhare dil mein seena nahi patthar hai patthar 😭
ONE SERIOUS QUESTION THAT WASHROOM SCENE DID YOU WROTE THAT TO TAKE REVENGE FROM SUMO FOR WHAT SHE DID TO SHRAVAN IN EDKV IF THAT'S SO THEN AAPKO CHARM KA HA HAIN MAATE 🤣
Heart attack 🤣 seriously man you're insane nope sumo is insane
OH MY MATAS SHRAVAN BABA HAVING SEXUAL FRUSTRATION ye shravan Kahaan tha yaar
I m hating the fact that he is married to sumo
But then apne seene pe patthar rahe I am thinking that if they weren't married then we would not have got to see this side of shravan and I wouldn't have been this jealous but kya kare ye Badtameez dil maanta nhi
The revelation and the next scene now I literally need a mike to say this aloud CVS DOOB MARO 😡
But ssly zoya brain haemorrhage that too shravan ka why tumhare dil mein seena nhi patthar hai patthar 😡
I mean sumo ka karwa deti to chatla that would have cleared my way [}:-)]
Lol don't kill me 🤣
Is this shravan like really oh my matas that mami scene left me scandalized he literally admitted
😳 😳
Dude that memory box scene was muaah muaah muaah muaah muaah muaah muaah hundred kisses 😳
Finally shraman marriage shravan baba so desperate 😆
Now moi in dukhi atma mode mera shravan mera nhi raha 😭
But koi na uski GF to moi hi RAHUNGI
NOW IT'S A SERIOUS MATTERY LIKE REALLY SERIOUS MATTER
see edkv mein to romance k Naam pe to cvs gave us baba ji ka thullu
cherry on top sumo ka tyaag plus preekar man I was jeko of them till the end
Preekar ka kiss de diya sab kuch krwa diya and made preeti preggers too
I was like agar tyaag nhi kiya hot a to us din sumo good news
But I want shraman kid here
And I m warning u agar nhi diya tooo
Moi tumhari Maggie ka masala chura lungi 🤣 🤣 🤣