Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 40

Originally posted by: Ammiey

Ress Zoyee

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Unress

Zoyeee 🤗🤗🤗

Amish 🤗

I love you i love you i love you... (Upto infinity)

Seriousllyy yaar this!!!

Awww man! Love you back!

This is indeed something

And the exact way exact reactions i wanted to see in the show

Mtlb ekdm dittoo!!!!!

How can you amaze me so much yaar seriouslyy!!!

I don't know ya, seriously 😆

Hm fida ho gye hain tm pr now toh!!

Dude! I'm getting a bit conscious now🤣

Zoyee that scene where he rents out his anger on his 3 most important people in the world...

I can clearly see his pain ... His wounds!!! And his agony made me cry hard seriously

I was literally taking hiccups itna rona aya meko 😭😭😭

Arey baba, sorry! Itna rulane ka koi intention nahi tha...

N my mum was like "barbie kya hua,????? Kyu ro rhi ho???? Kya ho gya beta???? " her BP was going high when i was answerig "kch nai kch nai"

Uff! Pagal! Itna kaun rone bola tujhe!

Agar hm thori der aur kheechte toh poora ghar mumma k sar k upar milta 😆😆

Damn 😆

Isiliye i showed her your story n u know what my mum was saying "who is this girl?? " i said "zoya my friend on IF"

N then she said "she is an amazing writer truely and had actually written a piece! " i was like "hai na?? Dost kiski hai" n mumma bezzati kr di mera "tumhari toh nai hi hogi door door tkk nai" ... Bataiye... 😭😭😭

Oh shit! You showed aunty too😆 I'm glad she liked it Aunty ne toh poori beizzati kar daali 🤣

Uff mums are like that 😛

But seriously coming to the update i cried at their understandin loving scene too at the end but this time it was happy tears

Aww bro! You're too cute!

And my love!! ❤️

The scene where in the morning he woke up and found his angel stroking his hair and staring at him lovingly and then his intense love filled stare at her which makes her alive all over again!! *sighs*

I was in an "aww" *dreamy land*

Really loved their confession!!

I'm so happy you guys have loved it so much!!

And at the end when he asked "mujhse shadi krogi" n she was like "yess"

Instead of them i jumped with happiness!! With excitement 😃

You're funny😆

Really nailed it zoyee really!! 👏👏👏

All in all this chappy was indeed special!!

And!!! My genie !!! I knew it!!

I knew my genie will fulfill my wish!!

And you really did

Love you loads behna!!! 🤗

Thank you so much! Love right back at you sister!!

The opening and closing quotations were so damn true!!!

Totally agree with you there

Haina!!!

"True love will blossom when its season" its soo sooo true!! ❤️

And then last vala

"Lovers dont finally meet somewhere... They are in each other all along!! " ❤️

This was the most realistic thing ever said!! 👏

Rumi has a way with words...

The dialogs were perrrfecccttt!!!!

Each n every one specially shravan's description about his sumo!! It was really an awwland lala land!!

Shukriya!!!
Godd!! This would be my longest comment ever!!! Like reallyy longestt except my story updates they are not comments so just ruling them out... This is the longestt comment ever!! 😆

It's a post in itself😆 And me writing this reply is making it longer!

And if go on with this i guess i might ... No not might i would definately fell short of words!! And still feel i have written not till satisfactory 😆 lol!

Hehe...

Thankyou so much for his chappy zoyeee

Loads of love and hugs!! ❤️🤗

You're welcome! Love and hugs back!

Your amish!! 😳

PS: song is afreen afreen of coke studio right??

Coke studio and the original version mixed!

Actually when i was depressed a guy my childhood friend he suggested me to hear it once n i havnt heard it till now... N then the very next moment of him suggesting me this song your update came up n i saw u used the same song

.. (Maybe same? ) so ab toh aur b eager hain ye sunne k liye will hear it at once now itself! 😃

Hear the coke studio for Sumo's verse..

For Shravan's verse and the last one hear Nauman Shafi's version😃

Originally posted by: Sana_Jannat

👏 🤗 mix of Everything -Love,sadness,anger .full of drama. Poor Shravan 🤗
🥳 Sumoness 🤗 pushkar 👏 finally u spoke 👏 and Confession i knew it After All she is SUMO 1 step ahead of Shravan 😆 .🤗 Thank U Zoya.

Originally posted by: orion23

Aww dude!

Towels! Itna rula diya, sowwii!!

Mai toh cliff hanger pe chodne wali thi, When Shravan fell to the ground, udhar hi..

But then I thought mujhe bohot maar padegi 😆

Thank you so much hon!!!

Originally posted by: orion23

@Bold

Thank you so much Amish!!

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Originally posted by: orion23

Ooo...

I'll check...

And I will 😃

Originally posted by: Safire

Arey thumhe maar padegi ya na padegi meri BP tho koodh parthi aur mein bhi shravan ke saath hospital mein bharthi ho jaati 😭

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Am back! 🤗

Lara 🤗

What touched my heart here is - obviously - the pain of Shravan, and then Suman's desperation to save him from it. It's good to see you highlighting on the fact that no single one here is spotless. Ramnath, Nirmala, and even Suman had hands in making Shravan the miserable monster that he had become with time. 😭😭

But also, this - in no way justifies his actions. It's a lot like how aditya's action couldn't be justified because of some nasty things Shravan said.

Shravan's redemption is still to be touched upon😳

No one is perfect, and that is the end of the story.

Word!!

How they forgave each other was also one brilliant fact. 👍🏼

Pyaar ka doosra naam hi hai, forgiveness...

I loved Shravan's outburst after knowing the ultimate truth, I enjoyed full on - his suffering (and secretly wanted it to be prolonged, so sadistic of me 😈).

I prolonged it as much as I could! All the abuses I wanted to see hurled, were thrown in their faces...

But there's one thing that I absolutely loved the most. That is Ramnath and Nirmala still fighting in the hospital even after the truth is out. That seemed more realistic and acceptable to me, which it was clearly not in the show. Divorced or not - Shravan's parents are so not Ek Duje Ke Vaaste. 🤪

Exactly!!!! Thank you for seeing my vision here!!!!

The kiss... ☺️ hee hee... I think nothing more needs to be said. ❤️

Nope, never!

Now, the confession and proposal. ❤️ Loved it. Because it was so different, especially Suman's reaction about her looks and then how Shravan pacified her with the sweetest of words. 🤗

I had to think out of the box.. Itni baar propose karva diya hai maine inn dono se I was running out of ideas😆 But I'm so glad you liked it!!

And then there was the pillow fight! I love pillows yaar!

And I love them too, your writings have pillows in the most amazing of places 😳

So, all in all, it was a beautiful chapter with attention shackling beginning and end. I'm talking about the poetry used to decorate the whole thing and making the chapter more sensual to the eyes.

You liked it!!!

You mentioned how you couldn't think of romance without songs, dear - you spoke my heart there. Even I can't think of any scene (romance, comedy, separation, pain, heartbreak, fight) without some kind of music behind it. It's wonderful - the miraculous ways music stimulates our brain so that we lose ourselves in the world of fantasies.

Hainaa!! It just makes any situation all the more enduring...

I hope you keep writing such beautiful pieces on Shraman. Will be waiting to read more from you.

Well there is one more chapter that remains here, and I will be going all fluff ball in the other series😆 So you will get your wish😃

Take care,

Lots of love,

Lara.