Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 32

I seriously have no words to describe what I feel like now !! I took some half an hour to read this chapter, i can say that I was not in this world during that time. Feeling like I came out from a different planet. Almost all our wishes for the show's climax is EXPERIENCED now. Thanks much much for giving this in such a beautiful manner. Shravan questioned everyone for their own mistakes, that's very realistic. I am surprised, you even brought Aditya in between. The Great Kidnap story is unfolded and a nice twist with it that Shravan is hospitalized.

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Res
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Unress

Zo🤗
Tujhe mera bolna pasand nahi hai? Tell tell gopi
You write so well that I'm speechless.

Aww dude! Compliment bhi style mai!
I could quote the entire update as every line is my fav ❤️

Bro! Dil le tu yaar!!!
Sumo, tumhara hona hi sukoon hai mere liye, meri har khwaish bas sirf tum ho. Koi dard nahi diye tum ne, bas tumhare pyaar karne ka tareeka alag hai
Haye main 360 degree flat ho gayi
The best confession till date 👏
Yey!!! I can do the dance now
Poor Shravan the entire revelation shook him to the core .
The calm before the storm and finally his outburst ...you nailed it ZO!!!!
Mindblowing 👏
I expected the same kind of reaction in the show which we never got but who cares when we have you 😃
Arey bas kar pagli. Ab rulayegi kya!!!
Cerebral h'rrhage...thank god kuch to hua 😆
Show me to he didnt even get a concussion 😆
Mujhe yeh baat se bohot issue tha😆 Medical science ki toh laga daali inn logon ne!
Sumo slapped chomu ...maro seeti 🤪

Maar hi le!
The way she threatened him I swear I was jumping in excitement 😆

I was jumping while writing🤣
Nimmo and ramu can always go to hell
Their son was battling between life and death and they were busy playing blame game
Shravu gave them all a silent treatment ...good they deserved it !
Arey woh log mujhe shuru se hi na pasand the😆 Maar di maine unki, dil khol ke!
Sumo tum na, tum bilkul andhere mai roshni jaisi ho. Gharmi mai chao jaisi. Barish ki pehli boond. Tum jahan jaati ho, sab khush ho jaate hai. Par mai, andheron jaisa hoon. Kaali raat ki tarha. Mai tumhe bhi apne andheron mai bujha doonga. I can't ruin you Sumo. Mere saath sivay dard aur andhere ke kuch haasil nahi hoga..."
Muahhh for the dialogue ❤️

Shukriya! My favourite line in the whole update, and you caught it 😎
She kissed him 🤪 ...thats like our sumo 😉
Shravu se to ab bhi na ho pata 🤣
Arey ya, proper shaadi nahi hui na, in my head that's necessary for *Ehem* *Ehem* Apna Shravu aaisa thodi hai😆
Aww the proposal ❤️
Tune sumo ko manhoos pink kurti nahi pehnayi ...i love you Zo
I hate pink! Naam na le uska!
"Sar pe chada rahe ho na?"
Ye to tera khud ka dialogue hai 🤣
Satyavachan!
"Ab shadi ke bina khud pe toh chada nahi sakta, toh sar pe hi sahi..."
Naughty shravu 😉
Ekdam hi!!!
I loved the song ..gaane shanne ke bina khana maza ata 😉
The quote the end 👏
Happiness!!!
Super se bahut bahut bahut jyada upar wali update 👏
Thank you so much Prii!!
P.s.- I'll be back when my vocal cords are functioning normally 😆
Tune speechless kiya hai na 😆
I can read this infinite times 😳
Aww yey!!! I'm blushing like a whacko!
Loads of love ❤️

Loads of love back!
Your tatasky 😳

Baitu🤗

Originally posted by: san2471

Loved Sumo s monologue with Shravan in her lap

Originally posted by: dhanyata

I seriously have no words to describe what I feel like now !! I took some half an hour to read this chapter, i can say that I was not in this world during that time. Feeling like I came out from a different planet. Almost all our wishes for the show's climax is EXPERIENCED now. Thanks much much for giving this in such a beautiful manner. Shravan questioned everyone for their own mistakes, that's very realistic. I am surprised, you even brought Aditya in between. The Great Kidnap story is unfolded and a nice twist with it that Shravan is hospitalized.

Thank you bro! Tu hai hi nahi iss duniya ki😆

I'm glad my writing could make you feel that way.. And thank you for putting in the effort to read it 🤗

Our purest soul Shravan wanted to forgive everyone.😭 (*HAPPY TEARS*) Am so emotional right now.

All dialogues are awesome and on point.

Shukriya!!!

This story has created a lot of expectation among us for it had so much potential. Expecting something from a fictional show was very new for me, coz nowadays serials just create a new plot each passing day, with no meaning. But EDKV was playing with our emotions and feelings for past 7 months. Made us laugh, cry and so much. But failed us towards the end.

Well, such is life!

But you brought peace, seriously. Hatss off 👏👏

Thank you so much!

Nai. Ab mai bolu kya? AAAQIR KYAA BOLU MAIII?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?! Yaar is se achha kaleje mei khanjar utaardeteen aapn?







Dark chocolate shravan. Yes. I get it :P sumo, i know your feels. We've been talking about for sometime now XD she gets to kiss him! Never have i wanted to be fictional character more than this!

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit

Mehvish 🤗

This evoked so many emotions out of me! I couldn't catch my breath...

I started crying right from the start because though Shravan is suffering so is Sumo. She hasn't forgiven herself...

Aww man! Well I hope you took the advice and sat with a box of tissue paper😆

And just when they start getting happy BOOM! You bombed the bomb! But it was brilliantly written and I really couldn't fault it.

Necessary tha na...

But then Shravan was admitted in the hospital and I didn't have the heart to read it further. But I did anyway because you are a brilliant writer and I couldn't help myself.

Dude! Why you make me go on channe ka jhaad!

Things are starting to get better...starting to. I am eager to know just how you proceed from here.

I completely trust your amazing narrative skills and am sure you wouldn't disappoint.

Just one more chappy to go.. I shall try my very best! Promise!

Thanks you such a lovely chapter and the PM

Youre welcome!

OMG Zoya!! Damn I am teary as heck reading this! This wasnt what I was expecting. But this was so what I wanted from the show. A full blown Ramnath-Nirmala revelation that would have changed Shravan's life n ShraMan's equation forever. And provided that you did it at his vulnerable best, both emotionally and physically, it made so much impact 💔 With each word you wrote I could imagine Namik acting all those scenes, speaking all those lines, I can still feel the pain with which Shravan would have braced all this. I could so imagine him falling on the floor outta pain. LIke I feel damned after reading this man...Coz all I want is to see this on screen. Like NOW!

I am an emotional mess right now.
I need time.
Will be back.
Much love <3

Ressi res...
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Zoya Zoya Zoya...firstly m extremely sorry for the delay..i hope u wont be mad at me...sorry... 😕

Secondly big big 🤗 for u...u r a sweetheart gem...n i genuinely mean it.

Thirdly...The upii 😆 ...woah..WHT SHUD I SAY...yar u always make me spellbound n amazingly i love it..
Zoya..it was stupendously written!!!
the begining was really nice...flashbacks were outstanding n very much dishearting at the very same time...
I really wanted sumo to realize how much she hurted him..n be guilty as this was sumthng our show failed to potray yaa there were other things to but this very thing disappointed me alot as shravan alone was not at fault she ws also equally responsible but nhi wht i think is shravan got devasted the most (hope u wont beg to differ on tht 😆 )
N u pulled it off really wel...
Morning moment ws ❤️..n "mujhse chupaogi" made me
N "maat jao" ws like i literally cud feel the intensity with which he wanted her..pata nhi...it was damn heartwarming.!
phir tu jo hoa...tuoba tuoba..mera tu literally tissue box bhi khatam ho chukaa tha tab tak..naya kholna para..zoya nxt time sy u r going to pay for my tissue boxes k..it was so difficult to read with teary eyes 😭 😭
Tht heartbreaking intense drama ws very wel penned..as if u nailed it to the core.
Shravanz outburst ws made fresh tears roll out of my eyes..was very dishearting n justified too poor shravan.. 🥺
Ramnaths confession was very nice...but after result was 🥺
later the hospi faisco was fabulous...sumo ki outburst moreover adi ko chaantaa was the best one her lioness avatar ws 👏
Pushkar ka jaalwa bhi aalaa tha yar..us ko kaiay bhool sakatay hain..
Thn shravan ka silent tourcher was why thy deserved.[BR

"sumo tum na,tum bilkulandhere mein roshni jaisi ho.Gharmi mein chao jasi ho.Barish ki pehli boond.Tum jahan jati ho sab khush ho jaatay hain.."

This part was ethereal...bestest dailougez..without any dout.
n sumoz way to shut his nonsense talk n mouth was terrific..sumo say yahi umeed thi warna humray shravan k pass jo hormones hain woh court main case
larnay kay leay chalay jatay hain..darpok kahi ka..
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😆 N tht end part was damn cute...
All in all u killed it..
My sweetheart.. 🤗
Haaa...finally i did it...yaa unres mission accomplished..huoof.
love u...muuahh..ajj pata nhi kyun bara pyaar aa raha hai tum par.. 🤪 🤣
hope u wont mind.. 😉