I read the last part...n than read the whole story again... read it like i hv not watched EDKV post Shravan-Choti Sumo Convo... The story eased the pain of loosing ur favourite show in a manner we did... This story is sheer brilliance!!👏
Now, that I read it all over again...I hv put down some of favourite lines which went unmentioned in my earlier posts...
They would rather fight with each other than make love to anyone else.
They stood there looking into each other's eyes, with his palm still protectively over her head. A silent apology was felt, a silent forgiveness was meted out.
Shravan had hogged on more than half the halwa she had made and then he needed medication for that stomach of his that went for a toss.
Shravan was not in the room. She sighed for she missed him, already!
kisi ki maa ka dil nahi dukhana chahiye. Zindagi dard mai guzarti hai, aaisa meri ma ne kaha tha mujhe.
"Nahi hoga shayad, par kya hai na, ke mere paas maa nahi thi mujhe batane ke sahi kya hai galat kya.."
Abhi nahi... Dard ka ehsaas abhi shuru hua hai, peeta nahi toh dard mehsoos hi nahi hota.."
Sumo''s mono-thought in the morning was beautiful! Realization n words which I craved to hear 🤗
Kaise keh doon ke pyaar hai tumse jab samjh bhi na saki tum ko.." She whispered. Totally understandable
Tum jab bhi mujhe dekhte ho aaise dekhte ho jaise pehli baar dekha hai. Jaise ke mujhe dekhoge nahi toh saas ruk jayegi tumhari. Jaise zindagi hi mil gayi ho tumhe. Itna pyaar hota hai tumhari aankhon mai ke mujhe lagne lagta hai jaise mai iss duniya ki sabse khoobsoorat, sabse khaas ladki hoon. I feel reborn each time Shravan.." a much need voicing... ☺️
"Mai tumse bohot pyaar karti hoon..."
A lone tear made its way down his face, "Bohot waqt laga diya Sumo yeh kehne mai..." his voice cracked.
"Bohot der kar di maine?"
"Nahi pagal, maine kaha waqt laga diya, der ho gayi yeh kab kaha? Mai toh saari zindagi intezaar kar leta tumhare izhaar ka.."
"DEAL!" There can't be a more profitable deal...😉
Shravan was beyond confused now. He was lost. Fear crept into his being slowly but surely. His father looked defeated. His mother looked like she was close to nirvana. And Suman, she looked like blood had been drained out of her and she had been given the worst news of her life. He decided to take a seat and hear what it was that he didn't know, but the three most important people of his life seemed to be well versed with. This left me searching for tissue box...
"Sumo?" whispered Shravan. The worst is yet to come moment 💔
Shravan harshly jerked away from her touch, "Don't!" He said, deathly calm, voice dripping with anger.😭
inn se nafrat thi mujhse toh nahi thi na?" he asked pointed towards Nirmala and Suman.😭
"Nahi kabhi nahi...!"
"Shravan, beta, tumhare Papa ne jo kia, kia, jaane do. Yeh toh hamesha se hi apne ego mai choor the. Tum fiqr mat karo, ab tum, Suman aur mai ek saath rahenge, sab theek ho jayega." Nimmo has guts to say this... 😡 Shravan''s befitting reply...
"Tum ho important, tum meri zindagi ke markaz ho..." The aww moment...
The sound of a crackling whip resonated in the lobby. Suman had slapped Aditya hard across his face, so hard that he stumbled back. This thappad ki goonj was way better...😳
"Mera dil bohot stupid hai! After all of this, all of it, dil kehta hai ke sab ko maaf kar doon. Woh mere Maa Baap hai, kab tak naraz rahoon unn se? It's ironic, itna tootne ke baad bhi, mera dil sabko jodne ki baat kar raha hai..." He looked at her with a child like innocence. Suman was in awe of this man. Even now all he wanted to do was love. How could he forgive so easily? No wonder we love you so much Shravan Malhotra... you are a Gem!
The Shravan Sumo Convo Reminded Me of This...I felt the lyrics suits the situation. ...
"Sumo tum na, tum bilkul andhere mai roshni jaisi ho. Gharmi mai chao jaisi. Barish ki pehli boond. Tum jahan jaati ho, sab khush ho jaate hai. Par mai, andheron jaisa hoon. Kaali raat ki tarha. Mai tumhe bhi apne andheron mai bujha doonga. I can't ruin you Sumo. Mere saath sivay dard aur andhere ke kuch haasil nahi hoga..."
Musaafir hoon main door ka,
Deewana hoon main dhoop ka,
Mujhe na bhaye.. na bhaye, na bhaye chaanv re!
"Tum kehna kya chahte ho? Ke mai chali jaaon tumhe chodd kar.."
With a weight on his heart he nodded in the affirmative.
Aisi kaisi boli tere naino ne boli,
Jaane kyon main doli,
Aisa lage teri ho li main,,, tu mera...
"Shaadi hui hai humari Shravan.."
"Toh kya uss ek wajhe se zindagi bhar mere saath, mere andheron mai rehna sahi hai?"
Tune baat kholi kacche dhaago me piro li,
Baaton ki rangoli se na khelun aise holi,
main naa tera...
"Haan! Hai... Tum agar chahte ho mai marr jaaon toh alag baat hai.."
O.. kisi ka toh hoga hi tu,
Kyun na tujhe main hi jeetun...
Mann ke dhaage, o mann ke dhaage,
Dhaage pe saanwre,
Dhaage pe saanwre,
Hai likha mene tera hi, tera hi, tera hi to naam re!
She had to show him what life with her could be. So without any thought, she smaked her lips on his. She kissed him slowly, savouring the smoothness of his lips against hers.
Ras bundiya nayan piya raas rache,
Dil dhad dhad dhadke shor mache,
Yun dekh sek sa lag jaaye,
Main jal jaaun bas pyaar bache!!
He had imagined this a million times but this was way better than all of his imaginations combined.
Aise dore daale kaala jaadu naina kaale,
Tere main hawaale hua seene se laga le,
Aa.. main tera...
O.. dono dheeme dheeme jalein,
Aaja dono aise milein,
Zameen pe laage, na tere, na mere paanv re!
Meri nazron se dekho Sumo, tumko khud ki nazar lag jayegi.." just Love!
Long comment!! Face palm!!
Edited by ishraland - 8 years ago
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