Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 19

Originally posted by: Malika

Awww this made me so so senti man!!😭

Sowwiii...

Honestly this was what most of us wanted to see...this is why we cant get over edkv till now. Coz we never got to see Shravans insecurities n fears been put to rest. That man needed a hell lot of nursing to be normal again. He needed to be heard, to be pacified, to be taken care of n to be loved. And Sumo had to do it with her love n company. Their togetherness was the cure to his never ending pain but we never got it :(

Let bygones be bygones...

Na mila, na sahi...

Anyways thnx to u Zoya for giving it to us. I always wanted a scene where Shravu wud keep his head in her lap...n let all his pain dissolve in that warmth n secure feeling. It was beautiful to read he finally got his moment of peace.

You're welcome ya!!

N btw he called her motu 😆 Aww 😆

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit

I seriously am at loss of words...i read both the chapters now and i cannot find words to tell you how beautiful and achingly mesmerizing this was.

Thank you ya!!!

I loved how you portrayed a subtle progression in their relationship despite it being a Circumstancial Marriage. There is this little Magic in everything you write and baby you should take a bow. YOU ARE TRULY AMAZING!!!

Blushes profusely...

Loved it beyond words.

Glad!!

Kudos to you

Originally posted by: Zenab78

next update wow
issbaar I'm on time

You absolutely are!
Zoya Api jhappis 🤗

Right back at you chotu🤗
Awesome update as usual 👏

Thank you!
I'm liking cute moments between Shraman

ME too!
He is broken totally Sumo will give him so much love that he will forget all the pain and loneliness that he faced in last 12 yrs

Let's hope that she can!
Keep writing Api ab toh IF writers ka Sahara hai
Lots of love ❤️

Love back !!!😳

Originally posted by: memories_im

This is beautiful Zoya!

I love this! Shravan's pain was conveyed perfectly! Would love to know how Sumo makes amends now. Continue soon :)

Originally posted by: dhanyata

😭😭 Our Poor Shravan !!

But thisss is the Sumo we always wanted to see !!!! Sumo who knew shravan in and out, saw his vulnerability at every stage, understood his pureness in heart. She only knew how much he hates women and the real reason behind it. She also knew he loved her. She only knew he is being manipulated and she should've been in a position to foresee that he is been misguided.

Absolutely! So well put!

Knowing all this, in the show, she never took a step to care him a bit, instead found new ways to hurt him *Heights of negativity* *Sigh* 😡

Hated it!

You are just brilliant, you brought the pure love and care out of her, the real innocent sumo full of love that we saw in the initial episodes. Much needed thing to heal our shravan.

Thanks ya!

Also, ramnath's self redeemption track makes sense here.

Let's hope it makes as much sense in the next part😛

Finally, whatEVER we (as fans) wanted to ask Nimmo on her face, were delivered very well by Shravan. 😆😆. Awesome dialogues. Keep up the good work.

Hopefully I will!

Thanks for the pm.

You're welcome!

Originally posted by: AlZian

This is awesome 👏
can't wait for nxt chp ...

Originally posted by: orion23

@Bold Thak you so much Priii!

And also I love you, for the banner and everything else!

Originally posted by: Roshni2015

Zoya,

Oh my gosh... What a beauty this is yaar!!

The Shravan Niru convo... Damn!! I so wanted to see something like this on the show... You nailed it absolutely...

Shravan sleeping with his head on Sumo's lap... Aaww...

I loved this chapter...

Makes me miss EDKV more n think about What could have been... But babe you write so amazingly well...

Hugs to you... 🤗

Love!!

Originally posted by: sahiba402

wow this was awesome!!
That moti motu part i just loved it ❤️
I always wanted to see ramnath admiring our shraman that how happy his son is with suman that they are Ek Duje Ke Vaaste😳 but ...thanku for this.😊
Ooops jyada kha liya hamare sassy malhotra ne 😆
last part sleeping on her lap❤️... Awww

kash hame ek chutki sa part bhi mila hota dekhne ko😕
anyways thanks for the pm...and update soon...ummm okkk apni marzi se jitna time lena ho lena 😆

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