Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho
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MAN MAN MAN!
Give me tissues already!
Agli baar se pakka de doongi😆
Oreooo Baba,aapne Shravan ko zinda kardiya!
Damn what a compliment!
I loved how you started with a light note brought a high intensity wala emotion then went on mild happiness and then mild pain but which spoke depths of pain and love.
Trying to keep things on an even keel😃
I won't go into details in analyzing but yaa Shravan's pain and its burst out was like a high point and much much needed which was not shown in the show combined with Sumo realizing what her guy had gone through and you,yes you did it way too mindblowinhly way too good.
Thanks ya! Honestly, I wasn't very sure of this part... I'm glad you liked it so!You know what the words you used for the conversation between Shravan and Nirmala made me feel as if I was reading and living myself on your story.I m really bad when it comes to writing on speaking my personal feelings and emotions both verbally and in writing but you by putting out Shravan's pain made it so much easier for me.
Don't say that! Your psycho analysis is proof that you're very good at expressing, you just seem unsure of your self that's all...Kudos for nailing with every high intensity emotions you displayed with utter perfection. My eyes were moist and hopefully now that I am going to read it for the second time I don't cry. You are now a magician.
Oh man! Magician haan😳My favorite part apart from the Nirmala Shravan talk being this
"Okay motu!"
"Shravan!" Ramnath glared. "Biwi hai woh tumhari!"
"Tabhi toh bola, padosi ki biwi ko thodi boloonga..."
Suman shook her head in dismay and took her leave. She would make moong daal ka halwa, her bhookad loved it!
I am taking inspiration for my OS and pain from you.Yo.
Take all that you need! Always happy to help😛
More power and success to you.
Thank you!
Update soon!
Will try!!!
