Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed

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Hriju321

@Hriju321

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Posted: 8 years ago

#161

Zoya tussi kamaal kar diye ho !

Such an awesome chapter...roya oar dil khush ho gaya. ...

Aise gems likhte rehena...you are a very good writer😊

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Jannat

@Sana_Jannat

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Posted: 8 years ago

#162

🤗 Excellent zoya 👏 difficult to select single part which i love most bcz i loved whole. whether its Shravan-Suman/Sumo or ShraMan-Ramnath or Shravan-Nirmala. 🤗 for PM

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trayee biswas

@trayee

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#163

another dhamaka...full package...wow...!!!
thora romance..thora comedy..& bohit sara emotional scenes...jst lovet it zoya..u made shravan malhotra alive again...even i could feel every bit of pain of shravan..thanks a lot yaar... 👏

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Ayesha

@notready.

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#164

Second part was amazing, Zoya! I had a full blown grin on my face during their cute banter in the beginning, especially when Shravan called her motu 😆
THIS is the Nirmala-Shravan convo I would have loved to see in the show. For her to realize the extent of her actions and how much they've hurt him his whole life instead of simplifying all of her actions and conveniently placing all of the blame on Ramnath. I also love that the Ramnath here decided to tell Shravan the truth without the help of pregnancy news (still remember the Maggi putra 😆)
Can't wait for the next part!

-Ayesha

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nith125

@nith125

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#165

Zoya , first, nazar na lag jay tuje . Seriously ! I loved it, it is brilliant and I think you did a great job of keeping it short because there was too much to be written actually. I am impressed girl ! Take a bow 👏

Also "Tum mujhpe gire aur lagi bhi tumko?" - Story of their lives, is it not ? I loved that dialogue. This is exactly what happens to them, in doing anything to hurt the other person, they both hurt each other always.

I could never digest the fact that Shravan actually forgave Nirmala in the real ending. I have two issues with that, one - she never reached out to him at all during the AdiMan wedding prep and second what happens to Adithya now ? Does she abandon him just like she did with Shravan ? Even if Shravan did forgive Nirmala I hate it that Ramnath-Nirmala reconciled, whatever ! But you have addressed the point so well that it is actually believable and relatable unlike Nirmala popping out of a hat in the last episode.

I'll probably come back and comment more later 😆

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#166

wow

that was amazing

absolutely brilliant

the emotions of shravan were mind blowing

true brilliance

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Shambhavi

@lazyshambhavi

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#167

Zo,

you left me in tears😭

Heartbreaking dialogues you write.

Thumbs up for that⭐️

The chapter was long!!!

Was it???

Didn't felt like that.

,your fault😈🤣

In the starting you have written a line,

silent apology and forgiveness wali line

in very rare case it happens,silence is understood by very few😳

Awsome one👏

The chapter was emotional one.

But,l like this kind of writings

saddistic me *not really*😛

Loved everything from starting to end,

from the motu-moti argument😆 to shravan sleeping in the lap😳

You did total justice to the chapter

Brilliant

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san2471

@san2471

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#168

Touching. I liked the way they relate to each other, the way they know what their hearts want, what the other person feels and yet they want to hear from the lips.

There was so much potential in the story. Your writing is making up for all that we lost.