Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 18

Originally posted by: sapphire3

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WOW!!!!!!
I'm speechless!!!!!!(relax main fir bhi bolungi 😆 )

Yakeen tha mujhe bolegi tu zaroor😆
Take as many Bows you want for this Zo!!!!

You want me to break my back is it?
This was something beyond awesome 👏 👏 👏
I can't tell which part was my favourite coz I loved every bit of it!

I can't tell you how happy that makes me...
Aww sumo🤗. I feel for you.
Ye wali sumo show me kyun ni mili?

#Sab Kismat ka Khel hai re Pushpa!



GIF🤣

Ramu ki Nazar utar lu main !!!
Aisa Ramu bahut kam dekhne milta hai 😆

Arey ab yehi wala milega.. Tu stress na le nazar ka😉
Shravan -Nirmala convo...you nailed it !!!!!
I wish cvs tujhse likhwa lete dialogues!
Poor Shravu 😭 ...he suffered so much 💔
Uska dil hazar tukde hua har bar bas kisi ne suna nahi 💔
Thats exactly what was the most unsettling for me..

Mujhe bilkul jama nahi ke they wrote off his pains like they were nothing and no one asked for his forgiveness, no one felt the hurt they hurled!

I'm gonna make them all suffer😎

When he said "Ja rahi ho na mujhe chod Kar?" 💔 💔
That is exactly how vulnerable he was!

Loved Sumo's monologue in the end.

Me too...
This was outstanding Zo!!!!!

Thank you!
Love ya!!!!!

Love you too!

Originally posted by: Flibbertigibbet

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Unres.

What is this sorcery?

Who is cutting onions at this ungodly hour??

Why can i feel bae's pain in my heart.

What is the meaning of life?

Why are my eyes leaking?

*clutches heart*

Drama Queen! 🤣

You and your antics 😆

Zoyu,

Dil ku ganne ke waisa nichorhke juice banadiye!

Arey re ... Dil ka juice pehli baar suna hai, par maafi sarkaar!

Dhoom ich dhoom! Jaan ibrahim level dhoom update!

Quick question, who is Jaan Ibrahim? Noob me knows not!

And yup, nirmala, ramnath and sumo all 2 of them had to see what they had done. They need to suffer for what they did to him. That gem of a man. If it were me, i would tie these 3 to a tree in the arabian desert and let nature have them. Because that is what they made shravan feel like.

Well I can't put them in an Arabian desert, but I promise they will all suffer, at my hands 😎

But zoya, beautifully written, absolutely spellbinding. Fantastic work! Loved it to bits! <3

Thank you so much Flibb!!

Originally posted by: ishraland

Did I breath while reading the update...❓ I guess not... #breathtaking !! 🤗 #spellbinding

Lambi saas andar lo jaldi😆 Don't pass out of oxygen deprivation😉

This man is love Bass!! Can do anything like,,anyyything for him!😳 he has been though sooo much...😭😭

You are such an amazing writer,, Shravan was right in front of me...no A/V needed...👏

Aww dude! Shukriya!

Waiting for his 'Duchenne Smile'... right from heart that will reach his eyes...❤️

Just one more update to go for that😃

Will I catch a wink tonight! #ShravanOnMyMind

Update soon...😊

Mid next week promise!

Originally posted by: Sunain

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Haaah...literally m spellbound rite now..dont knw wht exactly to say..indeed this was a heavy one
Haina!
If i talk bout sumo...her dreams got crushed by none other thn his love..her predicament everythnfg was disheartning for her as wel as for shravan.
Yo!
Thn he geting possessive for her after seeing her pain..n thn the mode lightning moment came..shravan fell on her..phr jab us ny mazak kiya tu he waz like"Mujhe aisa mazak pasand nhi"..so much concern in his words.
Aaisa hi toh tha na woh.. Always afraid to loose the ones he loved!
After tht both cheerishing their childhood golden memories n ramnath entered..wht made me smile through teary eyes was tht ramnath was possitive seeing thm together..finally he regretted wht he did.
Kaash ke yeh mai dekh paati show mai...
Phir cuming the shocking moment...Nirmala ki wapsi..shravan n her convo was very disheartning..lines like

"Kisi maa ka dil nahi dukhana chahiya.zindagi dard mein guzarti hai,aisa meri maa ne kaha tha mjhse"

"De loon khud ko akhari ek dard ke phir koi dard kabhi mjhy ho na sake"
I just love dil se nikle hue alfaz! Pain always gives me connect with characters...
And the most astonishing moment was tht ramnath heard n witnessed it all n decided to tell shravan the truth at any cost.
Ramnath accord to me failed as a father..as he was too selfish..n ruined his entire life..

Word... I hated the way it happened on the show...
phir shravan ka sumo ko ya kana tht"Kyunki itni aadat ho gayi hai na ke ab bina dard neend nahi aati.."
Was over the limit..
Itna dard..itni takleef..itni karvahat...insan ko kahein ka nhi chorti aur ye tu bachpan ka dard tha jissy woh apnay andar paal raha tha..n now look wht he has turned into..

He had been through a hell lot! We never got to see the resolution of his pains...
Only sumo can bring him out of darknss..

I beg to differ, Sumo can be his light, his purpose of life, his love, but if anyone can bring him out of the darkness, it is he himself.. Indication to the future 😉