Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 15

Zoya,

wow this was awesome!!
That moti motu part i just loved it ❤️
I always wanted to see ramnath admiring our shraman that how happy his son is with suman that they are Ek Duje Ke Vaaste😳 but ...thanku for this.😊
Ooops jyada kha liya hamare sassy malhotra ne 😆
last part sleeping on her lap❤️... Awww

kash hame ek chutki sa part bhi mila hota dekhne ko😕
anyways thanks for the pm...and update soon...ummm okkk apni marzi se jitna time lena ho lena 😆

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wow zoya...itz amazing...read both the parts in one go..felt like watched two awesome episodes..😊

Hai Zoya, I am a big fan of you. You are an excellent writer. As always you nailed it. 👏Keep writing. I am eagerly waiting for your upcoming parts. 🤗"A good writer possesses not only his own spirit but also the spirit of his friends."

Zoya!!! Ohh again this excitement!!!

U wrote this...this was a gem!!
A perfect gem!! 👏

The pain...u brought it out so well!! Zoyee its way beyond just a sheer beauty!!
I can feel every bit of his pain 😭

His drinking scene...ohh god I can almost imagine ...not almost I can fully imagine Namik there!!
Drinking n crying!! It was a heart wrenching one! 😭

Ohh zoyee u have to compensate for this!! Though its really a piece!

I'm craving for my smiling n laughing Shravan...genuinely! 😳

N I know for sure that its u zoyee that can fulfill my wish!!
My geniee!!! Luv u loads!!

Ok I just adored that scene too much that i'm still blushing n smiling
Where Shravan asked if he can sleep in her lap in a child manner n how insecure he got even when she was going to shut the door!
How I wished i could be there in place of sumo *sighs*

N yes you're absolutely right that these characters have to hear the mother son duo convo
It was indeed necessary!!

Good job there! Zoyee!

Hope u don't mind me calling u zoyee
U can nick name me too! If u wish! 😃

Update soonisshh
Love! Lots of love!
Ameesha ⭐️

Loved it a lot ...very emotional

Thanks Zoya
U nailed it
I m totally speechless
Can't wait for next update

wooosh... ye kya tha... kash CVs kuch aaisa dikhate... awooosommme ... beautiful characterisation.

You are just awesome writer yaar. Kash tum edkv ki writer hoti

He let it all out.
Infront of his mom.

'Meri kya galti thi ?'
Always hit me hard.

Its time for one more heartbreak and he would heal then.
With his Sumo by his side.

Amazing.

'A silent apology was felt, a silent forgiveness was meted out. '
These lines though <3
And the banter that followed. Haha :)

God bless Zoya <3 ^_^
Much love:)