ShraMan SS: Being Loved - Chapter 14 - Link updated - Page 24

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bworm

@bworm

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Beautiful update again.

Love the very the relationship is progressing.

Ramnaths kashmakash is a sight to behold.

Waiting eagerly for more.

Thanks for the pm

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#82

And you update this beauty just as I am about to call it a day...and I am up..charged and full of vigour.

I have wished and wondered if Ramnath in spite of his misgivings about Sumo, would for once, consider her for Shravan for the simple reason that it was only her who could light up his day and his life in the long run.

Ramnath is right when he fears for Shravan's heart and the uncertainty of it's survival, and maturity they say is the capacity to endure uncertainty. So here I am hoping for Ramnath, that sense prevails.

Loved the way the name Pushkar was called out in 4 contrasting emotions 😃

Awesome update as usual. ..Thanks for the PM!

Edited by reshmanair356 - 8 years ago

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#83

awesome update

loved it

continue soon

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Nik03

@Nik03

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Res
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Unres
Lovely upii dear... 😃
Kabaab mein haddi Ramu Kaka... 😕
Shravan do noticed the silent convo btw Sumo-Ramnath ...Your Shravan do have lawyer's brains 😆
Puskie pie...jumping in between the convo 😆
Shravan smacking the palm of his hand on his forehead...
Loved the four shouts of his name in different tones... 😳 ❤️

Shravan I really dont care ke hum kahan ho , bas hum saath ho...Soo Loved it ❤️ ❤️
Shravan's theory... 😉 ❤️
ShraMan's hug...Shravan lifting Sumo off her feet...Haaye..

This scene was witnessed by Ramau kaka.. 😲
But you made him think in right direction dear...👍🏼

Shravan's heart was meant to be broken... 👏
Take a bow for this one girl...!!
Mind blowing yaa ❤️
Loved n enjoyed reading it..😃

Thanks for the pm n do cont soon 😊
Saturday ka inazaar hame bhi rahega ShraMan ke saath saath.. 😳

Loads of Love n 🤗
Nikka Sa Nik❤️

Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago

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nuttynuts

@nuttynuts

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Awesome chapter. Loved the way you portrayed the emotions. Continue soon!

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Safire

@Safire

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Once again a marvellous piece of writing!!!

Ramnath's feelings are well described...

Waiting eagerly for an early update.

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shirly amirja

@shirlys

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Nice one dr...loved the hug...waiting for the Saturday party...do update soon dr

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Too good

Beautifully penned👏👏

In love with the chapter❤️

Pls update soon

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#89

Shravan's plan giving letter to sumo gone in drain.
Shravan's sharp eyes were noticing unknown spoken words going between his father & Sumo. She was not facing his father's eyes. He could sense something secret in their behaviour. Lalaji was very cute because of him Sumo could go with Shravan for party. Even Pushkar tried his best to send his friend to party as a date of his brother.
Even I m waiting for Saturday party.
What Ramnath will do now with Sumo he came to know his son loved Sumo since 10 long yrs. I hope he wouldn't be reason behind his son's broken heart. why it is meant to be broken either because his father or Sumo. I m just worried for Shravan again he would break.

Thanks for PM

Vinu

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago