ShraMan SS: Being Loved - Chapter 14 - Link updated - Page 24 - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71
Res 😳
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Its soo good to see you back... 😊
Wonderful update buddy... 👏
Mr. Mishra...langoor 😆
ShraMan lived their old days again...its soo lovely 😳
I loved this Ramu kaka... 😆

You have described Shravan's emotions n feelings sooo beautifully dear... 👏 ..Am overwhelmed, touched by them 😳
You seriously have a way with writing emotions buddy... 👍🏼
Shravan finally decided to give the letter to Sumo n even Sumo was soo happy about it...but here comes the devil..Ramnath Malhotra 😡

I hope ShraMan ke beech me MU na create ho...!!
Exited for the next part ...cont soon 😳
Thanks for the pm 😊
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik
Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72
amazing update, perfectly penned shravans feeling
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
Well written script!!
Shravan's emotions have been brought out so beautifully by you...
I will be waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
Wonderful update...Bechare Mr. Mishra ki love story incomplete reh gayi😆
The way you described sumo nd shravan's feelings was beautiful..but finally when shravan was going to give her the letter kamini Chachi nd ramnath came back😒
Can't wait to see ramnath's reaction..Plz continue soon

Edited by Jerry2308 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
I so used to addressing Ramnath as Ramu Kaka,, I was like...Ramu Kaka kya le aaye! !😆
Loved it to bits..! like a heart beat..!❤️
Ramu Kaka returns! 😡 what a timing Bro!

Update soonish!😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
Simply awesome .. i just love the way you describe the thoughts going on in their heart and mind .. How they both are longing for each other .. & feel the same but can't say out loud due to hesitation .. But Shravan has started trusting her & Sumo cares for him like never before ..
Argh ! Chachi & her bad timing & her vile remarks .. 😡 Shravan always tc of chachi not crossing her line 😊Lalaji is a darling ..😆 Ohfo !! the letter is still with him .. but at least he's determined not to give up ..👏 & ramnath malhotra-kabab me haddi is there .. Pata ni kya raita failega is bar ..update soon ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
Their silent conversation between themselves...even without speaking each other they can speak a lot with their eyes...Sumo's silent message conveyed him what he wanted to know...he wanted to give the letter which were with him since decade but kabab mein haddi Malhotra clan came in between Shravan's plan gone in drain...but he had made his mind this time whatever it may be he won't give up this time...but Ramnath what he will do now?...will he say Sumo to stay away from Shravan?...

Waiting for chap plz update soon

Thanks for PM

Vinu
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
It left me spellbounded 👏👏
Beautifully penned dear
Loved it to the core..Loved each and every line of it
Please try to update soon...will be waiting😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Add/send buddy request to this account if you want me to send you a PM whenever there is an update! 😳

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