Shraman TS || My Promise || Part3:Pg24 (09/03) (Completed!) - Page 23

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Brilliant update

Drunk Sumo was so cute😃

Shraman's emotional conversation..Much needed one

Swach Bharat abhiyan wali special shaadi😆..The wedding vows

Beautifully penned

Thanks for the pm😊

Originally posted by: --Epithymia--

Thanks a lot Di for commenting!

Really honored!😃

And as I have said before it's better to end it here. Also my exams are nearing so I have no chance of writing before 31st!

So, NO EPILOGUE!

Originally posted by: --Epithymia--

Reply in Bold.

And I expect your reply really soon Di!

- Your Cupcake!😃

I ❤️ U

Originally posted by: .-Amethyst-.

OMG!

Res. I'll be right back.

I'll review soon!

Take your time!

Haayyoo rabba! Itta gussa! 😳

Vo kabhi-kabhi aa jata hai.😆 Sorry if I was too rude in replying.😭

Aww, you're beyond being adorbs! I thought you were big now and possibly wouldn't liked to be called Cupcake. Hence I changed addressing you.

Dil toh bachcha hai ji! I like to pampered.😳

Sowwiiee *kaan pakadke* Are koi nahi. Aap toh jyada hi emotional ho gayi.

You know how much I louu you. And karu bhi kaise nahi, how sweet you're! <3

I know and I lub you too!❤️ And actually you are made of sugar not me.😎

I seriously didn't know you're this cuteee! 🤣

Pata hai school mein toh sab mujhse darte the pehle. 🤣

Thanks a lot for loving me so much, my dearest CUPCAKE! 🤗

Lovely people are always loved!

And I'll review the last part awfully soon 😃

As I said, do take your time! No jaldibaazi.

Originally posted by: --Epithymia--

Thanks a lot for your kind words Priti (Di?)

Really glad that you liked it and actually read it twice.

Love to you too!❤️

Originally posted by: Nik03

Ressi res 😳
****
Unres
First of all am truly sorry for being this late dear... 😕
Kaan pakad ke sorry.. 😛

Here, I should be sorry for replying late😔

Coming to the upii
Your writing style is just love ya...❤️

Thanks a bunch!

Clearing everything and marking a new journey that too from their school where their were so many beautiful memories of ShraMan...Awesome thought dear.. 👏

Drunk Sumo..
Loved their bickering so much... 😳
Sumo's tripping, Shravan's anger...❤️ ❤️
Then their cute sorry..aww 😳

I always wanted to have all this in show, but...

So it's here!

Woah!!
Kya shudh hindi boli hai Shravan ne...Prasann kar diya 😃

Oxford ke angrez sahab ki hindi😆

Soo true...All they ever needed was to just Talk!!
Sumo's guilt and pain was beautifully written buddy...Loved it ❤️
And Shravan stipping her,consoling her and asking for a second chance...❤️
They truly deserved it, their friendship , love deserved it..!!

Off-course they and their love truly deserved it!

Kya proposal tha Shravan... 😳
Ek chance, do questions...Indeed a sharp mind 😉

Afterall banda aise hi Oxford thori chale gaya tha😛
Really loved how Shravan assured her that he wont leave her ever!!

None of them would ever!

I sooo loved their I Love You's...There was something beautiful a about confessing out loud...Specially when their love was so strong, so old but was hidden somewhere in their hearts all along..!!
Their hug...So comforting

Their love can't be defined! It was present all along and was screaming and yearning to be out!😃

Mera bhagwan, mera khuda......Awwiee!! 😳
Superb dialogue ya..❤️
Thanks!😛

Swaach Bharat Abhiyaan... 😆
Kya saaf safaai ki hai... 👏 😆
Do do kaam ek saath...wah wah.. 😆

Word!😆

That havan kund agni elaboration... 👏
Awesome work bro...Loved it ❤️
All credit to internet baba and google bhaiya!😆

Oxford mein panditaai...🤣
Matchstick box in purse... 😆
Sumo style...!!

Sumo is unpredictible!😉

N the best part..!!
ShraMan's saat vachan... ❤️
Sooo beautifully penned down dear... 😳
Awesome one !!

Glad that you liked it!😳

Subh ho gayi...So true!!
It was the starting of their new life together full of light with no space of darkness!!
Beautiful thought... Beautiful ending..❤️
I agree, but in order for the light to shine brightly darkness should be present!😃

All in all a blasting one dear...Take a bow ya!! 👏
Do write more 😊
Thanks for the pm 😊
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nikka sa Nik 😆

Love you too Di!🤗

Originally posted by: --Epithymia--

You know what you are not late at all.Many have not even unressed yet.😛

But here I need to Res for replying😆

Thanks for such a long comment!😃

Will do reply soon.😳

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

abhi... 🤗
UN changed lovely name..
superb update dear..
love shraman..
drunk sumo, their confession and marriage...
everything was beautifully written dear..
awesome 👏
thnx for pm.dear...