Wapas Aa Jao - A ShraMan (Kidnapping) OS

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nicky13

@nicky13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Zoya ... Thanks for this long-2 OS...sorry buddy for late reply... I was damn busy today... So come to the story... It was amazing.. You nailed it ... Sumo ne apne Shravan ko bacha Liya ... Very bold and brave she is ... Aditya is ullu ka patha... Panga kisse Liya hai ... Maza aaya uski dhulayi hoi ... Bada aaya sher banne... End was beautiful their bonding is sweet ... Thanks sweetie

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malika

@_symphony

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Thats another wonderful OS from you Zoya...loved it so much!! Mainly because you brought to fore Shravan's self unworthiness so subtly and so beautifully. He has major self-worth issues and only Sumo's love can ease them. And thats the reason I feel this kidnap track should not be wasted by cvs...Hope to see something similar in the show 😳

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.khaleesi.

@.khaleesi.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Sending u hugs for this Zoya 🤗
This was absolutely terrific!!!! 👏
Every single emotion penned so beautifully...even though a lil too dramatic for EDKV but still it touched my heart ❤️
This is way better than what can happen in the show... am very sure!!
I really want Aijaz to take inspiration from this for the kidnapping track coz this is stupendous!!
Keep writing more!! 😳
Also have a look at ur PM inbox!!

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Aanchal Arora

@aanchalverma04

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

OMG That was amazing!! This was written so beautifully, I am in awe. I really hope this happens in the show tbh!! 😊

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Pritha roy

@0Bella0

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Res
I m senior member now yes no post limits
party time 🥳
This is my 201st post
I don't want to unres it 😭
But I am good gal u see so I m unressing
UNRESS
Agar tum itni galat ho Sumo, toh kyun mera dil tumhare haq mai gavahi pesh kar raha hai? Kyun baar baar mera dil bas tumhe hi pukar raha hai? Kyun tumhari ek jhalak ke liye taras raha hoon? Kyun mujhe sirf tumhari salamati ki parvah hai? Kyun Sumo? Ek baar wapas mil jao tum. Zindagi bhar tumse maafi maangta rahoonga. Tum jo kahogi karoonga. Mai wapas tumhara Shravan ban jaaonga. Bas ek baar, sirf ek baar dekhna chahta hoon tumko." I just loved this line

Patni toh mai ban gayi, par pati bina patni kaise banti?" 🤣 this line MA

Kabse wait kar raha hoon! Itna beemar hoon, halat dekho meri. Koi apne beemar laachar pati se itna wait karvata hai kya?" awww poor Lambu jigsaw but that was so cute and that part where he though he was hallucinating again but this time Sumo was there for real

And then finally they confessed thank god TV mein nahi at least we got confession here

awsum os dear loved it 😳

Edited by pritzi - 9 years ago

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Gurveen

@Gurveen

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Marvellous piece of work
Their understand each other pain very well
It's like their souls are connected
Amazing...

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Zoyi... 🤗
Aww so beautiful and cute.
Patni bina pati..bimaar lachaar...pushpa..Aww u miss those ShraMan moments..
Love it Zoyi...❤️
U r fabulous writer yr..Love u... 🤗

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Spandana

@sptrno

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Wowww awww this was amazing beautiful adorable love it yaar!

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: PALAK19
Unres..
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Luv it Zoya...too too good

"Dekha hai na, par aaise nahi. Marr raha tha tumhari ek jhalak ke liye aur dekho tum aa gayi"
"Aana toh tha hi na mujhe. Patni toh mai ban gayi, par pati bina patni kaise banti?"
Shravan smiled, "Biwi!"❤️

bahut ache ji bahut ache ji...

Thank you so much Palak🤗