Wapas Aa Jao - A ShraMan (Kidnapping) OS - Page 11

Originally posted by: potterginny

Zoya!!!!
I LOVE THIS!!!!
Dono ki tadap! 😭
You redeemed Ramnath! ❤️
Sumo- Shravan banter at the end! 😆
Kudos hon!

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

OMG! Zoya this was so amazing!

I could actually picture everything!

Loved it and especially the ending was the best. ❤️

~ Mrina <3

Originally posted by: evaviego

Zoya... reading this OS was pure bliss... thanks for such an awesome OS...

sigh... wish this would have happened in the show...😕

Originally posted by: Perpetuity

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Zoyi 🤗 This is superb. I love Shravan's delusions. The way he felt Sumo was around is presented so AWESOMELY. Fantastic job in around those scenes man. You nail such scenes. That's why I always love to read your works. I feel like watching it not reading it. And the ending ShraMan back to their original form 😳 And about the length. Ab har story itni hi lambi likhna samjhi. It's fabulous 🤗
P.S- Sorry for being so late. You know about my memory 😛

Originally posted by: orion23

Your next birthday you're getting badams bro!

Thank you so much!

Your comment made my day...

Yeh wala likhne mai bohot time gaya tha😆

But I shall try best for the future story lengths😳

🤗

Originally posted by: pearl100

Zoya 😃 so sorry for the delay ...Finally managed to read this OS 😃

👏 This is for you dear for making it so realistic and brilliant ...the kidnapping along with some injuries and then the restlessness in sumo, Ramnath realizing his mistakes everything is spot on...its very close to reality, enjoyed reading it...This forum is blessed to have you yaaar...Loved everything you have writte,...Keep writing more yaar ...Till then take care.

Originally posted by: Vinayarao

Hi zoya

Kya kahani tha agar aur 10 page hota to bhi padti.

Keep writing more more more

I love to read long long OS

No problem about length