Wapas Aa Jao - A ShraMan (Kidnapping) OS - Page 4

Originally posted by: nith125

Loved it Zoya 🤗

Very well written, nicely paced, loved the hallucinations, these were my fav lines

"Nahi.. Tumhe choone ki koshish karoonga toh tum chali jaogi, jaise hamesha chali jaati ho."

"Mai iss baar sach mai yahan hoon Shravan. Dekho." She said extending her hand.

Would love to comment more but running short on time. Loved it ❤️

Originally posted by: Sahiba_07

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Brilliant 👏
Abb pata chala kaun asli sher hai 😎
I can totally imagine Sumo saving Shravan with just a bat 😆
That ending was

Loved it ❤️

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

*Whistles loud and clapping frantically*

KYA BAAT KYA BAAT!

SUPER SE BOHOT UPARR OS!

Ohh Emm Gee! You're constantly outdoing yourself every time!

Sher Kaun Hai Be! Jeh baat Veere!

Aditya the Chirkut Doggy! Out in a second!

Aai Shappat! I whistled at that Kutta dialogue!

Sumo with a Bat! Yeh hui naa 'Sumo' waali baat!

More than enjoyed it! Loved it!

Fantastic! Mind blowing! Awesome! Stupendous!

PS: Mamiji sucks!

Gawd! This was like totally freaking!

Love

Originally posted by: an_chau

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YAYYY, hoot hoot!! Kya khabar sunaya Zoya!!!

N.I.C.E... and L.O.N.G! 😃😃😃 I love me a long OS...

You did a great job at weaving in Shravan's hallucinations with reality... Sumo's just part of every part of his being, right? Muah! 👏

BTW, ROFL-ed at the "Beemar-lachar" and "Pushpa" dialogues... Yaar show mein woh din kab wapas ayenge...

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

^That contrast in the last Two lines tho😆😆😆