Wapas Aa Jao - A ShraMan (Kidnapping) OS - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: kennashreign

This was awesome, Zoya! I enjoyed reading it. Seemed so real. The writers must take tips from this piece and execute and culminate the kidnapping track well.

Oh my!
Itna bada compliment!
Thanks ya!
I'm sure the writers have something amazing planned!
But thank you so much šŸ¤—
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: orion23

@Prii

Aunty's got swag brošŸ˜†
Yeh din pe din aur kutta hota jaa raha hai..
Aadhe dialogue toh usne tab bole jab Shravan was knocked out. Matlab even when he's tied up he can get Chomu shitting bricks🤣
I can't wait for the epic pulp fight. Where all that will be left of Adi is a stinky gooey pulp!
šŸ˜†



Shravan doesnt need to raise his finger , awaz hi kafi adi ka dum nikalne ke liye šŸ˜†
N sumo is more than enough to beat the shit out of him 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Flibbertigibbet

Lol if my comments are giving life, does that make me a tree? :P what tree would i be?

You're a cactus šŸ¤—
Swagster on the outside, hilariously cool on the inside 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: sapphire3



Shravan doesnt need to raise his finger , awaz hi kafi adi ka dum nikalne ke liye šŸ˜†
N sumo is more than enough to beat the shit out of him 🤣

Agreed šŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Loved this one!
I so hope that after this kidnapping fiasco, there is some change in the dynamics between Shravan and Suman. Both should realize the fact that no matter how much differences they have, they cannot do without each other. They should understand the worth of each other's presence in their lives.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
You're a cactus šŸ¤—
Swagster on the outside, hilariously cool on the inside 😃
Hahaha well put! Cactus it is!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Loved it Zoya šŸ¤—
Very well written, nicely paced, loved the hallucinations, these were my fav lines

"Nahi.. Tumhe choone ki koshish karoonga toh tum chali jaogi, jaise hamesha chali jaati ho."

"Mai iss baar sach mai yahan hoon Shravan. Dekho." She said extending her hand.

Would love to comment more but running short on time. Loved it ā¤ļø

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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
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Brilliant šŸ‘
Abb pata chala kaun asli sher hai šŸ˜Ž
I can totally imagine Sumo saving Shravan with just a bat šŸ˜†
That ending was

Loved it ā¤ļø
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
*Whistles loud and clapping frantically*
KYA BAAT KYA BAAT!

SUPER SE BOHOT UPARR OS!

Ohh Emm Gee! You're constantly outdoing yourself every time!

Sher Kaun Hai Be! Jeh baat Veere!
Aditya the Chirkut Doggy! Out in a second!
Aai Shappat! I whistled at that Kutta dialogue!

Sumo with a Bat! Yeh hui naa 'Sumo' waali baat!

More than enjoyed it! Loved it!
Fantastic! Mind blowing! Awesome! Stupendous!

PS: Mamiji sucks!

Gawd! This was like totally freaking!

Love

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Posted: 9 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: memories_im

Loved this one!
I so hope that after this kidnapping fiasco, there is some change in the dynamics between Shravan and Suman. Both should realize the fact that no matter how much differences they have, they cannot do without each other. They should understand the worth of each other's presence in their lives.

Thank you so much!
And agreed! I would live to see the shift in dynamics...
It would be amazing!

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