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Posted: 8 years ago
"You are my blanket, from the evils of the world, from every harm, from each pain. You are blanket love, from the cold cruel winters."
That's the dialogue I love the most.
Can be used as the highlight / promo of the entire shot,
I like it that much.👍🏼

The idea is fresh and I also love the title which is quite different.

The blood moon bit made me recall a certain blood moon. ❤️ 🤗

It's beautiful how you've described that
words aren't really necessary for them
to express their feelings.
Their hearts are so in tune with each other.

Loved it!


And... sorry for commenting so late.
Life's really getting me so stressed at the moment.😕

So... keep writing like this.
Love,😃
Lara.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sapphire3

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Unresed
Zo 🤗
Priii🤗

I don't like you being sick so get your ass off the couch soonish
Yes Doctor!! I I Ma'am!


Awww this guinea pig is so cute! ❤️
TOH !! Toh sumo low battery alert ! 🤣
You do know your comments and GIFs are the most hilarious ever😆 Low battery🤣


"Well, umm... let's see... horny enough to tear most of my clothes, to give me new hickeys every now and then, to barge into the shower unhindered, to whisk me away for a quickey no matter where..."

"Its cause I have seen everything that's under the said shalwar kurta, you look absolutely natural minus the make up and the sweat, well you know just makes me want to get you to sweat more and..."



Aye haye!!! Blushy Klaus!! Prii yaaa... 🤪Bas yehi incentive hai mera 😆
I re- read this update and bro even with that crap show YRKKH playing on-screen I can't stop blushing .
You saved me from ladybond's torture 😆
Oh shit! Yeh best tha 🤣 ROFL! LAMO! It's a pleasure!!!
"Humne dekha tha faqat shouk-e-nazar ki khatir,
Yeh na socha tha ki tum dil mein utar jaaoge,

Humne chaha tha faqat ishq-e-dil hi ke khatir,
Yeh na socha tha ki rag rag mai sama jaaoge


👏 👏
Okay now you're making me blush!!!! 😳 Haye laaj aa gayi humko!

Le ASR wali smile😳 😉

Cheesy lines marte bhi yeh ladka kitna acha lagta
Ab hai hi aaisa kya kahe☺️

You are my blanket, from the evils of the world, from every harm, from each pain. You are my blanket my love, from the cold cruel winters
you are the blanket to my soul.

Muahhh! Sumo tere hazaar khoon maaf . Dil le liya❤️
Hahahha... I've clearly made my peace with Sumo😆

It was a such cute dil ko sukoon wala update .
Haina...
You made me your fan , cooler , AC and I'm proud of you meri jaan 🤗
Aye haye! Bas khatam! Proud of me😎
You are the reason I'm here! Writing! And you are proud.. Le ❤️
Aur haan

Yeh kya hai? Dikh nahi ra?
Ab jaldi se thik ho ja . Itna chotu se kaam nahi chalega . Yeh dil mange more😆 you know na
Haanji bilkul 😆 #BhikmangeForever 🤣
Take care hon!
Thanksie...
PS.- Mahi 🤗 . Ja di tujhe first position 😆
Ati raha kar ya . We miss you😔
Word! We do!

@Bold Priii 🤗
I lub you re!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Res

Second
Ji aap second aaye ho par aap aaye toh ho!!!!!!🥳
Unress
Aaje toh maaru lucky divas che! Two two Shraman stories by Zoya! I'm drooling 😳
Aww man
Aww! How EFFING CUTE IS THAT SWEET LITTLE THOUGHT ☺️
Shravan : you're my blanket ❤️
Aye haye! Mar jawaan kudiye
Na! Don't die! Please don't die!

Kya baat, lajawaab!
Shukriya!
Muah.
Muah back!
Prii - I'm first to unress so I'm first anyways 😎
Lol...
Yeh le...
Batli award 😆

@Bold Mahi 🤗
I've missed you ya!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

If you could see my smile right now, I am grinning like an idiot, so so beautiful ❤️

Aww man🤗 I'm glad I could manage to bring a smile to your face😛
Aaj toh Shravan mood main tha 😆
Haanji!
I don't know if you watched ZGH but it reminds me of that scene when the power goes off and Zaroon is being all romantic with Kashaf !
Oh hell yeh! I love that show... Woh swing wala scene na... It indeed is similar!
I can TOTALLY imagine being Shravan like this, remember "Kitna kuch kehne ko, karne ko tadpa hoon main."
Haye sacchi!!!
He would always be hugging her or holding hands and I can say that you portrayed Sumo very well in this one, she is not used to be loved like this and it was well penned !
Shukriya😃
The talk in the beginning was all kinds of cute !
Haina...
Please take care of yourself and take looots of rest and come back like a boss 😎
Amen to that buddy!!

@Bold Thank you so very much Kitki!!!!
😳
Edited by orion23 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: theGoldenGirl

Wow an update!!🥳

Yo!
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It's always a pleasure to read anything from you and 'Mrs and Mr Malhotra' series is really special to me. Don't know why reading this always gives me some sort of peace.
Aww dude! That's really sweet of you to say🤗
Loved the drabble so much ❤️
And I'm glad you did!
Swag Malhotra 😳
Yeh Flibb and me used to call him that
I liked how Shravan was more open about declaring his love more than her. I expected this after their confession. "Ab joh ye baat bahar aayi hai, toh kamaal ho jayega"😆
Hainaaa!!! He was a shayar after all😎
Dare if anyone calls Shravan's lovemaking sex!! 😉 He hates it.
Oh hell yeh he does
Blanket figuratively as well as literally 😳☺️
Absolutely!!!
The shayari was good but wished you had written subtitles below it. My Urdu is confined to small words.
Aiyyo, sowwiii... It didn't occur to me 🥺
Hope the series' list keeps on becoming long.
I hope so too😃
Love,
Swarnima

@Bold Thank you so much Swarnima😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Wow Zoya... You do magic with words... That was some drabble..

Thank you so much hon 😳
How intimately romantic... Haaye kaash life me ek to moment aisa ..itna ..itna romantic ho har kisi ke... Where words make you so .. wht to say... So completely at bliss inside...
Oh man! Sacchi kasam se...
Your drabble is our blanket which made me feel so warm and fluffy inside 😊
Alee Shukriya!

@Bold Thanks so very much!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: adityasingh.246

I think Romantically Beautiful is right word ..

Thank you so much 😛
shravan appears to be more vocal about his feelings and sumo doesn't,love is in her gestures .. and that one line is enough to make me go all loony,smiling as if saw that on screen ..
Oh you bet!! That would have been a treat though...
but it was so warm,beautiful sometimes words aren't enough to compliment.. i'm in that situation now ..❤️
Glad...

@Bold Thank you so very much!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Amulya--

Yaar Zoyi, you make me both happy and sad at the same time... I so wished these all to happen in the show but again no regrets as I'm getting it through your writeups.

Amulya🤗
I can't believe you're here!
It's been so long!!
I'm glad you commented...
Thank you so much!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

Ressi ress😛

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Unress

I had to bite the flash inside my cheeks to keep myself from grinning, mom had been observing me since a long time and she looked at me as if she was just ready to put me through some therapy in the mental hospital, I had been grinning all through this update, but the shaayaari part👏
Ahahaha issh!
Thank you!
I literally will copy these lines when I propose someone in future😉
Oho... bilkul ... 😳
Another amazing update👏
Shukriya!
Love
Arpita

@Bold Thanks so much hon!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: maddy_edkv

i loved it zoya di. its sooo nice. you're truly a magician. this is sooo sweet.

Aww girl.. thank you😳
shraman are just awesome. and that shayari. i cant tell you how much i loved this maybe you should come and see how i'm smiling right now. please write more fluff stuff like this.
Alee happy that you're happy 😛
ZOYA DI, YOU MADE MY DAY.
Glad to have been able to help 😃
take care thanks for the pm
You're welcome!
lots of love
Madhu

@Bold Thank you so very much Madhu 😊

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