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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Zoya's Shayri translations, in case anyone isn't too well versed in Urdu :

I saw you, only for the sake of my eyes (Dekha tha tumhe faqat shouk-e-nazar ke khaatir)
I never expected you to get deep down in my heart and soul (Socha naa tha ki dil mein utar jaoge)
I loved you only for the sake of the feelings in my heart (humnein chaha tha faqat ishq-e-dil hi ke khatir)
I never thought you'll be a part of my existence ( yeh naa socha tha ki rag rag mein samaa jaoge)

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Chuki mere andar ka shayar jaag utha hain, socha ki chaar shabd hum bhi farmaa Lein..

Arz kiya hain..

Shayar dekhe bohot se humnein
Par aapsa haseen khwaab naa dekha
Kisse toh bohot sune hain humnein
Par likhavat ka aisa noor-e-chehra naa dekha <3

Puppies & Kisses :* :*

Before Zoya hits me with dandaa, bye!😆


Awww beautiful shayari dear..Thank you so much for the translation!
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Posted: 8 years ago
It was so adorable..beautifully penned..
Loved it.
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res... 😊
Will Try to unres asap..!!
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Unresed @ pg 84
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Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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What is this Zoyi🥱. Me waiting 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
I know I might be late but just finished reading the Postcards one and omg Zoya you left me in tears...happy ones though!! :') That story is so so amazing...I could actually feel ShraMan n their love coursing through it ❤️ The way Shravan puts so much effort to bring his Sumo back from fear n depression of that turmoil she faced n assures her of his love n their forever togetherness with all those postcards n details of their future, it made my heart swell with love.Sometimes I really wish Zoya you were on the creatives panel n then how many of our ShraMan dreams would be fulfilled. Really mann u r a rockstar!!
And Zoya I have a request, in case you find time. Would love to read if you write on the story which Namik told in his periscope where Sumo brings him back from depression after he comes to know Ramnaths truth. Pretty please if you get a chance :)

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello!
Just wanted to say that I love the title of this OS.
You are my blanket!

Because my blanket is calling me at the moment😃, I'll read the whole OS tomorrow and comment. 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow!!U r amazing..
Sumo is not as vocal as shravan is about her feelings but this simple statement expressed them so well
And the shayari is beautiful
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Posted: 8 years ago
This was just AwwwDorable😳 Was similing till the end of it☺️ Its always a pleasure reading ur drabbles... Loving the romantico shravan a lot😳 Keep writing more👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
ZOYA...!!!! 🤗
First of all... Get Well Soon... Like really really soon. 😊

coming to the update..

Awesome Awesome Awesome...!!!

What a beautiful piece..!!!

I just loved their banters...!!! How beautifully you have penned the dialogues darling...Muaaahhh... Mazaaa aa gaya...!!

Suman Shravan Tiwari Malhotra..!!! Now thats WOW..!!!

Naughty Shravan is just 😉 ahem ahem... Super Sexy...!!!

I could actually see them bickering in my imagination... itna realistically you have written this one.. Superb...!!

You have got some brilliant ideas girl...Kudos to that..

Oh how romantic was the convo on the terrace... I was smiling like an idiot... so dreamy..

Shravan's Moon...!! Haaayeee

Loved your Shayari and the romantic Shravan a lot ❤️

Sumo being vocal about her feelings... Awww... He deserves it. He really deserves to hear such sweet things. It was beautifully written and your choice of words just added to the beauty of it...!!

Thanks for writing this.

P.S. The RES on The Postcards will also be UnRessed soon 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Zoya's Shayri translations, in case anyone isn't too well versed in Urdu :

I saw you, only for the sake of my eyes (Dekha tha tumhe faqat shouk-e-nazar ke khaatir)
I never expected you to get deep down in my heart and soul (Socha naa tha ki dil mein utar jaoge)
I loved you only for the sake of the feelings in my heart (humnein chaha tha faqat ishq-e-dil hi ke khatir)
I never thought you'll be a part of my existence ( yeh naa socha tha ki rag rag mein samaa jaoge)

...

Chuki mere andar ka shayar jaag utha hain, socha ki chaar shabd hum bhi farmaa Lein..

Arz kiya hain..

Shayar dekhe bohot se humnein
Par aapsa haseen khwaab naa dekha
Kisse toh bohot sune hain humnein
Par likhavat ka aisa noor-e-chehra naa dekha <3

Puppies & Kisses :* :*

Before Zoya hits me with dandaa, bye!😆


Thanks a ton for translating it Mahi...!!! 🤗
This is so beautiful... WOW...!!

Zoya Awesome Shyari bro..

And coming to your shayari... Mahi... Dil jeet liya aapne bhi 😉
Beautifully penned..

Keep up the amazing work guys..!!!

And Mahi... would love to read something from you too...!! 😳

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