Mrs. & Mr. Shravan Malhotra - Thread # 1 - Now moved to Wattpad - Page 42

Originally posted by: jassie_17

heyyy...

This piece was totally unexpected and i'm sorry i've been low key for some time..Your piece was spectacular despite not having been proofreadIt was truly a fun honeymoon experience for two besties in luv...First scene was so Sumo exasperating Shravan who tagged along being irked by her antics...haha the backstabbers,the apt way of calling PCT gang!!!

The bubble bath scene was too cute and Sumo falling in love all over again with Shravan who hid behind the walls of those 10 years spent without her...That was really beautiful esp when she finds out about his accent!!

A truly enjoyable piece!!!

Cheers,

Jassie

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

Zoya di 🤗

Anu!!!🤗

This one was truly marvellous... 👏

Thank you!

The way he makes her quiet in the plane... That was so so cute... 😃

The roam London and that song Safarnama..

Apt choice n that's my favourite song too...

So many of us love it!!

That kalash and all... I was totally imagining how it would be like...

Amazing update n thanks for the pm.. 😳

You're welcome!

Love,

Anu😊

Originally posted by: Sithara.Soman

Hey Zoya

Nice Update

Totally superb

I like it☺️

Originally posted by: arshuaar

amazing...
beautifully penned...
loved it...

Originally posted by: pal655

Ressi res. I will unres it after my semester exam that is almost December last week. :((
Pls bear with me. Thanks for continuing this:)

Originally posted by: AMNP

This is amazing Zoya...beautifully written 👏 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Safire

👏no words!!!!Zoya you are unbeatable!!!!

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

This was amazing Zoya.

I loved their entire honeymoon.. the whole thing was sheer love. ❤️

Waiting for your next. 😳

~ Mrina <3

Originally posted by: dhanyata

This was a surprise gift to us. Very beautiful gift indeed.

I love surprises!

Hatke...but so pleasant

Enjoyed thoroughly😃 shravan is sooo adorable. his love is so special. ❤️ U portrayed it very well...not simply he is living his current with sumo...it feels like he wants to live the past 10 yrs again with her, that's what i felt like when he took her to his college...the sunrise place...his firm...making her meet his friends. .staffs..n all. Taking her to his house in london...was aweee...the kalash thing is so touchy. His room with all their photos...😳 lastly the profile pic photo...😆...can't appreciate enough.

They had missed out so much in life! Itna banta tha haina?

Simply to say,Ur writings always reincarnates shraman's love in our heart👏

Aww thanks!

waiting for next ...soonish

Updated yesterday, soon enough I hope😆

Originally posted by: poonamkejri

hi Zoya. it was amazing. this is actually what we wanted in the serial but did not get. desperate for these moments. but kya kare the serial ended. hope we get edkvs2