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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Yeh kya kar daala!
Maar daala!
Klaus
Uff!

Their's is getting stronger with time...
Agreed!
Honeymooners for life 😳
Goals!
Amazinggg story as ever !❤️
Thank you so much!

@Bold Klaus daalneke liye 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Wiccamaya

Zoya... god bless you ... beautiful one... awww some ... but give us more ... London ... love ... life... beautifully penned !

Greedy much😆
Thank you so much Wic!!!
And God bless you too!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: maddy_edkv

I'm sooo sorry for being late.had extra classes today. so a wee bit late.

Coming to the OS its Amazing yaar.honeymooners for life.perfect shramanlicious update. Just loved it.keep writing
Thanks for the pm and sorry again for being late

Thank you so much Maddy!!
You're welcome!!
Take care!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: PprEDKV

Wow its was so cute yar Zoya

The beginning was awesome "We r in love" I really fell in love with ShraMan again for which I was detached.
Lucky you! To be able to get detached.. Mai toh ab bhi wahin hoon😆
That cute nok jhoks 🤣
Sumoness was back 😉😆
Sunrise part was so beautiful 😳
Bathtub romance ☺️ was romantically romantic 😆
Finally mr. Eric made an entry 😆
That 2 months wala idea 😆.
My ShraMan ❤️
Overall it was so amazing yar 😳
Thank you so much!
Thanks for this 😳
Anytime...

@Bold Thanks bro!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: evaviego

PERFECT...!!! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

this is such an amazing update...
I'm glad you found it so!!
hahahaa... Sumo and her typical wife mode was 😆 😆 😆 😆
I loved Sumoness we got in the beginning of the show...
by god this Shravan is goals yaarr... banda ho toh esa...
Kasam se!
Adorable , hilarious, emotional and romantic... ALL IN ONE..!!! 👍🏼👍🏼

thanks Zoya for such a beautiful OS. 😊
You're welcome!

@Bold thanks so much Eva!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

wow zoya ur an amazing writer I must say...the topics u chose, it all were the one we were dreaming of watching in serial...but couldn't...but m damn happy you fulfilled it...reading it again n again that's all I want...

Thank you so much! I'm glad I could emote and put it across...

The way you did the beginning and end was amazing...how they'd wake up late...their bickering...n the words which you wrote in inverted commas like 'duniya' , 'khushi' , 'bahana'...loved the way you wrote them ... n how sumo used to trace his face n her dialog to sunrays how dare they. its my right only ..cute it was...n the control of saint...lol... really man he's a saint... n then tm pehle freshen up ho jao just because he loved her smell...watching her drying her hair, get soaked in water drops of her hair...lovely...n then sumo makes his fvrt breakfast everyday... n always calling her bahane se ...rofl n pushkie teasing...n sumo shooting daggers...lol...n all excuses were hilarious...really he's poor at making excuses...n handkerchief ...like really ...kv to rkha ni phle n ab ... n waiting for each other...arrgfhhh really...reminded me of those days when I used to show the clock 10 so that I could watch edkv ...n their bickering...zyada kha lia ...bhukkad...tmhari galti hai..itna tasty bnati..kisiko marna mt ...n her reply no tmhare alawa or kisiko ni ...lol...cute it was. .
Thanks for listing out all that you liked in the chapter :)

so beautiful zoya ...loved it... time for next os :-p

@Bold Thank you so much Anju, hope I got the name right this time around..

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

God hell I missed it...how could I???.

Galti sab se ho jaati hai😆
Thanks a lot zoya ...I really love you the way you describe each n every feeling...n this one was epic...I've no offence in this...I agree sumo would've done exactly wat you've written in this os ...the fear engulfed shravu when he didn't find sumo...I knew it, he'd grab his car keys n would go to find sumo out...the way he just started checking her man how much he cares for her...reminded me of 144 episode...how death scared he was...n how his voice trailed off tum mujhe chodkr chali gyi ...n then sumo...how could she...their hug was the evidence how much they love each other...n the confession part ...I was imagining each n everything (that's exactly wat I do, whenever I read about shraman) ...how she thought it as a joke...n slapped adi .. loved that part :-p n shocked shravu ...how much she trusts him...n then confession, the reason behind his doings n then sumo k questions and answers were amazing...it had to be like this in serial too...but they just made it more complicate unnecessarily...huh...khair ...you just did it...n how sumo asked him do u love me n like a baby he said...it was beautiful..n finally their kiss...;) his smirk was back...lol...loved it...a dialog I felt hilarious was' if guilt was a grain, shravan was the farm's ...though it was according to situation but such dialogs feel like sarcasms...n edkv dekhkr to my sarcasms have improved more ;) loved it zoya ...time for next os :)

Thanks once again for listing out all that you liked in the chapter, helps me write better.
Take care!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful...

honeymoon in London...
u took us all the way to London to witness the life of Shravan where he has spent his 10 years of life...his Oxford college...his colleague Eric finally we met him...Sumo's grahpravesh in Shravan's house in London...his firm...his bedroom where he put his families photos, Sumo's photo...everything was marvelous...

keep writing


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Posted: 8 years ago
moments of impact...you've brought me to such a position, where I'm at verge of lost of words zoya ...ur going to be the death of me ...man ur OS's God they left me dumbstruck ...especially this one...moments of impact...God kya bolu smjhni aara ...full of all emotions...happy, touchy, sarcastic, funny, emotional... it was perfect...one dialog at which I we rolling on my bed langar lagana hai kya when shravu told her the name of dishes he was making especially for her...n then usse pehle kitchen m kya krre ho that bickering part was so sarcastically funny...n then morning 2am Tom uncle ka tea stall lutenge...hilarious it was... n all flashbacks were amazing...and then in beginning how sumo brought breakfast for him n he got emotional n opened his heart that he'd become addicted of leaving alone...no one ever cared...emotional kr dia ... n then sumo k purane ghr wale part ka to each n every scene was so so beautiful n heart touching...ab last wale scenes ni describe krna Maine wrna ro dena hai maine...loved it...I felt it was ur bestest os in the four I've read till yet...a big tight hug u for this...love u sis...time to unres next os ...:)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23

@Bold thanks so much Eva!!


even i also loved the sumoness we got in the beginning...


in fact... Sumo was loved by all... Its Suman people disliked.. 😆😉


you know there is a tamil channel which is airing edkv..
every time i watch it.. i hate the cvs more and more for ruining the show...

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