Mrs. & Mr. Shravan Malhotra - Thread # 1 - Now moved to Wattpad - Page 41

God hell I missed it...how could I???. thanks a lot zoya ...I really love you the way you describe each n every feeling...n this one was epic...I've no offence in this...I agree sumo would've done exactly wat you've written in this os ...the fear engulfed shravu when he didn't find sumo...I knew it, he'd grab his car keys n would go to find sumo out...the way he just started checking her man how much he cares for her...reminded me of 144 episode...how death scared he was...n how his voice trailed off tum mujhe chodkr chali gyi ...n then sumo...how could she...their hug was the evidence how much they love each other...n the confession part ...I was imagining each n everything (that's exactly wat I do, whenever I read about shraman) ...how she thought it as a joke...n slapped adi .. loved that part :-p n shocked shravu ...how much she trusts him...n then confession, the reason behind his doings n then sumo k questions and answers were amazing...it had to be like this in serial too...but they just made it more complicate unnecessarily...huh...khair ...you just did it...n how sumo asked him do u love me n like a baby he said...it was beautiful..n finally their kiss...;) his smirk was back...lol...loved it...a dialog I felt hilarious was' if guilt was a grain, shravan was the farm's ...though it was according to situation but such dialogs feel like sarcasms...n edkv dekhkr to my sarcasms have improved more ;) loved it zoya ...time for next os :)

adorable beautiful as always dear

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Res
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Unress

Zo 🤗
Prii 🤗

This update was worth waiting 👏 👏 👏

Haina!!
I was grinning so much I wonder how my mouth is still in one piece

Cause mouths don't break😆
Is zalim duniya se chupte chupate maine padhi ye update Malik *classic nirupama Roy expressions*

Aye haye!! 🤣
Enough of my stupid rants . Let's come to the update 😆
I quite like your rants!
Sumo episodes 🤣 🤣
Where do you get these ideas? 😆
Bas aapke Malik ka kamal samjh lo...

Your stories have right amount of humour . We laugh at one moment n other moment We have a dreamy smile
That's what u call Zoya's effect 😎
That's a new law in physics is it? I like the ring of it though.. The Zoya Effect 😎

"Two questions, why are you a gadha for marrying me and why don't you love me anymore?"

I could imagine a frustrated shravu 😆 . He must be having a hard time keeping his sanity 😆

Sumo would always drive him nuts!

From you don't love me to why do you love me so?? I agree she is bipolar 😆

They both were 😆

Arey ek toh tum har baat mai mere profession pe kyun aa jaati ho? Yeh nahi aata, lawyer kaise bane? Woh bhi nahi aata lawyer kaise bane? What does packing a bag have to do with being a lwayer?"

Patni se sataya hua bechara pati😆
Sab kismat ka khel hai Pushpa!!

But I love their bickering ❤️ . They may have become husband n wife but still argue like kids 😆
# DilTohBachaHaiJi 😆

Always!!

Honeymoon in London!!!
Nothing could have been better than this .
I always wanted him to show her the place where he spent a decade.
I know right! Guilty pleasure!

Sumo is scared of flying . How well you correlated it to the Ferris wheel incident 👏
His assurance he is there for her always ❤️
Shravan the jaan!
Oxford journey was so dreamy with safarnama song . Felt like watching a romantic movie
I think I'm gonna use this emoticon too often in this update 😳
Safarnama is love and since it was the most special journey of their lives, it felt right..

Use the emoticon all you want! I love it!
Ahan Bathtub romance 😉 ... I like it!!!
We like any romance, bas romance mangta hai...😆
Aww Grah Pravesh in London ❤️
This man is a sweetheart . I wish I could kidnap him n keep all for myself 😉

Makes two!
But he is already taken n many more here must be cooking the same plans as me 😆
I don't want shravan malhotra to be the reason of world war III 😆
Well that would be one hell of a reason!

See kitni shantipriya hoon main 🤣
Aayi badi😆
Ahobhagya humare!!! Eric Bhaiya ke darshan hue *sheds bucket full of khushi ke ansoon*
Hahaha! Muh dikhai ho hi gayi!
Even when he was mad at her, despised her, he treasured their memories , their pics 😃
Of course! His love was such...

Sumo as rose n shravan as jack painting her ...that would surely cause global warming 😉
Aye haye! My feeble heart!
2months work n 2weeks off ...awesome plan!!!!
It's my dream plan😆 If only...
Are movie khatm 😲 ...I didn't want it to end

Well yeh...
Without any explicit content ( someone must be very happy about it . You know who 😉 ) this honeymoon was ❤️

I didn't keep zero explicit for someone else.. Mujhe explicit likhna saras nahi lagta 🤣
Do I need to tell how much I love it?? N you even more ❤️ 🤗
Nah I already know❤️

P.s.- Again I have written a long one. Are you proud of me Malik??

I can't tell you how much @Mehboob
Nahi?😲 . I am 🤣
I may have missed many things . But you know I'll be back .. don't u?

Of course you will! You can't get enough reading just once!
This is worth many reads!!!

Originally posted by: Naamika

That's what special about your writing skills orion. When you read this it is not just that you are putting an usual shraman moments together but it is also giving serious life goals. the idea of on and offs is simply great that if we implied that in our life it will be SO easy to make balance between personal and professional life .

Originally posted by: Joyness

Loved it..just awesome two months work two weeks off kya idea...

Originally posted by: an_chau

Wah Zoya ji, kya baat hai... Yeh Banda to awesome se awesome-er bante ja raha hai! Makes me want to just say, "Purrr-fect"!
Hugs!

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

wow

totally amazing

loved it so much

continue soon

Originally posted by: Sana_Jannat

👏 lovly ..poor husband shravan 😆, honeymoon in London & ShraMan Moments ❤️ 👏
🤗

Originally posted by: LubSha

Hi Zoya, this is Lubna. Very well written. Loved it. Read your work before, so sorry for not being responsive then. We all enjoyed their Honeymoon with them. Lol. But seriously this was what their honeymoon would b like. Are you from London? You describe it so well. Would love to read more. Keep writing, you have lot of fans here.
😊

Lubna.

Originally posted by: Faith28

The idea of On and Offs is totally lifes goals👍🏼 There was so much happiness, enjoyment and lourvveee ❤️in the chapter...could feel the excitement 😊 Lovely writeup as always... Please get us. more stuff...cant get enough of ShraMan😳