Damaged- A FF on Sharaman Part 62 (Pg 150) - Page 12

Interesting update..gripping storyline

jerry ... eternity ... coming hot in 15 min...😛

Its amazing and also emotional
Feeling bad for sumo
Plz update soon

God I really am speechless ...this adi is a monster...go to hell... sumo girl totally broken...emotionless, n yeah how can she trust shravu now... not shravu only kisipe v ni ...
shravu it took u a hell of lot to realise her iimportance...u deserve it but just don't leave her...win her trust, her heart, ur sumo...make her jhalli sumo again...fun loving , full of life...
chapter was marvelous wic ...thanks for the pm...waiting for next pm n part :)
n the images u add at the end of every part is awsm, all showing reality...

You are doing a great job enjoying it !

Wic u scared me !!
I thought that creep adi did something to sumo
She is hurt beyond repair 😭
Freakin' Awesome 👏 👏
Thanks for the pm
Update real soon!!

This is phenominal!!
The emotions you put across simply guts me in the stomach.

You have brilliantly brought the emotions of the characters in so few a words. The quotes at the end of each episode are stellar.

Shravan is absolutely marvelous in your story. Right from pretending indifference to the morbid curiosity, from stark realisations to soul sickening guilt, he is in full element. And the bewda Shravan was gorgeous. Sumo ke alawa kisi ke saath ghar nahi jaunga! Can he get anymore adorable!!

I loved his conversation with Ramu kaka. He feels so helpless, might I say that since the moment of truth he ceased to exist- tedha Shravan, Seedha Shravan, Paa ka Raja beta Shravan has all gone for a toss; only the friend remains. Even the lover has taken a backsit.

Suman's grief and broken spirit haunts me. Her nightmares were chilling!Loved her karara jawab to Adi,Mami and Company.
Shravan is desperate to have her back. Will it be a case of too little too late?
He needs to heal her very soul that is damaged.

Aditya is a raving lunatic.

Can't wait for the story to unfold.

Fabulously written its getting more n more interesting in every chapter. Love it

Loved the updayes...superb..both are in so much pain