Damaged- A FF on Sharaman Part 62 (Pg 150) - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago
Read all missed parts one go. Errr this rascal Aditya what is he upto kamina pan par utar aaya.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aditya needs a bashing sumo ishtyle
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Posted: 9 years ago
Plz update soon
I am waiting for this 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finished the whole story in one go. Its so amazing. While reading your story my hands were reaaly shaking and was crying .oh god both shravan and suman are really unlucky no one cares for them except for each other. Kudos to you shaily you are such a good writer
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Posted: 9 years ago
👏👏👏
wonderful
eager to see now how shravan sets everything right
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Posted: 9 years ago
update next part please ! loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Part 10

Suman sleeps on couch... (Sharavan pretending to be asleep and waited for her to sleep)

Sharavan_ Sumo meri sumo ... how much I wish to take you in my arms to comfort you... Mere choti doll ... I messed up our lives ... kya sochata tha tumhe propose karoonga ... Fir tum aur main movie jayege... and you will hold my hand and lean on my shoulder. Hum shaadi karege ... tum shopping karogi aut main shopping bags uthaooga... log kahege kee Sharavan badal gaya... par main to tumhare liye hee badal gaya... aaj tum muje kuch bhe nahi batati ho... sab maan main rakhti ho... galti mere hee hai... sirf mere, tumne to dikha diya tha kee kitna trust hai muj par... main hee tumhara haath pakadana bhool gya ... and now I don't know what this Aditya is upto. But I promise Sumo... no nightmare will touch you ever.

Suman sleeping peacefully as Sharavan sits beside couch holding her hand.

She wakes up in morning to found him sleeping awkwardly ... her hand in his hand ... (It's too late Sharavan... I am not alive to understand these emotions)

10 o' Clock Morning_

Chachi Sumo kahan hai... kisi ne mujhe uthaya kyo nahi...

Sharavan puttar vo PTC gaye hai..

Aapne use akele jane dia...

Sharavan Puttar jo baat tumne kahi hai uske bare main... uske baad main to kya ab use koe bhe nahi rok sakta hai...

S**t ... Rushed to take out car...

Driving_ Ring

Aditya_ Hello Mr Sharavan Malhotra... so you are out... but you are late ... Your queen...

Kya kia Sumo ko ...

Arre maine to abhi kuch kaha bhe nahi... run ... Sharavan... run... pata nahi my would be wife... Theek hai ya nahi...

Shravan calls on her no frantically ... No response ... Preeta at least you pick call ...

Haan Sharavan bolo...

Sumo hai vahan...

Nahi, Vo aaye the fir kisi kaam se bahar gaye hai...

Kahan gaye hai...

Chandani chowk...

Address SMS karo ... Immediately

God Sumo... you just wait for me... please god keep her safe... S**t main soo kaise gaya...

(Heavy traffic in chandani Chowk. He just left his car and running ... Searching for her in narrow crowed lanes, asking for the address and praying for his life... yes his life.

SUMO... he pulled her in tight embrace with trembling hands... chalo abhi yahan se...

But why?

Baad main Sumo... abhi chalo, authoritative Sharavan Malhotra ordered and she complied...

In car_

What happened ... why you kidnapped me like this ...

Kidnapped ... Jolted by the word he clasped her hand and derived like a mad only to stop car in front of Malhotra house. He dragged her all the way to their room ... making her feel suddenly shy in front of family members and servants.

Sharavan ab bologe kya hua ?

Sumo you won't go alone anywhere...

Ohhh really ... By who's order and why?

Sumo...

Suman please ...

Suman, it's not an order just a request and I can't tell you right now why I am asking this favour... please understand.

Sharavan you remember the day we got-so-called-married ... You came to PCT ... Fooled me, no tricked me ... and made me sign the papers ... Again the same drama... one or another pretext to play with my emotions... No Sharavan we have no scope left to be agree on same thing.

Please listen to me ... okay just for a week ...

Not for another second... arre ek baat yaad aaye mujhe ... sharavan tumhe yaad hai maine kaha tha kee ek baar mil kar baat karte hai... Too chalo aaj baat khatam karte hai... Aaj mauka bhe hai ... tum bhe ho... main bhe hoon ... shayad kal main naa rahoon... too aaj ye baat poori kar he lete hoon...

Aaisa mat bolo tum hamesha rahogi...

Haan ye bhe theek hai ... Main hamesha rahoongi ... tumhari insults main ... right

Sharavan tum apni shikayate pahle gina do... Fir main apni baate khati hooon...

Sumo ... mujhe koe shikayat nahi hai... Main too apne aap se sharminda hoon.

Baitho... Time lagega... kahi jana to nahi hai Mr malhotra..


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Note_ Kabhi naav Gari par ... Kabhi gari naav par...

Edited by Wiccamaya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh my freakin mata!!
This was 👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb updates wic..
Adi is psycho..
Sumo hurt beyond repair..
U r making it thriller..interesting..
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Posted: 9 years ago
I am in love with your writing

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