ShraMan FF [AU]: Coming Home [Update: C12, Pg 68, Oct 28th]

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Roshni2015

@Roshni2015

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#411

Anjali,

This is amazing... Absolutely loved it..

The date was so so beautiful...

Cheers!!

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Zenab

@Duskyylilac

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#412

their movie date wow
mind blowing update Anjali they are adorable
Pushkar and Adi Who is the one who caught them
I hope Shraman won't get caught
waiting for next update

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@Priyodorshee

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#413

Hotness & cuteness at the same time..☺️

Their date,the conversation & everything were so damn awwwie😳

Gosh Aditya & Pushkar cracked me up🤣

Okay I loved the finishing so much. I love this Sumo so much😉

Thanks for the PM, Anjali 🤗
You won't believe but I just talked about how much I'm craving for your writings yesterday...and then your update literally made my day 😊

Please Keep writing on ShraMan forever. This talent is God gifted❤️

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 46

Posted: 8 years ago

#414

Just as I commented on the previous chapter, you updated. 😳 Well, onto it. 😳

The drive to the date location and the entire dreamy date was so so beautiful man. Do we really get such boyfriends in real life? Please tell me where to find them? 😃

AND THAT MAKE OUT SESSION WAS SO SO HAWWTTT!!! ☺️

Aditya and Pushkar are epic. 🤣 They are the worst detectives ever. 😆 They got caught! 😆 By who though? Preeti? 🤔

The morning after the date was so cute. Shravan teasing Sumo about taking a shower and she responding in the smartest way to shut him up. 😉

Loved loved loved the update! Love you Anji.. 🤗 ❤️

~ Mrina <3

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nuttynuts

@nuttynuts

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#415

And that my friend, was utter fluff!

Amazing update!

Loved the cute movie date. Now which girl wouldn't want Shravan! Such a sweetheart 😳 Madam Sumo was no less. She's keeping pace with him 😉.

Poor Pushkar and Aditya. They got caught? 😆 Have a feeling it's Vandy. But her being dumb, they might just get away.

Waiting for the next update.

Cheers!

Nuts

Edited by nuttynuts - 8 years ago

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#416

I know I haven't undressed for the previous chapter,me being lazy for the matter of fact and I apologize for that.

I will combine both probably in this comment.

There is no denial when it comes to saying that you are the best here and we are really lucky to have you here in this forum.

This update was utter cuteness and only helped me keep my hopes and standards high that were already sky high.It was like a fairy tale fantasy in a contemporary world.The date,the talks,the intamacy that followed and then the kiss and the decorations and idea along.

Not to forget how 'cheesly' did you describe the pizza *I am Hungary now*

I absolutely loved the Aditya and Pushkar part,way to a adorable and funny specially when Aditya asks Pushkae if he is trying to take Aunty's(Shravan's mother's) place!

The morning after in the farmhouse and what led ahead with Shravan teasing her about the shower and bold Sumo following it left me grinning and blushing!

You do wonders.

Update soon :)

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Gurveen

@Gurveen

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#417

Their first date was so perfect for them
And the waking up in each other arms is too cute
Pushkar and Aditya are such adorable Cupids always ready to push Shravan Suman love forward
Waiting for next update
Continue soon

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1095142

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#418

hi anjali, i literally am slapping myself (mentally) to stay quiett for so long, but i have been following this since the beginning. i thanku for providing us with such a beautiful ff and even mire for continuing it after the show ended. i love the way u portrayed aditya as a positive character for once and did not let him appear as the jerk he is, i love how you recreated some scenes modifying my favorite preetibhoj scene and also the scene of shravan's sprained foot. and if i start counting the great factors about the story india forums will block me for posting more characters than allowed🤣.

allt the more i really admire ur work and get inspired every time with a new chapter.

update soon and do pm me, i have already sent a buddy request to ur other account.😆

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kennashreign

@kennashreign

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#419

This was lovely. You really have a knack of creating larger than life romances. They are very believable and not OTT at all. Continue soon.

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#420

Anjali I don't have any words yr..
Khud hi praise karlo apni in best and beautiful way like u write..ab mera pass words hi nhi toh tumhari praise k liye..🤗
Marvelous update dear..
Haan Pushkar aur adi was Damn funny.adi sleepy is useless...love them.. 😆
ShraMan every moment is ❤️
Last pic about date idea yr koi bhi fida ho jaye..
Anjali.. 🤗
Thnx buddy for pm..

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